MG~ZEHER~ PART 1 pg/10 oct 20th :)

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

different concept sad story... waiting for updates..

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anmirza

@anmirza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

The prologue itself got me emotional 😭

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Anusha

@..AnushaGeet..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Confused as hell, waiting 😕

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

First two sentences r bit confusing coz of few words in there seems missing or jumbled or misplaced (for me)

rest...awesome teaser

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valli30

@valli30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

congrats for new story

different concept

nice teaser

maaneet are married

waiting for updates

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

omg.. its sad. .that Maan's love hd gang raped.. i cannot even think of situation of the victim.. 🤢

sounds different ..waiting for update..send me pm

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

after reading teaser, i am confused but happy too because maaneet will

be together...

continue soon

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

this is very emotional prologue and teaser...

A girl is gang-raped and then she fing that she is HIV positive...really very painful...lust of some disgusting men destroy whole life of a girl... but they don't have any humanity left in them...

who is the girl gang-raped and HIV positive...

and now in teaser Maan is married to Geet but he don't love her...

one question I want to ask... the girl is now diagnosed with HIV but she was raped in past...it means she was all the way carrying these bacteria but they have effected her now so she may have went for checkups and find this result...it is said that HIV bacteria don't effect instantly...its effect varies from person to person... if Maan and his love who is HIV positive has physical relations then he also must be carrying this bacteria...because she was talking about baby saying---she can't become mother...that means they had physical relations and were trying for baby but may be when she didn't get pregnant they must have went for checkups and found this disease...

waiting for story to start...

u didn't send pm for this...😔

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Dreadful teaser.. Hope none face dis situatn.. Waitn 4story to unfold

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Roohi oh my god what a start you scared me hell out chal hat i am sure prologue girl was not geet and teaser geet is his wife as per promise but why he is behaving like that poor geet kya kardiya wo he is punishening her