FF : HORROR MYSTERIES [ PART 24 UPDATED ] - Page 14

Originally posted by: andy1245

hey dear read part 8 - 12 in one go awesome update loved it dear n the last part was really scary plzzz cont soon n plzzz pm me dear lots of love andy :-)

thnk u so much sweet heart.. I here 4 updatesconly.. Actually my device has sm prblm das y I cd nt update... So sry u ppl had 2 wait...

Originally posted by: Param_love

Hey! Smiti

lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely update dear

Lovely, nicely and beautifully written

love it to the core

Well now also seen the chudail

She's fainted hope so she's fine

keep it up

Update soon

Thanks for pm

Love

Bushra

thnx dear... C wl b fine.. Lv u...

Originally posted by: gracy27

wow I must say it was so horrible
I love horror movie and I like this updated I read it one go
I must say you are a good writer your all ff are my favorite
open the mistry ASAP

thnx... Its a huge completement... Lv u...

Originally posted by: anu_anya

awesome thrilling update yar
hope rd tell d truth abt dis lady ghost
very eagar to know wat is dat
thanks for pm
continue asap :)))

yup dear.. Its gonna reveal soon.. Thnk u...

Originally posted by: cuteparsh

darawana tha bahut

bechari sanyu😭

plz next part sooonn

thanks for pm me

lots of love

sakshi

isme bhoot ko chhpd k sab bechare hein.. Abhi tak.. Lol..

Thnk u all... really sry I cd nt rply so long as my device has sm sofware prblm... I lv u all...

Smiti

Hello all... 1st of all m really sry 4 late update.. Der was sm prblm wd my browser das y I cd nt post my cmnts... Bt ds week I will update 3 chapters... So here I go...

PART 14

Recap: sanyu faced ghost and faint. NEXT...

Sanyu was lying flat loosing her senses. Rd her voice and came running from their room. He found no one except sanyu lying on ground. He turned her flat and removed her hairs from her face. He shook her from her face but in vein. She was faint.

He quickly picked her up and took her to their room. He placed her on her on bed and called shook her again continuously taking her name. But she was still unconcious. He quickly dialled the doctor's number and called him home.

At 8pm.
Doctor arrived and checked sanyu.

D: ye ache signs nahi hai mr. shekhawat. Ye ek din me dusri bar hai.
R: pata nahi dr achanak se aise kaise. Apke kehne hisab se hi maine saare healthy food banaye the khud apne haatho se. Fir pata nahi aise kaise ho gaya.
D: acha ek baat bataiye ye behosh hui kaise.
R: wo drawing room me vasc uthhane gayi thi. Fir zor se chillayi. Jab main dekhne gaya to wo aise hi giri hui thi, behosh.
D: to fir zarur inhone kuch aisa dekha hai jiski wajah se inhe shock laga hai aur isiliye behosh ho gayi hai.
R: ye thik to ho jaayegi na dr.
D: take complete care mr. shekhawat she will be fine. Ab main chalta hun. Make sure wo medicines correct time pe le.
R: thank you doctor.

Doctor left.

Evening 9pm.
Sanyu was alone on her bed still not in sense. Suddenly the red spy came following her and reached her bed. It was none other than that lady. She screamed at sanyu and she got up with a jerk. She was still infront of her. Sanyu started shouting "aaa" and sat on bed.

Then he came into sense and found herself in rd's embrance still shouting. Everything she saw was a dream. Rd bent on his knees on bed and placing her head on his chest, caressed her hairs. She clutched his arms tightly. She was screaming, sweating, sobbing, shouting, breathing heaving. Simply she was terrified.

S(screaming): rd. Wo wo yahaan bhi aayi thi. Wo yahin khadi thi. Mujhe ghoor rahi thi.
R(soothing her): sanyu. Koi nahi hai. Relax. Main hoon sirf. Tumhare paas. Koi nahi aaya yahaan.
S(sobbing): nahi rd. Wo uski aankhen, uske.. Uske baal. Mujhe maarne aayi thi wo rd. Wo wo..

And she faint again in his arms. Rd was hell scared from her behaviour. He placed her again on sleeping position.

