Cleopatra (ZaYa FF) chap 1 is up..!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello people..!!! here i'm with another story .. if any concept bug bites me i can't resist myself from write a fic.. i'm waring you right in the beginning i'm not at all good at writing fic..So Please Be Patient while you reading this fic... this one is going to be a adventurous horror( thriller)action fic ..(if every thing shapes up well..)..sounds weird right?? just like me ..!!! i have always been an phan girl of action,horror and adventure ..so you can expect lots of such stuff in this fic..!!

AUTHOR'S NOTE:
The names,places,people,things,themes,sequences and situations ..everything used in the story are purely friction ..resemblance to any kind of reel or real things is just purely coincidence..and yes the continuation of my story will totally depends on the number of comments i get ..well i'm not going give any sort of character sketch for the story..so i gonna start this with an prologue.. I never do proof-readings.So pls kindly ignore the Typos.. the prologue is in the next post ..hope you guys will have an great time reading my fic..!!😳😳
Happi reading..!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PROLOGUE:

"The ..one ..Who..Disturbs ..the..sleep..of ..chest ..shall...taste ..the.. heat ..of ..earth ang.."


before she could complete her words ..the earth started tumbling as it does before an earthquake..Both of em looked at each other.
"Oh my ..daffy this chest os cursed..!!"

"i don't like pointing finger ..but weren't you the one who was suppose to read the inscription before opening the chest??"
"So what do you it's my fault ??"she crossed her arm against her chest
"hm..observantly..it's your..!!"
"Mine..okay fine i didn't read but what about you ??can't you read the inscription or at least suggest me to read it ???"she stroked her eyebrow up
"Don't you remember ancient Egyptian isn't my fonte ..!!"
"oh .t."before she could complete it the earth tumbled again this time with more power ..thats she was about to fall when he caught her "Bugs..Can we postponed this fight for few hours???"she nodded
On the other side of the temple the earth started breaking into two equal half..with a organe-ish red colour substance call "Lava" was flowing out ..slowly and steady the lava was spreading into the whole temple..leave no room unburnt ..it had no other aim apart from turn everything into ashes..the lava had cover the 3/4 area by now..it reached the place these two were fighting ..both of them as usually got scary due to the general metabolism designed in humans..both ran in all the possible direction ..but it was of no use..as they were caught by lava in each direction they ran ..at least they were left with no place to run ..lava covering em from all the sides..they both hugged each other in fear of losing each other..and the lava started inching toward em..
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Okies i'm done with the prologue ...And I know It must had been too hard for all of you to read My Crap .I'll continue this only If I get a good response.So Do tell me your views.so how that?? acha tha ya bura tha ya worst? ..let me know if u want me to write it further or not...please do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...criticism and suggestions are most welcomed
Love'
Renu

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Adventorous horror? sounds coooll
waiting for the prolouge !!!!!!!

and dont forget to pm me :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres
*holding danda in hand*
kya kaha tune? ur not good at writing?
next time u say that, i'll break ur head with this*pointing at the danda*!
this super duper interesting
lekin yeh shuru kiya hai.. iska matlab yeh nahi ki u'll stop IPBT!
if u don't continue that, i'll not read this!*crosses arm against chest*
aur mujhe PM karke meri inbox fill karne ki zaroorath nahi hai!
i'll keep track of my pyaari BR's CP
Edited by vinu127 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhya99

Adventorous horror? sounds coooll

waiting for the prolouge !!!!!!!

and dont forget to pm me :)

The prologue is up..!!!😃😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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my comment has been unresed :P ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
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Sahi kaha Vinu...kisney kaha Tumhe story likhna nahi aata...!!
I like this...!!ZaYa fighting in Life and death situation...!!
Vaise where are they...?
Continue soon MM...!!Waiting..Waiting!!
👍🏼👍🏼
Edited by Tit_For_Tat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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prologue is confusing and intersting too.can't wait for first part.update soon.but when u'll be update u'r other ZaYa ff.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arey who said you are not good writer 😲
U write so well yaar 👏
Horrow + Adventurous wohooo bilkul hsttke concept 👍🏼
Plz Update 1st Part soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinu127

res

unres
*holding danda in hand*
kya kaha tune? ur not good at writing?
next time u say that, i'll break ur head with this*pointing at the danda*!
this super duper interesting
lekin yeh shuru kiya hai.. iska matlab yeh nahi ki u'll stop IPBT!
if u don't continue that, i'll not read this!*crosses arm against chest*
aur mujhe PM karke meri inbox fill karne ki zaroorath nahi hai!
i'll keep track of my pyaari BR's CP

*getting hell scared*

Woo..TR.. i thought i was not a good writer ..!!*fear sounding every word*😆😆

Thank you ..!!

ji madam ji*giving an mock salute*

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