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Mishti

@MayurnASYA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

wow...excellent

very well written...

its heart touching...felt very bad for asad...my bechara..😭

plz pretty plz conti soon

and pm me

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

i'm quite shocked to see u writing something wthout a hppy ending sweetu-pie..
well.. i won't say to cont. but if u cont. this OS i'll be happy as i love all of ur writing..
u knw ds ri8?
nd about this OS.. should i need to tell u dat i alwaz prefer realistic stories..
well.. i knw its not a hppy OS but life is like this only..
we get wat we nvr wished in reality but we hve to accpt n live..
realistic thought written perfectly..
good job sweetu-pie...

tke care..
love u..
-ur di..

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prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Awsome part... it was an emotional bt lovely OS where Assad & zoya both love each oder bt dint confess it to each oder bt fate separated dem... i hope u update d nxt part soon & dat too wid a happy ending waiting...

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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

What the... Its hell amezing. Cnt soon plz

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Sohini Dasgupta

@.SoHu.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

This was simply amazing sadaf 👏
How i wish it never ended..so very glad it has a second part or else i would have actually asked you to write a continuation.. 😳
This was just beautiful :')
Please do continue soon 😳 cause cant wait for the next part😃
Thanks for the pm.. 😊 🤗

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happygolucky234

@happygolucky234

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

I would love to read a happy ending for this one. Plz update part 2

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Aliena

@BlessedSoul

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Bestttiee. it was awesome. So proud of you, you are growing day by day as writter. Well done sisiy. It was amazing, intense, lovely and cute. Would love to read more.