R(in mind): kiski baat kar rahi thi. Aankhen, baal. Kya bol rahi hai. Kanhi isne bhi to use hi nahi dekha. Oh god. Agar sach me aisa hua to. Aisa kaise hoga? Isne uska thodi kuch bigaada hai. Nahi kya soch raha hoon main ye sab.

He came out of his trance, when his phone buzzed. He picked it up and checked that it was a mms. He opened it and found a video. As he watched the video, his eyes widened and he threw his phone on bed. He moved few inched back and placed his upper hand on his open mouth. He shouted and cancelled the video picking it up in a second. He switched the phone off, gulped his saliva and leaned besides sanyu under the blanket. At the minimum temperature of ac, he was sweating heavily. The whole night he did not blink his eyelids. It was great nightmare for both of them.

Morning 6am.
He found rays of sun lightening the entire house. He gained some confidence and stood up from bed. He went to the window and opened it wide. Sunrays washed the entire room. It was a bright morning. The terror in his reduced as he gazed the fog drop on the leaves of trees. Somehow he managed to smile.

Meanwhile "ting tong", the door bell rung. He shoddered and gulped his saliva. He shiveringly went to the main door with heavy footsteps and stood infront of the door. The door bell rung again and he voiced "kak..kaun hai..?" And again it rung. He stared from the key hole and there was standing a weman. He opened the door at a sudden and there was standing Laxmi.

L(south indian hindi): aiyoo babu. Mayin. Khhaam khharane ko aayi.
And she entered the house.
R: mu..mujhe laga tum der se aati ho.
L: yenna babu. Mayin roj isi thhime pe aati. Maidam khho maalum.

She picked up the broom and started cleaning the house.

R: acha laxmi. Ek baat batao, tumne kal wo bade waale room ka door band kiya tha kya?
L: khhaisa bhhaat kar raha hai babu. Mayin thho khhal nayi aayi. Mayin khhaise khhuch khharegi.

He widened his eyes and thought for a while.

R(in mind): hey bhagwaan agar isne nahi kiya to fir kisne? Main aur sanyu to so rahe the.

His trance broke when again laxmi called.

L: aiyoo babu. Thhum chhai phhiyegi. Mayin banaa doon.
R: haan breakfast bhi banaa do. Sanyu ki tabiyat kharab hai.

L: aiyoo. Khhya hui?
R: kuch nahi bas behosh ho gayi thi. Tum jaldi se sab ready kar do main use uthhata hoon.

L: sare babu.
R: kya?
L: mathhlab wokhhey..
R: oh achha.

He went to his room again and found sanyukta still on bed. He took her in his arms and went to washroom. He switched on the shower and stood under it carrying sanyu in his arms. Gradually sanyu came into sense and was satisfied to be in his arms. She started weeping hugging him tightly and digging her head on his chest. He smiled at her innocence.

S: rd. Wo thi rd. Wo wahaan thi.
R: dekho sanyu koi nahi hai yahaan. Sirf main hun aur tum. Ye dekho artificial baarish bhi hai(and he giggled)
S: nahi rd wo.
R: dekho mujhe.
S: nahi.
R: Are dekho to. Mujhe bhi nahi dekhogi kya? Apne rd ko.

And she slowly raised her head to gaze him. She put a glance at him in teary eyes and he put her down. He wiped her tears and cupped her face.

R: main hoon na. Kuch nahi hoga.
S: par wo.
R(shook his head): rona nahi. Abse maun tumhare saath washroom bhi aaunga. Thik hai.

And he grabbed her waist pulling her closer.

They stared each other forming a cute eyelock.

To be continued...

Precap: sandhir leaving house. But wait, they cant go. Why?? Next part me..


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So guys.. This is it... Horror phase ends here.. 4m nxt part mystery phase I starts.. Dont 4get 2 cmnt...

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OMG! They are trapped in the whole house? That's so horrifying yaar! And now the precap, rd will get arrested! Why? Omg! The phase is really scary! I love your writing and this story. Thanks for pm'ing! Keep writing, continue soon, lots of love! :) <3

Amazing part...wow
Randhir arrested???
Waiting for d next...post soon