kuchh is tarah mile hum..FINISHED...sk ff - Page 5

hey great part............i am so sorry for sujal 😭

thnx readers for liking my fic... 😊

i m posting nxt part in few mins...!

PART-10
KS:nahi karna chahati......(with anger in his tone)....ye kya keh rahi kashish tu....sujal....sujal garewal ne tujhe pasand kiya......aur tu us se shaadi nahi karna chahati......kyu??...
(Kashish is silent all the time......eyes trained to ground , she cant face her dad.....mr sinha is constantly shouting n scolding her...)....akhir baat kya hai...kyu tu shaadi se inkaar kar rahi hai......???
kashish ab poori himmat jutati hai aur kehti hai....
k:wo....wo...papa....wo main kisi aur ko chahati hoon......
ks:kisi aur ko.....maine tumhe aise sanskaar to nahi diye the kashish...kaun hai wo ladka....
k:papa...wo rishi se....

now mr sinha has reached epitome of anger......he is going to slap kashish but stops in middle thinking something......kashish is all crying.....mr sinha screams in full volume....

ks:US RISHI SE TUMHARI SHAADI KABHI NAHI HOGI......WO 1 BADTAMEEZ AUR DOKHEBAAZ LADKA HAI......MAIN JANTEBUJHTE TUMHE MAUT NAHI DE SAKTA KASHISH.....TUM PACHHTAOGI KASHISH.....BOHOT PACHHTAOGI......WO TUMHE DOKHE AUR DUKH KE SIVA KUCHH NAHI DEGA.......

screaming this he goes into his room....while kashish remained standing there....crying....and crying.....after some time she gets up and goes to her room......

its new day now......mr sinha is reading newspaper when kashish comes down with cup of tea.....

k:papa...(offers him the cup)....papa rishi aisa nahi hai....jaisa aap sochte hain.....aap us se 1 baar mil to lijiye.........
ks:ready rehna kashish.....sujal apni family ke saath 11 baje ke aaspaas aayega......aur mujhe kuchh nahi sun na.....!!!!

he gets up from there without taking the tea......and goes to his room.....kashish is again left there crying.....and broken.....then charu comes...

c:kashish di aap theek to hain.....
k:haan charu main theek hoon....tum jao tayyar ho jao....!!!

its new day for sujal also....he gets up early and awakes mehek and veena also.......tells them to get ready.....they both are happy for this good change in sujal....

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sujal had a sweet smile thinking this......then he remembers kashish 's denial......aur wo fir toot jata hai........lekin is baar use apni mumma ke kahe shabd yaad aate hain....

''sujal......mujhe tumse yeh puchhte huye thoda dukh ho raha hai .........lekin fir bhi main tumse pucchungi........tumein,sujal garewal ko kis baat ka dukh hai???.....tumne apna pehla pyaar khoya ya fir......sujal .....sujal garewal ke ego ko thes pahunchi.....batao sujal.....''

ab sujal ko samajh aati hai ki kyu veena ne baar baar kaha tha ki pehle kashish se baat karlo....aur ye bhi ki sujal ne kashish se pyaar kiya tha....sacha pyaar......aur sacha pyaar to sacrifice ka hi dusra naam hai......now he understood uska dil dukhi tha lekin uska aham(ego) zyada hurt hua tha.....aur wo apne pyaar ko 1 dukh ke saath nahi jod sakta tha.....isliye usne pyaar ko pyaar ki tarah dekhna shuru kiya....1 ego problem ki tarah nahi....fir bhi use dukh to mila tha...
he is walking on the khali road......thinking abt kashish...
(song time)
mohabbat meri jo pyaasi hui,
to gehri meri udaasi hui,
zindagi...zindagi mein hai tum bin ye veeraniyaan...
ye veeraniyaan..

sune sune saare raste hain.
suni manzil hain hai jaana
suni suni si meri aankhen
suna yeh dil hai jaana...
jaana janaa....
mujhe ghere hain sirf tanhaiyaan
mere dil mein sirf hai khamoshiyaan
zindagi...zindagi mein hai tumbin ye veeraniyaan...
ye veeraniyaan..

