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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



this is very emotional prologue and teaser...

A girl is gang-raped and then she fing that she is HIV positive...really very painful...lust of some disgusting men destroy whole life of a girl... but they don't have any humanity left in them...

who is the girl gang-raped and HIV positive...

and now in teaser Maan is married to Geet but he don't love her...

one question I want to ask... the girl is now diagnosed with HIV but she was raped in past...it means she was all the way carrying these bacteria but they have effected her now so she may have went for checkups and find this result...it is said that HIV bacteria don't effect instantly...its effect varies from person to person... if Maan and his love who is HIV positive has physical relations then he also must be carrying this bacteria...because she was talking about baby saying---she can't become mother...that means they had physical relations and were trying for baby but may be when she didn't get pregnant they must have went for checkups and found this disease...

waiting for story to start...

u didn't send pm for this...😔





didnt send the PM di aage milenge thanks for the wonderful comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: fabiyamg

sooo sad , ye girl sameera kr do , sameera maan se promise lene wali girl ho and maaneet ki shadi kra do plsjjj 😭



thoda wait karlo yaar dont cry
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

OMG THE PROG WAS UMM GIRL RAPED
HOPE SHE NOT GEET
WELL I THINK SHE IS NOT GEET
ACTUALLY WE HAVE SOMEWHERE SAM,E TELEPATHY CANT SEPARATE MAANEET N WILL NEVER LET ANYONE TOUCH OUR MAANEET😆
WAITING 4 MORE




lol tia😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle

Roohi oh my god what a start you scared me hell out chal hat i am sure prologue girl was not geet and teaser geet is his wife as per promise but why he is behaving like that poor geet kya kardiya wo he is punishening her




thoda wait kar poo😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: yappingduck

the lady was gangraped and is HIV positive...thats so horrific...a fate that no woman shousld have😭, was she maan's wife or ladylove, why do i feel the lady isnt geet, or probably i am wrong, but the subject is very sensitive issue... looking forward to read more



thanks for the comment this is the first time i am seeing u giving me a comment other than ossum or any single word😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sdlife19

M just speechless

dont have words tat you would seriously do this for me...

The story as usual will be rocking the way you always do..

and m waiting to see how this goes..

something different form you

love you so much darling


For u darling











Be happy always with a big smile

😛😛😛




it feels special when you call me darling 😳

love u di for coming into my life🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Oyyee di aur ek story😛
And luv u shobha di..
Aise inspire karo so harika di humko aise hi achchi stories de😃



awww she would always remain an insipiration for me pooja ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1:



@mental asylum,

Warden: You can take your brother home for a week geet but make sure you handle him carefully ... off late he has put up weight ... I mean 120 kgs, its too much and don't give him food even if he demands for it ... for now his mental condition is stable, she said preparing her reports. Ever since asha started working in the mental asylum she has seen geet struggling with her work and hectic schedules to make upto her brother who was elder to her with ten years. after he lost his girlfriend he lost his mental stability too which made him lose his job. Both brother and sister were a family, they lost their parents in childhood, since then life has become a compromise but he stood strong for geet. he managed getting a good job, and supported his sister's education. Geet was only sixteen when she took up her first modeling assignment casually ... earlier it was simply a way for her to earn money for pocket money but later she developed a liking. Even arjun stopped reacting whenever geet leaves due to work,indeed he would accompany her to make sure she was safe. Soon arjun fell in love with nisha who was his colleague in his office,



Nisha was a loving and caring person, she accepted geet like her own sister. Even nisha's family were happy with arjun, they had all the money in life still nisha worked to make her own career. Everything was going smooth until the night when arjun and geet witnessed with the way nisha was being killed ... arjun helpessly screamed unable to handle the torture!! Geet fainted as she saw blood on nisha's body, all three were admitted in the hospital ... Nisha left the world while arjun lost his mental stability!! He was sent to asylum, geet couldn't even finish her graduation so she opted working as a bar dancer!! She left her ambition of becoming an actress, every night goes out with torture when men gaze her body lustfully ... of them many tried to get her onto bed but she could never agree.



By then she even lost the hope of her dream man, no one would marry her, why would anyone commit his life to a bar dancer?? But she wanted to fall in love!! Will she?? Geet wondered making her way into the bar!!


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Arey sameera aap yaha luggage ke saath?? Kya hua kisine aapse kuch kaha?? She saw sam walking inside maan's room with suit case ... Arey nahi dadima soch rahi thi maan ke room mein shift karlon kya haina woh toh waise bhi busy hai office mein, he has no time to think of marriage ... Unke room mein shift karlongi toh kamse kam unki bache ki maa toh ban jaongi, I am tired of waiting ... She opened the bag to pull out her dresses when she saw her mother entering the room. She was fuming to see sameera bahving like a despo ... hey bhagwan kaisi ladki ko aapne mujhe dediya? Tujhme sharam naam ki cheez hai hi nahi, chal sam bohut hua, she held sam's ear leading her out of the room. As they were going out maan entered the mansion, he smiled at sameera's antics.



