kuchh is tarah mile hum..FINISHED...sk ff

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~''kuchh is tarah mile hum''~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

this is my 1st ever ff...thnx ti u all guys whose ffi hv read n got inspired.its a SK fic,my fav jodi ever.i love their chemistry on-screen
here it goes....

PART-1
its small house but b'ful.we see a black honda civic stop in front of this house with a screech....then we see a handsome guy wearing black
tuxedo suite [yes he is our hero SUJAL GAREWAL.young,dynamic,dashing,charming,full of attitude n has got 'young achiever of the year' award.owns garewal industries.has studied business managment frm UK]stepping out from driver's seat

then we see a middle aged but handsome man out from the car from passanger's seat[he is chetan garewal
founder of garewal industries.good at heart but thinks that he is the only rich person alive,luvs his family but not more than his business.due to this there r always altercations between him n sujal.]

from back seat comes out a middle aged lady short but plum n sweet.[veena garewal,mother of sujal garewal.she is the only reason that sujal talk to his dad.he loves his mom a lot n veena also understands him.sujal can nvr hide his feelings from her]

from the other side comes mehek[she is just 20,very chulbuli,loving.sujal n veena pamper her a lot.sujal ki to jaise wo ladli hai.sujal cant see tears in his sis's eyes.watever mehek wants,sujal gives him almost immidiately]

we see garewal family heading towards the house...seeing the house chetan murmuring:-
cg:veena yeh kahan le aayi ho....yeh to koi middle class family lagti hai...ghar to dekhokitna chhota hai....hum yahan.....(veena cuts in between)
v:main sujal ki pasand sirf daulat aur shauharat ki wajah se thukrana nahi chahati.aur main aisa kisi ko karne bhi nahi dungi....(b4 veena cud say more....there's a voice...

v:arrey garewal saab....chaliye andar chaliye...[he is krishnakant sinha.works as assistant director in garewal industries]..he greets everyone and sees sujal wid love....aao beta andar aao..
every one goes inside house...we see a drawing room,very b'ful.the table is laid with every kind of sweet n snack....then krishnakant sinha calls someone n a girl comes running....

g:haanji papa....
ks:(to everyone else)yeh meri chhoti beti charu hai....charu jao zara kashish ko bula lao...(charu is 21 yrs old,completed studies,good looking,loving n very sweet....she loves chatting on net]
c:ji papa abhi le aati hoon...glances at sujal n smiles...
she goes n aftr 2 min comes wid a vry b'ful girl..

c:aao di...papa kashish di...[she is KASHISH SINHA.female lead of my fic.very b'ful,fair,n looking gorgeous.she is wearing red
colored georgette kurta with antique gold color parallel.kurta had small work and long earrings wid red coloured stone]
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ok readers this ws the 1st part n intro of my fic..
few more important character coming in next 2 or 3 part.then fic will take a fast track.its not a long fic..nd i will rugularly update it coz i dnt like incomplete fics....
do comment....bye...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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read the first part and i liked it very much 👏 and after reading this wanna read more so keep continuing 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice intro.... 👏 ...plzz continue soon ...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😭 hey guys do u also face the 'cookie problem' while logging in or ots just me....wts the solution fr this?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey the starting was really good 😉 . continue soon. will be waiting for next part. 😊 😛 😊
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PART-2
ks:aao kashish beta,yahan betho...he directs her to sit nxt to sujal.she goes n sits there.her eyes r trained to ground....
v:badi hi pyaari bachi hai aapki bhaisaab,naam bhi utna hi pyara hai....humein sujal ki pasand bahut pasand hai...
m:arrey ma bhai to chhupe rustam nikle....nd giggles...sujal gives her an angry bt loving stare....
ks:arre kashish jao sujal ko garden dikha aao..
kashish stands frm her seat nd waits fr sujal to get up.....sujal gets up n kashish escorts him to garden....sujal is mesmerised by her simple
looks.strands of her hair which she was tucking behind her ear time n again.....he was smitten by her innocense...again...he fell in love with her again...
they reach garden n sits on the chairs kept there...
k:ji baithiye
sujal still staring her n is lost in her....kashis says again....sujal comes into his senses...
s:ummm...errr....haan...n sits down...
k:aapko sorry kehna tha...us din ke liye,mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap mere papa ke boss hain...i m so sorry fr that day....
s:its ok...
kashish now raise her eyes for saying something sujal noticed she had brown colored deep intense and beautiful eyes....they for the 1st time had an eye contact...sujal
seemed to be drowning in them.
k:aapse 1 baat kehni thi...
s:kaho..
k:main.....main...yeh shaadi nahi kar sakti....
sujal tries to understand that kashish really mean it,yes she did........he got a tear at the corner of eye
sujal is completely shattered...he nvr xpected that life will be heaven wen he saw kashish fr d 1st time ......aur yeh to kabhi bhi nahi socha tha ki yeh khushi milne se pehle hi chheen jayegi.....it ws like
someone had stabbed hard in his heart....the pain ws unbearable......
s:kya....tumhein mujhse shaadi nahi karni....puchh sakta hoon kyu....???(anger nd sadness cud be seen on his face n eyes.....)
k:wo...wo..main kisi aur ko pasand karti hoon....aur usi se shaadi karna chahati hoon.....kashish has got tears in her eyes...
s:tum kisi aur se......
k:...silently...nods in yes.....haan..
those eyes...same brown,intense eyes were full of tears now....sujal cudnt see them like this.......he didnt knew wat to do...his own eyes were full of tears nd didnt want then to show to anyone.....not even to kashish....1st love of his life.....he loved her for those 6 days...he dreamt of her,imagined her everywhr......and now.....he cud see his broken heart,felt pain and ws completely broken.....he began to leave n turned around....but.....
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thnx fr ur valuable comments n suggestions frenz......continue reading....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice part... 👏 👏 👏 ...i hope she is just teasing him
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part 👏 but what is kashish saying 😲 i wish she is just joking nothing else 😭
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PART-3
....but....kashish had more to say.....few more shocks were yet to come...
k:plzzzz.....suniye.....
sujal stopped,he still has his back towards kashish....
k:main janti hoon aap mujhse nafrat karne lage honge....lekin fir bhi main aapse 1 request karna chahati hoon.......plzzz....(sujal still has his back...) aap...aap is shaadi se inkaar kar dijiye....plzzz.....warna mere papa zabardasti meri shaadi aapse kara denge...aur main uske bina nahi reh sakti...plzzzz.....yeh baat maan lijiye....
sujal nods in yes n leaves....without even looking at kashish....kashish is so much confused at sujal's strange behaviour.....but is kind of happy that now she will get the love of her life.....inside...mr sinha is serving to garewal family then sujal comes inside.......alone.....mr sinha looking at sujal's xpressions is perplexed as to wat happened in the garden.....sujal calms himself down...and with all remaining courage.....he says....
s:chaliye mumma..........main yahan shaadi nahi karna chahata hoon......
v:lekin beta.....(and she stops in between seeing the mayus face of sujal)....
ks:kya hua sujal beta......kashish ne tumse kuchh kaha(with stern voice)
s:...nahi uncle....main ye shaadi nahi karna chahata....
kashish has also come inside till now n she listened to all the talks.....she is happy that sujal helped her out....
cg:..(in some wat happy tone)...haan haan....chalo beta....main to waise bhi is shaadi ke khilaaf tha....chalo sujal....

