Veeba FF:~MIRAGE..~,Chapter-20(Last Chapter),page-62... - Page 32

veera's reaction 👏,just loved it.plz update soon

Awesome update... Loved veera's every step and her thoughts of the moments that she spent with Baldev...and when she cried...just loved that part to the core... 😭 i was crying with her...so emotional update..love u Sina di for this... 😳 plzzz update it soon...cant wait for the next update

Mind blowing... Mind boggling... Marvelous... Excellent... Stunning...Thrilling...Epic... update Sina ❤️❤️❤️❤️

I am short of words... loved it immensely.🤗🤗 I was having goosebumps while reading.

So finally Baldev is back and i am sure this time he will(you will) not allow his destiny also to separate him from his ladylove

I truly hope this time both will enjoy the reality of being together & mirage is going to vanish.😳😳

Please do continue ASAP..

feel very sad 2 c them in ditress.baldev confessed,but veera cant 4give him easiily

Hi Sina... Back to back updates👏

[Thank u friends for such overwhelming comments!😳I m truly feeln embarrassed and happy at da same tym!Thank u so much!🤗Nd smhow I feel I md a complete kachra out of dis update..🥺Sorry in advance..😭I hope I hvnt desstroyed da story,and I hope u dnt hate me too much aftr dis..But I seriously had planned sth else,and wrote up sth else altogether..😕]

Chapter-15,page-47:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111369727

CHAPTER-16.

I will cry myself till I run out of tears-

I will fight with you till I lose all my strength..

But I will also fight the world when they come between us-

And to get you back I am ready to go to any length..

Veera felt the triumph in her at her victory..She had spurned him finally..!

But as she took the next few steps,the feeling of jubilation was fast giving way to frustration and anger and hurt again..

Was she not worth enough to fight for too..?!Was she so bad as that..?!

Veera did not know why she had this irresistible urge to turn and see what the heck he was doing right then..!But somehow she forced herself not to do so,and walked forward instead..

The pain in her heart heavy now,the feeling of being stranded was drowning her once again..

She felt tears prick at the back of her eyes yet again,and that amazed her too..She had thought she had finished complete reserved stock of tears just then..!Where did so much water come from..?!And why did she have to be so silly like typical girls,and have tears at the smallest things..?!She thought angrily,as she tried her best to keep the tears at bay by holding onto her anger,which was vanishing fast too,much to her dismay..

Veera hitched in a long steadying breath and started walking faster..And in her hurry,she slipped on a tree root,and with a small yelp was falling backwards when a pair of arms caught hold of her half bent body..

Still out of breath,she stared up into the familiar dark eyes,which looked down at her,and simultaneously she tried to hold onto her anger,and also fight down the familiar electrifying thrill that was taking over her body,at his touch and proximity..

"Mr. India ki tarha gayaab hone ki saath saath tu ki Superman bhi hai..?Jo kahi bhi pauch jaata hai kabhi bhi zaroorat hone paar..?

[Besides getting invisible like Mr.India are you also Superman..?Who reaches anywhere whenever he is needed..?]"She mumbled in a mock angry voice,as she tried to raise herself..

But his hand tightened round her waist,and pulled her closer to his body still trapped in that half lying position..

Veera saw the slight curve at the corner of his lips,as he tried to hold back a smile and her heart missed a beat at that..

How long was it since she had last seen that smile,on those lips..That twinkle in those beautiful eyes..Quickly Veera tried to stop her wayward thoughts,and struggled to be free,but in vain..!

He pulled her up a bit straighter and closer to his body,and Veera tried hard to fight her betraying body's reaction to him..Thrills of sparks were running up and down her body,as she tried to keep herself steady and look into those dark limpid pools staring down into hers..

"Chalo iss bahaane hi saahi..Tune ye to maan li ki tainu mujhe Zaroorat hai..

[Even if it is in this way..You agreed that you Do need me..]"He whispered huskily,as he moved his face closer to hers..

Veera hitched in a sharp breath affected both by his husky words,and also his proximity,and went on struggling to be set free..

"Mainu tera Zaroorat bilkul bhi nai hai..!CHADHDHD MAINU!!!

[I do not need you at all..!LET GO OF ME!!!]"She hissed out,her eyes now almost brimmed to the full..

Suddenly he did just that,making her stumble a bit backwards,and quickly she turned to leave again.She did not want the embarrassing tears to come out in front of him..She did not want him to see,how MUCH he affected her even now..

How much his words and nearness turned her into a stupid emotional fool..That even though she wore this shield of anger and hatred,she was still ecstastically happy that he was back..That he still cared for her..She could not let him know her weakness..Not now..Not ever..!

And this time with determination she started moving away from him..

"Paar main to teri Zaroorat hai Veera..

[But I NEED you Veera..]"He called out softly,making her stop on mid stride..

But then she decided to ignore his words and move ahead again,when he spoke up once again..

"Haar lamha mainu teri zaroorat hai..Haar saans,haar dhadkan ki sath main tainu hi chahta hun..Aaj se ya kuch maahino se nahi..Saalon se chahta aya hun..Jaab se tu hai,taab se chahta aya hun main tujhe..