saans jab lu to seene mein jaise
saans chubti hai jaana
dil mein umeed ki 1 jaise
phaans chubti hai jaana
jaana...jaanaa...
khwab ab saare tutne hi ko hain
tinke bhi haath se chhutne hi ko hain...
zindagi...zindagi mein hai tumbin ye veeraniyaan...
ye veeraniyaan..

he reaches home n sees veena waiting for him....its too late in night....he dont answer n walks to his room......

while life at kashish's end is quiet happy....her problem solved(for the moment),as sujal said no to marriage...

k:tum jab zid karte ho to bohot cute lagte ho....
rishi:achha....ummmm to tum is cute se rishi ko kiss nahi dogi....
k(sharma ke):...tum bohot badmaash ho.....chalo ab mujhe jaana hai.....der ho gayi to papa aur naraaz ho jayenge....
r:papa ki chinta hai....meri nahi....
k:rishi(in a very serious tone) .....rishi tum papa se kab miloge.....
r(in mind......yeh to pichhe hi pad gayi hai):mil loonga kashish , mil loonga .....ab tumhe der nahi ho rahi......
kashish smiles and leaves....when rishi holds her hand aur use apni taraf kheenchta hai.....and kisses her cheek....kashish then waves out to rishi and comes home...
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end of this part......comments awaited...

gr8 part but sujal ko kitna dard hua hoga aur yeh rishi 🤢 i m sure yeh kashish ko dhoka de raha hai 😡 but jab kashish ne sujal ka dil toda to use ka bhi yehi haal hoga jab use rishi ki asliyat pata chalegi 😕 use pachtava hoga ki usne apne papa ki baat kyun nahin maani aur sujal ko na kyun kaha 😭 😭 😭 well keep posting 😊

yuckyy.............chee rishi............. 🤢

mere sujal ko naa bola and wo bhi rishi ke liye...

i agree with kashish's dad's words........tum bahut pachtaogi kashish....

nice part!!
continue soon dear!!!


luv,
vandu 😉

heyyy i m ur new reader.... the story sounds great...lzzzzzz cont..soon....and this rishi!!i hate him.....sujal ko hoda kash ne!! 😕

cont.sson
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Originally posted by: captain_kia

gr8 part but sujal ko kitna dard hua hoga aur yeh rishi 🤢 i m sure yeh kashish ko dhoka de raha hai 😡 but jab kashish ne sujal ka dil toda to use ka bhi yehi haal hoga jab use rishi ki asliyat pata chalegi 😕 use pachtava hoga ki usne apne papa ki baat kyun nahin maani aur sujal ko na kyun kaha 😭 😭 😭 well keep posting 😊

thnx dear....keep up with the updates to know more...!!

and thnx for commenting regularly...ur comments seriously help to write more n good...

Originally posted by: togepe30

yuckyy.............chee rishi............. 🤢

mere sujal ko naa bola and wo bhi rishi ke liye...

i agree with kashish's dad's words........tum bahut pachtaogi kashish....

nice part!!
continue soon dear!!!


luv,
vandu 😉

thnx vandu for such a nice commment.....u will get to see happy sujal soon...!!

your replies keep me going.....thnx , 😃

Originally posted by: dhvanisoni

heyyy i m ur new reader.... the story sounds great...lzzzzzz cont..soon....and this rishi!!i hate him.....sujal ko hoda kash ne!! 😕

cont.sson
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thnx dhwani for ur amazing response....

keep commenting.....ur comments n suggestions are always welcomed!!

thnx....

thnx captain_kia,vandu n dhwani fr ur comments...keep replying to updates...and to all the other readers plzz reply...this helps writer to write more efficiently

PART-11
next few days....

garewal industries....
there is some level of uncomfortablity between sujal and mr sinha.....inspite of the fact that mr sinha apologised to sujal many no of times but sujal has startd avoiding sinha as he remembers the whole episode whenever he sees him....shayad mr sinha bhi yeh jaante the isliye wo bhi uske saamne nahi jaate the....but it never affected their work though......

