SS- Rishtey dilon ke!! PT 12-PG 27 UPDATED!!

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Part 1 pg 1

part 2 - Pg 2
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4054912&TPN=2&#p108171066

Part 3 - Pg 4
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Part 4 - Page 6

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Part 5 - Page 7
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Part 6 - Page 9

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Part 7 - Page 13

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Part 8 - page 15


Part 9- Page 18

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4054912&TPN=18




Part 12 - Pg 27







Prologue


Its all lonely late in the evening ... looking at the sun sets... Ishita, Raman, and Romi standing near the window ...
Romi: Yeh kya hogaya babhi ... Meinne yeh kabhi nahi shocha ki amma is terah... aur woh bhi mere kaaran se... and falls on his feet looking the sun...sab kuich khatm ho gaya bhabhi...sab kuch ... Mere awaraapan ne mujhe kaha lake khada kardiyaa babhi...mujhe maaf kardijiye ...

(Romi repenting and cursing himself for what has happened to ammaa. Bhabhi how do i live with this guilt..the fire of my age took me to that place and left from where theres no return...Bhabhi ... what do i do...I treat you more than my mother... Bhai what ever the discipline and values you gave me i didnt follow ...and i overlooked on all the values and broke the principles of life... Bhai...pls forgive me ...)

Just then he feels a hand on his shoulder...turns and in shock he stands up... Its Ishita..

Romi, why are you upset... I know in your fit of rage to take revenge from mihir you did it which was wrong...now you know that you are wrong ...and ammas accident ... you are not responsible for someone else's actions ... initially I misunderstood you. AM sorry Romi...

Just then Doc comes out... everyone stood and are in super tensed mode...to hear the Doc...

- Continued in part 1


If you wanna know who is the reason behind ammas accident in my write up and


Dear friends its my first trail on YHM story line... will update it soon...pls hit like button ..will keep u all posted about the updates through PM...<

Shakti...





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Posted: 11 years ago
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Baby .. I loved it ..
Please do PM me ...
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Originally posted by: Dhwaniiam

Baby .. I loved it ..
Please do PM me ...


Thanks will update it soon!!!
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Part -1


Dr. Comes out and says ... Madavijis potassium levels went down which is why she was unstable and also as her surgery was a complicated one for hematoma and she is a patient of High BP possibilities of Heart attack/ Paralysis/ Mulitple sclerosis ( Life time hardening of tissues in brain) could occur. As you bought her to the hospital in time, and we dozed her with required levels of Potassium she is now fine. We cant allow anyone inside and her well being will be shown to you all through video in the evening hours and noon hours. So please, family gathering here with tension will not help her.

Ishita: Sir I Understand but can i go inside and meet her as I am a Doc I can follow and understand her state so that I can calm down my family... Please

Dr. Okay Madam. and leaves...All are relieved... Ishitha comforts Romi and Bhallas too take romi with them and all leave while Raman and Ishita are left for amma

Ishita with tears filled eyes sits on the chair leaning towards back ...closed her eyes while a drop crawls down the cheek ...and Raman looks at the tear ...taking it in his fist...and looks at her by keeping his hand on her head ...assuringly comforting her...

All the flashes once plays as a movie reel...

Everyone in the hall...Mihika filed a case against Romi for making her MMS while Mihir stood by her and Pathak was the advocate... Entire folks including Mr. and Mrs Bhalla too were on Mihikas side and College Board too filed against a case on Romi and his friends who were involved in QP leak scam...

Shagun again plays her ghatiya ramp of media from another chichora channel by scheming to defame bhallas and iyyers...

Everyone chanta maaring (dishkiyaan) Romi while Romi ( The bigda hua acha dil ka hotwa balak) standing wiping tears ... asking sorry sorry ...but none are in state to understand his future or his apologies...

