Kumkum bhagya SS Revenge

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Hi so I have been a silent reader for a while and I have read amazing stories on kumkum bhagya so I had an idea that I wanted to share with all of abhigya fans. This is my first so sorry for any mistakes.


Part 1
"Abhi" daadi called.
Everyone was at the dinner table and daadi wanted abhi to take pragya out for dinner.

"Yes daadi" replied abhi.
" take bahu out for dinner, you have both helped in Aaliyah's wedding. I think it's time you enjoyed time in peace."
"But daadi..."
"No buts, otherwise I will leave with dasi to Ludhiana"
Everyone laughed.
"Okay daadi" said abhi and both him and pragya left the house.


On way the car all of a sudden stops.
Groaning abhi comes out to check and realises the tyre is punctured.
Pragya asks what happened getting out of the car.
"This is all your fault chashmish, you were always unlucky for me but also for this car"
"What??" Pragya asked
"The tyre is punctured because of you"
"Because of me, what are you saying, are you mad?"
"Anyway I don't have time for your nonsense I need to call someone for help"

He was about to phone home for another car but he battery died.
"Damn it, this is all your fault chashmish!" He moaned.
They didn't have any choice but to walk to the main road where they could try and get a lift.
Abhi had his fingers in his ears not wanting to listen to chasmish.

There was a loud noise behind them and pragya saw a car coming at high speed. She saw abhi in the middle of the road and told him to move but he couldn't hear. She ran and pushed him out of the way but got hit instead. Abhi fell to the floor on the other side and turned round to see pragya lift off the ground and land with a thump. She was drenched in blood. The car didn't stop to help. Abhi picked her up and ran to the high road. He managed to get a lift and when he arrived at the hospital pragya was taken to the ICU. Abhi borrowed someone's phone and called home. Everyone arrived to see what had happened. They were waiting to see what the doctor had to say. Abhi just say there thinking about the whole incident. Why had pragya pushed him? Even after he had ruined her life. Tanu came over to give sympathy but he told he to go away. He remembered all the times tanu had left him in problem and how pragya had always been the one to help him. How could she be a gol digger he thought.

The doctor came out and told everyone that she had lost too much blood. Her blood group was B positive and the hospital was short of blood that day. Pragyas mum had the same blood group but her BP was low so she couldn't give blood. Tanu had the same group and abhi asked her but she refused. She said she had a shoot the next and she couldn't give blood. She didn't want to look pale. Abhi just stared at her shocked.
"How could you tanu?" He shouted. "LEAVE, NOW"
Tanu left angry. How could abhi insult her like that. Purab had arrived and said he would be willing to give blood. The doctors started the treatment again. Purabh was talking to bulbul when he said pragya di accidently. Abhi stood shocked!


The doctors came out again and said she was out of danger. Abhi ran in to talk to her...

Part 2 - page 2
Part 3- page 3
Part 4- page 4 (final part)



So that was my thought . This probably won't happen in the show but I really want purabh to say pragya di infront of everyone and see abhi and Aaliyah's face. Please comment and let me know what you thought!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its so nice but I wish aaliyas wedding didnt take place..and I am also prayin and prayin for that scene wer purab calls not not shouts Pragya di infront of abhi and his minions and I hav to watch their expressions (he needs to shout coz otherwise it LL never fall n their dead ears)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS . You have written it beautifully
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Exactly! Even I want purab to say pragya di in front of abhi.. His reaction would be amazing! Lovely os 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you for the comments I might update soon but I am not sure !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww very nice hope ekta bring like this track in KB it will be treat to watch abhi take caring of pragya

lovely os love it sorry for commenting late
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I will add part 2 soon guys !! Thanks for the positive comments !!
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Part 2 -

Abhi sat next to Pragya holding her hand thinking about all the times he tortured her and began to cry. Purab and Bulbul saw this and came in to talk to him. They asked him what the matter was and he told them everything about his and Aaliya's plan. They already knew the truth so they told him why Pragya had married him for her family and Purab though of her as a sister. Abhi sat there shocked.

He felt Pragya's hand move and she opened her eyes.

"Im sorry" said Abhi

"For what" she asked. She looked at Purab and Bulbul.

"For everything. I am such a monster, I love you Pragya I really do" he cried.

"And you thought that by saying this I will forgive you, you was the one that once said I couldn't love anyone, well now that's true". She said.

Purabh and bulbul tried to protest but pragya didnt listen. She told them all to get out.

Outside Abhi decided to talk to Aaliya. He had to stop their marriage that was taking place tomorrow. he told her everything about the misunderstanding and that she couldn't force Purab to love her.

"He isn't a puppet Aaliya, you can't force him. You will not marry him and that's final" Abhi said.

Aaliya couldnt do anything.

The next day Pragya was discharged and taken home where Abhi cared for her. Abhi cancelled Aaliya's wedding. Everyone asked why but he just said it was for the best. Abhi got Purab and Bulbul married and they went on their honeymoon while Pragya was too shocked to say anything. Abhi really was changing.




So this was part 2 it was short but i hope you liked it. please comment your thoughts below and i will update soon. Thank you!!!!!!!!
Edited by simsim25 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Do continue, excited to knw whats on ur mind :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it very much.
Tannu and Aaliyah 😈 .
Wonder what is their plan going to be.
Can't wait for your next update.
Please do update soon.

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