sujal now , spent his time in office now he has become a hard core workholic now.....whole day work work and work.......reaches home late.....is packed in his cabin.....do not attends any parties......cg was very happy seeing sujal working like this.....company was in profit......but veena was very disturbed so she confronted sujal 1 evening.....

v:sujal...mujhe tumse zaroori baat karni hai...
s:maa main bohot thak gaya hoon....
v:sujal idhar aao....(so now sujal has no options.....he goes towards veena and sits besides her...)...tumne kya haalat banayi hai apni.....kya socha hai puri zindagi bas kashish ke gham mein hi nikal doge...???aage badho sujal....zindagi aage badhne ka naam hai.....kisi 1 ki wajah se hum jeena to nahi chhod dete......tumhara pehla pyaar hai sujal janti hoon.....lekin main tumhein aise nahi dekh sakti.....kuchh socho apne baare mein....humare baare mein.....nahi to...nahi to...main tumhari shaadi kara doongi.......

sujal doesnt utters a single word and leaves for his room.....again he is standing near the window......its dark outside....lekin chand ki roshni ki wajah se sab kuchh jagmaga raha tha.......the nite was romantic n b'ful......he cud imagine kashish in that b'ful night.....lekin use kashish ko bhulana hi hoga...apne liye nahi to mumma aur mehek ke liye.....jinse wo pyaar karta hai....kasish ko bhulna uske liye aasaan to nahi hoga.....lekin use aisa karna hi hoga.........kashish ko bhulna hi hoga.....aur woh ye kaam yahan rehkar nahi kar sakta tha.....yahan ki har cheez mein kashish basi thi....
ab usne kuchh faisla kar liya tha.......galat ya sahi.....lekin usne faisla kar liya tha.....

nxt day:-
its morning and sujal is all ready to do the aarti with his mom.....he reaches near mandir and stands besides veena........veena sees n smiles at sujal.... aarti is done...he reads newspaper.....then goes to mehek's room.......has some idea in his mind........opens mehek's room's door......puts a plastic big lizard near mehek's face n screams......

s:MMMMEEEEHEEEEKKKKKKK......(mehek gets up with a start)...
m:kya......kya hua bhaiyya.....
s:wo...wo....(points towards chhipkali)
now mehek is completely terrified....she screams at top of her voice........and sujal laughs....
s:dar gayi....ha ha ah ah ahahahahahahahah!!!
mehek loves to see his bhaiyya back....she goes n gives him a tight hug......
m:bhaiyya....aap aise hi achhe lagte hain...aur pata wo archie hai na mere coll mein.....usne to aapke naam ki maala japni shuru kar di....lekin maine to use keh diya....mere bhaiyya tujh jaisi ladki se shaadi nahi karenge....wo jab shaadi karenge to wo ladki itni khubsurat hogi ki sab dekhte reh jayenge.....tujhse nahi....!!!
s:chal ab neeche aaja , tujhe coll chhod dunga....

its breakfast...everyone is having break fast and leaves for their daily cores!!

while we see kashish is still happy and convincing rishi to meet her father.....on the other hand rishi is just trying to be physical with her...
sujal is in office and talking to someone over phone......its the same person(his dear friend)

s:tera kaam kaisa chal raha hai....tu wapis kyu nahi aaya.....
person:wo yaar business yahi set ho gaya.....to time hi nahi mila aane ka.....tu bata tera pyaar kaisa hai...
s:achha sun mujhe bhi na newyork mein kaam hai to i will be there in nxt few days....kuchh zaroori kaam hai...(avoids the question)
person:tujhe ab mere paas aane ke liye permission ki zaroorat hai....ohye soniye.....kabhi bhi aaja....apne yaar ke paas....
s:thnx AKSHAT...(yeah yeah the person is none other than akshat)
a:chal saale mujhe thnx kahega....!!!
and they talk for few more mts and sujal keeps down the phone....!!!
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end of this part.....wats on sujal's mind lets c in coming parts....i love to read your comments....