MG~ZEHER~ PART 1 pg/10 oct 20th :)

First Previous

Page

Frequent Posters

Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

part 1
nice part...
poor Geet...
and Maan loves Sameera?
hope shes good in this dear...
looks like shes a kid and a naughty one in this...
cont soon dear...

Quote

tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

geet omg struggling so much for her bro
even sacrificed her dreams but dont worry soon someone will come to make true all ur dreams bt
khte hai na zeher ke baad hi amrit milta hai waise hi
n harika omg u made me love sammera
her ch is too god
dont know y im not able to hate her
she is so cute n she came to maanu's home n wt she said bache ki maa ban jaugi heheh it was so funny
i lv her ch
well u make sam bt can never make me like dev even😆😆
maanu just waiting for her to complete her studyn ye sam now wt she going to do
waiting to see how my maaneet will meet😉
lvd it

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

amazing prologue & part 1...I like this childish sam...& very sad to see geet's painful struggle...I think the girl in the prologue is sam & geet will be the girl who will give birth to maan's child...hmm...interesting love triangle...very different from all of ur other works...plz send me pms of all ur works...

Quote

punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

awesome part

geet forced to become a bar dancer to take care of her brother

and maan and sam getting married in a few months

Quote

priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Awesome update dear
And feels sad for geet she is struggling too much on life but she holds this with dignity and I m proud for her
And sameera is madly in love with maan
Wants to know how their life is going to turn
Plz update soon dear

Quote

Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

part 1

oh that is soo sad gee's bro living like that and his condition is worst also geet is suffering much here

sam is so funny she is cute also looking like she loves maan alot

and her every antict was wow she is sweet girl re

hope maan will save geet if she fallen in any prob

i hate people who will treat others with there profession they wont look in to there hearts. geet is bar girl but that doesn't mean she have to be like all. i love her guts

again such wonderful concept i love it

plz updatseoon i for got to comment here i think commented in FB ones

sparkle