Without You?- An AsYa OS. Last updt-Pg 9. - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: AMMY12

nice one.
Superb end.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.


You never miss commenting on any of my work!!
Thanks girl! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

one of the most beautiful piece of work i have read!!!

awesome writing!👏


That was a huge compliment. Thanks a lot! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: shabana20

This TS was tooo Beautifull...

I loved the concept & every part to it.. Zoya went through a lot but destiny was on their(Asya) side!!..
Thanks for the pm...


Thank you so much man! Glad you loved it! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
hayye..
i just got time to read this one bestyyy...
pata hai still im smiling like a idiot and I was wishing in my heart please please please don't end it...hehehehe...

ab kiya bataun tumhe is part ke baare main bestyyy...
AsYa meeting again was superbbb...
the way u describe Zoya life after she left with her abbu... omg really how can anyone be so cruel...
it was zoya luck that she met her friend... and he helps her :)

AsYa romance... Hayye...
I m blushing hehehhe...
as i keep reading na... I felt I was seeing it infront of my eyes and i felt butterflies in my stomach hehehe...
How can u could write so reality bestyyy... hattss off to u darlinggg :* muwaahhh love u loadsss for this cute cute fun hot and loving parttt...
i m so so sooo happy u post it :D
i know i m super duper late ... but maine isse teen baar padke comment kar rahi hoon hehehhe...

still im feeling to read it hehehe...
just love u for this... by the way i always love u okkk ehehehe ;)
take care...
do write more os like this :D
please pleaseee :D
takecare...love u -


Your partner :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
What a beautiful last part👍🏼
I was in a Asya daze after reading this...
This was sweet and romantic...
PS: Sorry for the late comment...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Awesome update :)
I'm the girl was Zoya
I feel bad for the things her step mum and half sister did to her

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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
WOW...👏
very nice story...
both part is awesome...👍🏼
you surely a awesome, mindblowing,wonderful writer...❤️
tumne dono ke emotions ko

bahut ache ke dikhaya...

first part me toh main ro hi gae thi...😭

but second part main compensate ho gaya...

and asya romance...❤️


Thanks for sharing this mindblowing story with us...🤗

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