She would do this once in a while and everyone were used to all this, badi hassi aarahi haina tumhe? Kal dekho ki main kya karti hoon!! She warned maan before stepping outside.



Bete aap aur kitna wait karvayenge usse?? Dadima closed the door walking towards the dining table, dadima sameera is in the last year of her MBA, agar shaadi ho jayega she wont even finish her PG ... let her do whatever she wants to ... waise bhi matter of just five months jaise uski farewell party hoga hamari shaadi bhi ho jayegi he said getting ready to freshen up.



"Maan se meri shaadi" sameera yelled holding the banner in her hand where it was written the same, her friends too yelled in chorus ... hona hai ... hona hai,



Sam entered maan's office with her frnds carrying on with her drama. Maan had to send his body gaurds to shoo them away. But same somehow escaped and managed reaching his cabin. She stood by the door watching maan intently ... Mujhe tumhara baby chahiye maan, she said scratching the door with her nails ... sam!! Go to college warna ... he picked up the paper weight on the table to throw. Sam ran away giggling ... Just five more months khuraha main bhi dekhti hoon kab tak mujhse dur rahoge.


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She stood in front of the mirror applying blood red lipstick on her petals, she was tired tonight ... this was the second dance and she didn't want to go on the dance floor again. Geet rested her head against the wall trying to take a long breath.



Tu aur dance nahi karsakti toh main javon?? Natasha offered putting her hand on geet's shoulder, she turned to look at her and then sighed ... Nahi nuts ill go, kal bhai ghar aaraha hai and I am supposed to take care of him, iss liye extra work tonight, break longi toh paise kaun dega??



Meri baat maanle geet kisi ka bistar garam karne se tujhe aur bhi paise milenge, then you don't need to work this much, she again started with her words understanding that geet needs money now.



Kabhi nahi, geet pulled her hand away and spoke determined ... nuts this is the last time I am warning you aaj bol diya wapas yeh sab mat kehna ... Bar dancer banna meri majboori hai lekin vaishya banna nahi, I am struggling for my brother, agar khud ke liye kuch karna hota toh aise kaam karne se pehle main mar jaati



Chal gussa mat ho mera time ho gaya phir, see you I am going with my client ... aur haan geet I hope that you don't land up with someone breaking your sanity!! Waqt ka kya hai kaise bhi badlega janemann ... We are a blank paper at the end, no colors nothing ... And it will have to be crushed to throw it away!! you will have to lose yourself, I am not giving you philosophy but be prepared for everything ... Kya pata teri majboori ek din teri zindagi ki zeher ban jaye??


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Mom how do I look?? Sam excitedly went to her mother showing off her knee length dress, beta kapde kam lag rahe hai ... ek kaam kar woh table cloth wrap karle ... She made a facepalm leaving back to kitchen ... That's when rohan entered sam's room, his jaw dropped seeing her in the sexy dress, her deep cut neck which was almost showing her cleavage off, he couldn't stop himself from complimenting her ... Sam you are damn hot



She giggled holding her cell phone and purse ... rohan I am committed, don't ogle at me like that, maan tujhe nahi chodega!!



I really don't understand you and your love sam, ek baat bolta hoon ... agar maan tujhse shaadi nahi karega na toh batade chance ke liye wait kar raha hoon ... I love you babe!!



Agar maan mujhse shaadi nahi karega toh ... Atleast I can have his baby na ... Sam winked at rohan and continued ... Uske baad karle mujhse shaadi,



God you are mean but even then I wont mind marrying you coz you will remain my love of life!! She made a dramatic face and stared at rohan ... acha baba aise mat dekh chal late ho raha hai party ke liye!!



Precap: nahi dongi as I am posting another part!! For shoba di!! 😆


really sorry for not updating!! i was suffering with viral fever!! since a day i am ok ... so i am back with updates!! please please leave ur comments as this story is something very heartwrenching!! and i am really scared to post every update!!


hows the part?? biting my nails


PREVIOUS PART:
PROLOGUE

NEXT PART:



Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
awesome update
poor geet, for her brother she became a bar dancer,and lost his love nisha

ye sam khuch ajeeb hai😕 maan loves her kya, i hope not😆
waiting for maaneet meeting😊



i read the prologue again, why i feel the girl in the prologue is sam
and because of the promise she took from maan, maan will go to geet
just a guess!!!!!!
Edited by -MSKdeewani- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start geet is a bar dancer maan love sam waiting 4 next

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