[Every while I need you..With every breath,every heart beat I yearn for you..Not from today or from months..I yearn for you from years now..From the time you ARE,I have been yearning for you..]"His husky words,pulled at her heart strings,and Veera stood still like a statue as he held back tears started rolling down her cheeks..

She closed her eyes and let them fall,his words playing again and again in her ears,in her heart,in her entire being..

Veera let his words wash over herself,not caring if he saw her pain or not..Not caring to hide behind her shield again,as she felt him moving closer to her..

Baldev walked upto her,and gently touched her shoulders,and as she let her body relax against him slightly,he felt that strong tug at his heart that nearly made him bend into half,and break apart again..

Just like he had broken down over and over again every single night,every single moment he had been away from her..

He pulled her back against his chest,his arms curving round her waist from behind so that her slim body was now completely leaning back against his chest..

"Jaab se tu hai..Taab se main chahta hun tujhe Veerakhdi..Bachpaan mein jab tu apni Veerji ki tareef karti phir ti thi,taab se..Taab se leke aaj taak,jab bhi tu kisi aur ki baarein mein zyaada tareef karti hai,to mere andaar kuch ajeeb sa hota hai..Maan karda hai ki tainu utha ke kahi duur le jaau!Kaahi chupalu tainu,saab se duur!Jaha sirf tu aur main hi honge,aur koi bhi nai..

[From the time you ARE..I want you from then Veerakhdi..In childhood,when you used to go around praising your Veerji only,from then..From then till now,whenever you praise someone too much other than me,something happens within me..I feel like carrying you away somewhere far!I want to hide you away from everyone,somewhere far!Where there will only be me and you only,and no one else..]"He whispered huskily nuzzling her hair softly from behind,as his hand round her waist tightened..

He heard her sharp inhale of breath,and suddenly he felt afraid of losing her again,and his grip tightened..

He knew he should not have left without talking to her,by just leaving a letter for her,which really did not explain why it was so urgent for him to leave..

And then all these months he was trying to come to terms with what he had done to her that night,and was hurrying to finish off his job,so that he could come back to her fast..

He knew he should have contacted her..But how could he tell her,that if he had done so,he could never have stayed strong and complete the task he had taken in hand..That he would have weakened in his love for her,and would have come running to her,again returning to being nothing..

He had taken up the job to become SOMETHING for her sake,so how could he dishearten her,and come back just like that..!

That is why he had stayed away,hurting and torturing himself,and now as it seemed also her in the process..He felt a strong twist in his hear,as something wet and warm fell on his hand..

His eyes widened at realization..Her tears!She was crying..!

Instantly he whirled her around,and looked at her beautiful brimming eyes,and wet cheeks,and the next instant he wanted howl out in pain like a wounded wolf..

He cupped her soft cheeks,and before realizing what he was doing he started kissing away her tears..

"Tu..Tu..Ro maat Veerakhdi..Mainu..Mainu maaf karde..Main kabhi bhi aise baat nai karanga..Jo tainu dard de..

[You..You..Don't you cry Veerakhdi..Please..Please forgive me..I will never again say these stuffs..That hurts you so..]"He quickly took a step back,letting go of her at the same time..

He combed his hand through his hair roughly,and looked helplessly at her tears glistening face,not sure how to stop her tears..And being torn apart inside at seeing her cry like this so..

"Thik hai..Tainu Shaadi nai karni hai na mujhse..?!Maat kaar!Par aab to rona bandh kaar de..!

[Okay..You don't want to marry me,right..?!Don't do it!But please stop crying now..!]"He pleaded in a helpless voice.

"Tainu dard hota hai to mainu bhi hota hai Veerakhdi..!Tu jo chahti hai wohi hogi..Vekh main abhi chala jata hun,thik hain..?Tu rona bandh kaar de,thik hai..?

[If you are hurt then I am hurt too Veerakhdi..!Whatever you want will happen..See I am leaving now okay..?You stop crying now,okay..?]"He breathed out in a pained voice and turned to leave,when suddenly he was pulled back and pushed against a nearby tree trunk..

He actually heard two front buttons of his sherwani suit giving away at her strong tug..

Stunned and confused he stared down at her eyes which now glinted with anger,beside being wet with tears..

"Phir se jaa raha hai tu?!Phir se-..?!

[You are again leaving?!Again-..?!]"She hissed out angrily..

Baldev opened and closed his mouth again,not knowing what to reply to that and afraid to make her start crying all over again..

But then he forgot to think or do anything at all,when suddenly she moved closer,plastering her soft body against his,and her arms snaked round his neck forcing his head down as she claimed his lips in a scorching kiss..

Chapter-17,page-52:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111533467

Its a great update, whatever you were planning to write and wrote was so good. And what letter??
Loved how he would do anything to stop her crying.

Cant wait for the next update, I assume this story is close to finishing.

Lovely update Sina ❤️

Awesome as usual Tehsina! Loved everything about the update...the way she was happy to have finally given him a taste of his own medicine yet expecting all the while he will call her back and inwardly fighting to remain strong in front of him. And Baldev ready to do anything to make her happy...both of them love each other so much. And so there has been some misunderstanding I guess, he had left a letter which obviously she did not get...and I had guessed it right he was away to prove himself worthy of her. And finally seems like happier times are ahead...can't wait for it. Please update soon.