Appt is crowded by Media ppl saying

" Ek CEO ka bhai QP scam mein shaamil hai..kya is me apne bhai Raman kumar Bhalla ke paise aur dum dono bhi shamil hai?? Aaagey dekhne keliye dekhthe rahiye ..."
" Ladkiyon ke MMS aur Paper leaking ek ke baad ek... saamne aa raha hai... Kya Bhalla pariwaar humare samaaaj keliye khatarnaak ho sakte hai?" sach jaane keliye dekhte rahiye

TAN TAN TAN...(TRP Drama going on )

Inside Iyyers House:

Romi : Bala sir... Am sorry... Whatever I did , I did out my ignorance please forgive me...
Bala looking at Romi with concern as Romis future is at stake if he confesses the truth in front of the board...

Vandu: standing helpless looking at her husband and here the future of a student ..a careless and head strong student ...

while Mihika says:

Forgive???? Oh really... DO you think therez any credibility left that one can forgive you Romi??? MIhir looks at Romi ... as if he is going to give him tight punch ...making romi throw up his lungs out...

Raman: You virtually murdered me as a bro Romi... my principles my values nothing Nothing can save you today...
Romi: Bhai pls bhai... help me bhai ... I am really broken bhai...dont do this to me ...

Raman: What have you left for me to think on Romi to save you and do u really think you will be considered to be given a chance???

College Board members calls bala and Romi too with his family...

Bhallas BP kicke sixer while Iyyers were really worried and mihika mihir fuming...

Tandon pathak and trisha too were there in this gathering as support for Raman and Mihika... while shagun comes in with aparmeet... and Athankwadi Adi ...watching the

Scam Scandal mix Redemption show of Romi

All leave for the college board meeting ...

Gathering in hall :

Board members say that they know the truth and inspite of that they would want to give a chance asking the scam team to appear for exams in 10days from then.

The other members of the staff asks how could the board decide on this without their consentand few accuse that they got up with money form bhallas and so on... then College Dean speaks up ...

" Dear staff I understand that everyone is equally worried about the college reputation and the future. we are sorry that we couldnt consult every one of you for deciding on this We were in the verge of filing case against Romi that is when a well wisher stepped in our office and has thrown some light to consider these students future... yes they did mistake, sorry its a blunder of their life but, are they really so criminal minded? No its their age and fear of parents which is making do them this or it could be with the confidence of money they have... but is it right to surrender their lives to police and media for this mistake??? Really No... Punishment has to be given to their wrong thoughts to get success in easy way... but not to them and their lives which opened our eyes and we thought as they leaked question papers ...only this team will be given diff diff papers to each respectively and they will appear for exams... if they clear then they will be accepted with a additional penalty towards college... Also, they will help the team to set the q paper for others while they will write diff papers. while declaring Mr. Bala innocent and requesting Mrs. Vandita too to resume her role accepting our apologies for suspending and demoting them. "

All are relieved while Raman asks sir, you said someone approached you and helped you in solving this issue can i know who is that well wisher who saved these many lives?

DEAN: She claimed that she is Romi's SIs in law and she introduced herself as Mrs. Ishita

A sigh of relief and a rainbow of content ful smile passed on like a breeze on all the faces while Mihika and Mihir still full on with their fumes at Romi...

Shagun and Pavitra Parmeet making faces at one another...

While College Head comes out asking media that we do not want to reveal the names as its related to the future of the students and understanding the importance and delicacy of the issue the college has already taken the decision which we feel is true to the subject and we believe in punishing the wrong thought of the student so that he or she doesnt repeat it in future. Considering that their decision would do good to the students and also solve this issue they have already taken permissions from the Education board and hence the matter is resolved. Hence asks media to leave politely without taking any photos of the members in side the Meeting room.

In between all this Mihika and Mihir gets a call and leaves...



-To be continued

Friends if you really like the update hit like and please feel free to share your views and feedback...


shakti

Edited by Romanticfreak - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I really wish the same thing happens in the original one. College committee forgives them and ask them to write the exams again. Please,do continue the story and thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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see how effective is our ishu's lecture. 😉 loved it
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Originally posted by: tintu

I really wish the same thing happens in the original one. College committee forgives them and ask them to write the exams again. Please,do continue the story and thanks for the pm dear.



Thank you so much glad you liked my update...
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Originally posted by: lourel24

see how effective is our ishu's lecture. 😉 loved it



LOL I know ... 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pls continue it soon...loving it ...
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Continu soon... nice update 😛

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