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Khan Sadaf

@_Sadaf_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: AMMY12
nice one.
Superb end.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

You never miss commenting on any of my work!!

Thanks girl! 😳

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Khan Sadaf

@_Sadaf_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti
one of the most beautiful piece of work i have read!!!
awesome writing!👏

That was a huge compliment. Thanks a lot! 😳

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Khan Sadaf

@_Sadaf_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: shabana20
This TS was tooo Beautifull...
I loved the concept & every part to it.. Zoya went through a lot but destiny was on their(Asya) side!!..
Thanks for the pm...

Thank you so much man! Glad you loved it! 😊

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

hayye..

i just got time to read this one bestyyy...

pata hai still im smiling like a idiot and I was wishing in my heart please please please don't end it...hehehehe...

ab kiya bataun tumhe is part ke baare main bestyyy...

AsYa meeting again was superbbb...

the way u describe Zoya life after she left with her abbu... omg really how can anyone be so cruel...

it was zoya luck that she met her friend... and he helps her :)

AsYa romance... Hayye...

I m blushing hehehhe...

as i keep reading na... I felt I was seeing it infront of my eyes and i felt butterflies in my stomach hehehe...

How can u could write so reality bestyyy... hattss off to u darlinggg :* muwaahhh love u loadsss for this cute cute fun hot and loving parttt...

i m so so sooo happy u post it :D

i know i m super duper late ... but maine isse teen baar padke comment kar rahi hoon hehehhe...

still im feeling to read it hehehe...

just love u for this... by the way i always love u okkk ehehehe ;)

take care...

do write more os like this :D

please pleaseee :D

takecare...love u -

Your partner :D

Edited by RihooHaws - 12 years ago

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

What a beautiful last part👍🏼

I was in a Asya daze after reading this...

This was sweet and romantic...

PS: Sorry for the late comment...

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Awesome update :)

I'm the girl was Zoya

I feel bad for the things her step mum and half sister did to her

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Preeti sharma

@kanchan23

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

WOW...👏
very nice story...
both part is awesome...👍🏼
you surely a awesome, mindblowing,wonderful writer...❤️
tumne dono ke emotions ko

bahut ache ke dikhaya...

first part me toh main ro hi gae thi...😭

but second part main compensate ho gaya...

and asya romance...❤️

Thanks for sharing this mindblowing story with us...🤗