Navarasas || Bhayanaka- PART 2 UPDATED (18/5)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wow, White-lies..👏

Just wow...first piece described Rudra and this one Paro...

I loved it how you have described Paro's fear but at the same time how the same fear had taught her something and how she had overshadowed that fear...thats really commendable...

Paro is a really complicated character ...as she herself had said in one scene(during jaipur drunk scene) and to understand her is really hard...I dont know if you use to watch IPKKND or not...but during IPKKND I didnt know that there somewhere IF exist where the serials are being discussed and we get to read beautiful piece on our fav couples... ...but during IPKKND days I use to imagine Arshi in various scenes and Khushi there was so predictable...like what she will do in certain situation, how she will react...

But with Paro, I am still to reach that comfort level...It was just been 5 or so months and you have described the character Parvati so beautifully...

👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏

I dont have more to say...

OH GOD!! I am nervous now for my turn...like seriously ...

Sambhavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Res---SO fu***ng late, i know, and explanation will be PMed to you and choti---but thank god for a few free hours...so res...

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niyoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

I'm Res-ing for now.

So pathetically late but I hope you forgive me white lies. I am VERY VERY VERY sincerely sorry. I promise ill be back soon.

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ICanDoThis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Hi Chotidesi
Suberb work.

Such an intricately woven and accomplished depiction of rudras facets and depth of feelings for paro.
. Stunning read. U illustrate his character perfectly

But i dont know wat Navrasas is/means

Pls can anyone briefly explain?

Thank u

Samina

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ICanDoThis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

White lies,

I think im reading ur work for the first time. Id like to let u know that im adding u to my list of writers to Stalk!!

Im so very glad i joined the forum. Im really appreciated the fruits of all u talented writers.

An Absolutely Fab.U.Lous Piece of work

I loved the imagery of the early days of the show from both u and chotidesi.
Made me so nostalgic for all that exciting outdoor colourful vibrant pulsating
Action packed intense drama and mystery.
With the Gorgus talented lead pair not being least!

Its wat attracted me to the serial.

Iv really missed it since the devil(ishly) handsome tejawat went AWOL
and we got ushered into the haveli for a seemingly endless and inactive stay except for wen we were taken out to that hotel party in jaipur.

The haveli is stunning ( tho seems to have no closing windows or privacy)
But i yearn to see the rajestani back drops desert dunes and busy markets etc ( its the only way i ever get to see any of the world!) again while our Charismatic hunk Rudra tosses villians left right and centre whilst never taking his intense burning gaze off of his paro!

So a huge Thank u to u both

Samina