and all of them leave....cg n sujal goes away immidiately.....followed by mehek(shocked due to sudden sequence of events....)..and veen comes to the door then turns n look at kashish with hopeful eyes.....kashish n veena had an eye contact for a second but kashish suddenly looked down......destroying every hope .......n veena left....with tears in her eyes.....she was so much happy for his son...but....fate had something else in store for sujal...she went away n sat in the car...........the journey back home was silent n killing....no one uttered a single word except cg who was unusually contended at watever happened......

cg:achha hi hua sujal tumhe sahi waqt par akal aa gayi....tumne shaadi se mana kar bahut sahi kiya.....
but sujal didnt answered him back......they reach home n sujal went to his room....he sat on the bed with head in his hands nd cried...kyu kashish...kyu...kyu kiya tumne mere saath aisa......maine tumse kitna pyaar kiya.....tumhe khud se zyada chaha....lekin.....lekin tumne......akhir...
akhir kyu kashish.....???he cries for few more minutes....nd then hears a knock on door.....sujal knew who was at door....
s:wiping his tears....aa jaaiye mumma.....
v:kya hua beta.....tumne shaadi se inkaar kyu kardiya?
sujal is still sitting wid his head in his hands but has composed himself so that he doesnt cries in front og veena.....
v:kuchh to bata beta.......ab tu mujhse baatein chhupayega....??..apni maa se bhala kuchh chhupa hai.....batayega to tera dil bhi halka ho jayega.....now he hugs veena and cries like nething.....in between he also gave the reason.....
s:.....maa...maa wo ..kashish ne...mujhse...maa mujhse shaadi ke liye....mana kiya maa.....wo...wo...kisi sur se...pyaar karti hai.....usne kaha...ki..ki
wo mujhse shaadi nahi kar sakti.......aisa usne kyu kiya maa.....sujal...sujal garewal jispar ladkiyaan jaan deti hain,usne us sujal ko shaadi ke liye mana kardiya.....maine us se pyaar kiya hai maa......
veena is very disturbed n shockd listening to all this.....not b'coz kashish said no....but abt sujal's attitude......the way he took the whole situation....
he was sad not b'coz kashish said no but b'coz kashish had said no coz od sumone else...............
veena tried to calm him down....she wiped his tears n made him sit on the bed.....then she asked...
v:sujal......mujhe tumse yeh puchhte huye thoda dukh ho raha hai .........lekin fir bhi main tumse pucchungi........tumein,sujal garewal ko kis baat ka dukh hai???.....tumne apna pehla pyaar khoya ya fir......sujal .....sujal garewal ke ego ko thes pahunchi.....batao sujal.....
sujal is standing their silent and analysing the question askd by veena.....he understood wat veena meant how true she was.........but veena left
b'coz she knew the answer......sujal goes and stands by the window........
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end of part 3...waiting for comments....
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gr8 update 👏 👏 but how kashish can do this to sujal 😕 and who is that guy 🤢 whom kashish luvs i just hate him 😡 😡 well lets see what happens next keep posting 😊

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