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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

this ws the most cutest update of ur ss..very well written..!!



Awww thanks dear... I was just randomly scribbling after ammas accident however... Recent changes in storyline ispiredme crazily And the lovely update was conceived
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi thnks 4 pm such a lovely update dear 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!!🤗 Amazing, Update! Loved it!❤️
It was pleasure to read loved it yaar!😃
Nicely written👏 Good job👍🏼
Do Update Soon!😃 Will be waiting
@Ty for the PM😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Breathtaking update dear.. really amazing n awesummm.. plsss continue soonnn.. eagerly waiting to read moreee.. plsss PM mee whn u update the next update! Thnkuuu...

N yeahhh u writeee fabbb!! Great goingg!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 4


Raman is on a droolathon looking at his wifey enjoying the morning sips ... with sheer innocence in her eyes ... and said that you know ...this is hospital wala mini coffee date ... for us ..fopr which ishita says haa raman true ... and thanks

Ramana asks why is the thanks for


ishita says...if you haven't diverted my mind i am sure i would ended up with my sweet crush...again


Raman: WT... what?? sweet crush???

Ishita : Haaa sweet crush ...wahi Migraine... phir kya ayyooo if it starts loving me ... ammaaa i am done... i cant take that headache... and she excuses herself to check ammas state..

Raman : gets another cup of coffee and tries the way ishu describes and does... njoying the coffee he just mutters saying ...kash hathon mein hath daalke ...tumse coffee pe bite bhi dete toh ...lowers his head blushing ... and thinks oh wait..wT mein aur madrasan ke saath coffee (tik hai) par bite???? mujhe mere baccho ke liye jeena hai ...is jhaasi ki raani ke palle padke marne ka shauk thodi na hai huh... and looks away thinking ... Raman agar bite ke taraf dil ke arzoon gaye bhi toh isme kya galati hai??? DIl ki acchi hai... masoomsi soch, sundar susheel aur apne usulon ke pakke, rishton ke mainye samajhne wali dil eh sab kuch toh hai... haa masoomiyat se khatl karne ki aur meeti zubaan se bhaashan dene ki bhayanaak aadat bhi hai phir bhi chalega... lekin bohot acchi hai..bil kul shagun se alag mere jaise soch ... and smiles in his own thoughts...

Its 8:00 AM and Mr. Bhallas call distracts the reflections of his emotions and Raman attends the call...

Raman: Ha papa boliye...

Mr. Bhalla: Beta raman woh madhavi ji ab kaisi hai.. Iyer sab bhi yahi hai...hume use yahi rukne keliye kaha hai beta ..to hum sab ek saath hi hai kal raaat

Raman: aap ne acha kiya papa appa ko bhi apne saath rehene ko kehke...amma bilkul tik hai aur out of danger bhi ...

Mr. Bhalla: bhagwaan ki laakh laakh shukar tik hai puttar ...ab mein phone rakta hu...


In the mean while ... Ishita comes back to raman saying ..that amma is really better and she regained consciousness. and they both have a sigh of relief ...

however as amma underwent critical surgery with age wise complications and past medical history she needs to be under observation for the next 72 hours is what doc advises.

By 9:30 AM Bala, Mihir and vandu comes there and asks Raman and Ishita to leave as they need to catch up some rest for the night duty of waiting there ...and the couple leaves...

On the way ... in the car... Ishita asks : Raman where did ammas accident happen??

Raman takes her to that place and she just loooks around while one chai wala recognizes raman and says namaste saab aaap yaha ... khair us raat agar aap us aurat ko nahi bachate pata nahi kya hota... sab allah ka dua hai...


Raman : Aap ko kaise pata eh sab...

Chai wala : saab us raat mein bhi toh tha yaha mera dukaan yahi hai... aayi saab ek chai peeliye...


ishita too follows Raman to chai wala and he points at ishita and says : Mehmsaab aap yaha??? saab ke sath

Raman puzzled by cahiwalas statement and looks at ishita

Ishita : aap mujhe pehchaante ho kay?

Chaiwala: aap toh us khudrat ke di hui dua ho humare liye ... aap ko yaad hai yasmin ek ladki jiske accident hui aur aap ne road se utake aspathal leke gayi aur uske sare dekhbaal ki phir uske baad us bacchi ko ache school mein dalke padane keliye paise bhari ... aur uske padayi keliye aapne bank mein paise jama karke school walo kodi..yaad hai..

Ishita : Haa mujhe thoda yaad hai ...yasmin ... haa abhi yaad ayi... uska aapse kya lena dena hai

Chai wala: woh yasmin meri bacchi hai mehmsaab aaaj aagar woh yaha hoti toh bohot kush ho jaati

Ishita: Yasmin kaisi hai ab aur uski padai???

Chaiwala: woh ab college ja rahi hai ... use bhi aap ki terah doctorni ban ni hia.....

Raman : proudly looks at ishita ... with his affection multiplying n times on her...

Ishita: acha ...kabhi agar yasmin yaha ho toh mujhe batana bhaiiyaa us din meri hi amma ki accident hui thi toh...

Chaiwala: mehamsaab usdin yaha shaadi hui thi ..kisi ki aur toh shooting bhi hui thi

and informs her that the car hit amma and went into a tree and show the place exactly ...while raman in talking to him ishita goes near the tree and looks around ...and her eye catches something ... and she picks it up ... its a vallet which fell out from the car ... and also she sees the last numbers of the paint scratch on the iron sheet tied to the tree which got squeezed by the car ...and she takes snaps of that and comes back to raman and they leave...

They reach home... Raman gets ready for some work and thats when police comes and says that they need to arrest Raman for Ammas accident which even they too were shocked .. however the evidence they got from the investigation is hinting towards him..

Inspector adds that ... though we are not in terms with the fact that MR.Bhalla is behind this..we are under high pressure from the authorities to arrest Raman and warrant is also issued...
Ishita shell shocked and Mihir is out of his senses with that while the entire family didnt even know how to react...

Raman calls up pathak and informs him of the same ... while Tandon trisha with pathak reaches Rmans house for support.

Raman says that I am nott the culprit someone is trying to frame however... law does its work ... and am sure i will come out ... while Ishita is still full on defending Raman and is shattered.
He asks her to stay bold and not to loose her temper and leaves with police ..

Pathak says that whoever framed Raman they did it purposefully knowing that its saturday and court is off Till Monday nothing can be done ishita bhabhi ...

and Ishu looks really worried shaken...



- To be continued...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Friends I actually have finished writing the accident case too but while hitting post crazy power hit hard yaar ... nothing was saved ...so this is new conception ... so its bit short however... will update the next one soon...pakka...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: avni_19

Breathtaking update dear.. really amazing n awesummm.. plsss continue soonnn.. eagerly waiting to read moreee.. plsss PM mee whn u update the next update! Thnkuuu...

N yeahhh u writeee fabbb!! Great goingg!


Thank you so much dear glad you like my write up ..sure will keep u posted for the future updates...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

thanks dear ...glad you liked it ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39


Aww thanks swathi ...glad u liked the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

Hey!!🤗 Amazing, Update! Loved it!❤️

It was pleasure to read loved it yaar!😃
Nicely written👏 Good job👍🏼
Do Update Soon!😃 Will be waiting
@Ty for the PM😉


Aww nammy thanks dearie ... glad u loved the update... sure will keep u posted on future updates

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