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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

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Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Omg sina read both updayes it was heart touching dear.i literarily cried
I loved the way u wrote veeras pov the way she cried and yearned for him poor soul.
The way u described her pain and feeling just beautiful.
I love the part were she thought she was pregnant so she could have his part.
Im just loving this.
Veera said yes cuz of her veerji but the guy tuned out to be baldeva and the way she hugged and cried i could imagine all of it her pain.
Poor soul felt so much pain cuz of baldeva and thought he used her im glad she walked away .its not easy for her to forgot what he did to her

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

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Posted: 11 years ago

#302

Best part was when she remembered all the thoes memory of baldeva .i loved woth each step she remembered him cuz for her each step was taking her away from him and she said no cuz she loves him so much.
I wish serail ke writer teri tarah soch pate with such intensity and deepness.this is just fab writing sina.
I wish serial wali veera bhi veera baldev se utna pyar karti jitni yeh veera.
This is my fav ff so far

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pearl550

@pearl550

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

WOOHOO!👏 Another awesome update

I really wanna know why baldev left her and cant wait

for them to get together again😳

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ElireEli

@ElireEli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#304

I am literally speechless Sina. This is was so awesome. Seriously this story is such a treat where there is not even a single chapter which you feel is a bit less awesome than the others...you have marvelously handled the story making it a stunning experience for the readers. Hats off to you!

The way you described how the sweet memories of Baldev kept haunting Veera with each step towards her future husband was amazingly written and I could literally visualize the scene. And Veera's reaction was totally justified...though I think Baldev had a solid reason for staying away from her...but still from her point of view she is right...the pain she has faced for the past three months cannot so easily fade away... he had left her when she had completely surrendered herself to him so she needs to be reassured that he will not betray her again. Loved loved it to the core. Loved it so much that I have not used a single emo in this entire comment.Can't wait for the next part.

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AMbili

@..crazy_doll..

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#305

unressed chappy 14 comment😆😛

am so sorry for late comment my hectic schedule ne meri azadi cheen li😭😭

today is my Independence day so finally back to reading stories😆

so suprb👏👏my tissue box ab tak ada khali ho gayi😭

feeling so sad for veeraballu ko aisa nahi karni chahiye thi

her emotions and hearts ain was suprbly expressed ..for me it was like watching it visualy😔😭

for her veerji she is going to marry other guys...😲kaash munda ballu hoti😳😆...

.That even after his betrayal she had wished and yearned and literally begged God that she became pregnant.

while reading this i was litrally crying like hell and whole family was looking at me confused😆

really it shows how much she love him and how much she want be with him..😊😊

here am loving ranvi so much..sachi anokhi ma😉

wohooo now hope is risiing in me forest by god ballu forest😆😆😉

shadow ??now who is this shadow..😲😲😲

suprb update...😳

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AMbili

@..crazy_doll..

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#306

res😉unressed

again so sorry for late commending😆

suprb writting..it was a sheer treat to me...every step in veera's life ...there was ballu and his thoughts😊😊every emotion were fab...the way she thought about moments she spend with him😃😃and finally groom is ballu😳😳...awww ranvi how sweet of him😳..knowing his veera's heart he brought her love for her...

veera's decision is right her place😊😊..she has taken right descion..this story is getting intresting more and more😉

updtae soon😃

Edited by ..crazy_doll.. - 11 years ago

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PotterHeadAMP

@PotterHeadAMP

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#307

Oh my god, this is sooo sad!!! I feel like bawling my eyes out!! 😭 Why, why is this happening to poor Baldev and Veera! But as always thanks for the PM and great update Sina.