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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Fabulous update n superb ending!!

Loved it...beautifully written!!

U r an amazing writer, ur really talented!!!!

I know I havnt commented that much but I really appreciate ur work!!

Thank u so much 4 the pm's!!!

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anuramesh26

@anuramesh26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#422

Hi sina first of all vadda vadda sorry" i just finished reading mirage after a really long time. Wonderful! Emotions very perfectly explained that the reader is sure to be left speechless at the end of each and every chapter. The pain and the pangs of seperation suffered by both veera and baldev, coupled with their own headstrong personalities at times. The part where she surrenders herself to him, a very bold step just to prove how much she loves him! Ofcourse the forum was "whenever you write the hot updates. Ooohhh all sultry! Pata nahin kitne logon ko maardala tu ne! 😉 The best out of all this was the eye-kiss! (Sala yeh faint ka emoticon kyun nahin hai) sooo sensuously described☢️ probably they could include this idea in the show like a friend here mentioned, but they wldnt!! ☺️

Superb brilliant work! Keep writing. And yes the forum is like a second home to all of us.