KriYaanshDrabble| In the search of Sunrise| Chapter 13- Pg 38. 5/10

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In The Search Of Sunrise

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Hatred paralyzes life; love releases it. | Hatred confuses life; love harmonizes it | Hatred darkens life; love illuminates it.

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Chapter 1
She ran for her dear life, No! She cannot look back now. There was no way left, she have to do this, for her own self.
The sky was dark with air around her filled with smoke and soot. She took a deep breath as she looked back to find an empty road. The men are gone, they won't come back. She mentally calmed herself. No need to run now, there is no danger. She placed her palm near her heart, breathing deeper, resting her forehead against the red bricks of a commercial building. Gladly she found this small parking space near the jelly store.
No, the goons will not follow you here Kria. Relax...They won't...You are safe...No...No...No.
She shut her eyes tighter hearing her own voice echo, piercing her eardrums, making it difficult to inhale. And finally she gave up, falling on her knees in despair.
ENOUGH!' She screamed, opening her mouth to fill her lungs with deprived oxygen, running her hands in her messy hairs. She was tired of this running, crying, feeling assaulted every time. Her pains and sorrows, she carried them along everywhere in her heart but now the burden of them was suffocating her beyond the limits. She wanted to be free, from all the pains, from all the memories, from her life. She wanted to end it, but she lacked the strength.
She stiffened as she heard sounds of cold leather shoes hitting the wet floor slabs. She quickly grabbed her bag, clutched it closer and hid herself behind one of the cars.
"Are you sure you saw her coming here?" A man asked.
"Y-e-s" Another man stammered with fear.
"Find her" The man commanded a group of goons. "And you... If she is not here...then you are gone" He threatened the man, who was sitting, begging for his life on his knees.
"Find that bitch" He commanded. "NOW" He added, loading his gun as he made his way out to call his boss, Shivam, Kria's step brother.
She clutched her bag tightly, wishing if earth could gobble her down making life easy for her.
Just 10 more minutes...Then you'll be free. She tried to calm herself, but opposite was happening. Her heart was beating loud, as if it will explode within seconds. She moved a bit and realized that the back door of the car was not locked. And for the first time she felt that the God existed somewhere. She silently got up and opened the door of the car and slipped inside, crushing herself in small foot space, waiting for the goons to give up and go. And soon there was silence all over, she heard few disappointed grumbles from the Man's mouth, followed by several curses which he gave to his gang who failed in finding her. And then a prolonged silence. She meekly peeked out from the window of car and saw the empty parking lot.
It was better to stay inside till Morning, if she tried going out, they would catch her and so she decided to stay like that. Also she was tired. And with final blow, she gave up, cuddling her bag, drifting into a deep slumber. And the last thing she felt was, vibrations of the running engine of the car...
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Hello, So Snigs forced me to post this here Or else I would have kept it hanging. Since my vacations are going on, also NO KriYaansh these days in D3, So to keep myself away from depression, finally I chose to do something good 😛 And most probably gonna complete the left ones also.

I honestly have no high hopes with this Drabble as its going to be Dark and Angsty. But yes, Gonna update it on daily bases.

Love ❤️

Do lemme know if its worth continuing or not.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres.

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I guess I've to read this again n again until I get the exact meaning and its relation to the OS.😆

"Hatred paralyzes life; love releases it. | Hatred confuses life; love harmonizes it | Hatred darkens life; love illuminates it."

Coming to the update,

I loved how you portrayed Kria and her fear..

Vocab was brilliant especially when u showed how scared she was.

Kria running from her evil brother Shivam..umm..seems like there is a reason.

AND WAIT :O

Rey too has hidden motives?

I thought Kria got into a stranger's car.

It will be more exciting as the story unveils.

I am waiting for the story to unfold..

and more eager to know how Kria and Rey's bond will shape up.

I love this concept.

Its kind of different..

AND ANGST ! ☺️

Me would LOOOUUU to read Angsty Romance..been ages since I read one! ^_^

I am lovin' it already.

Baby,

please kindly be a bit kind and update this piece of work daily ;)

LOVEE YOUUU :* 🤗
Edited by snigdha_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally you wrote something! I am glad! 😃

Coming to the drabble, I loved your selection of words. There was a rich suspense which you managed to keep till the end. And the car according to me, must be of Rey, isn't it? 😃

I loved this drabble a lot, seems to go into my favorites list.
I am glad my choice has turned sadistic now a days... 😉

Edited by parigyaverma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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DII SOO.SORRY.. FOR UNRESING IT TOO LATE.. <(*_*)>

Ohk coming to update..
U R A AMAZING WRITER DII.. U WRITE SOO WELL ...WORDS U USED.. N THE WAY U WRITE NO ONE ELSE CAN.. [:-D>]
AMAZING CONCEPT.. AGGRESSION.. 😡

DAT CHEEVAM is her step brother . vloody jerk :3

n kriya in unknown car!! wot ll happen to her ?? :O

i hope car aapne rockstar ki ho :P

plz update it soon... (thired part) 😊
Edited by jyoti_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pastooo... *runs to hug u* 🤗

FINALLYYY... AGGRESSIONNN... *__________*


I loved d concept... bade dino baad shivam as a jerk dikhayi diya :v

Amazing...Loving it...

Saalo timely update kariyo varna maar khayegi...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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first and foremost.. thanks a lot upi ,for this..🤗

i m fed up with D3 nowadays...this is a relief for me..like water in desert..

well now coming to the update..

loved the way u potrayed kriya's fear..its a treat to read..👏

kriya running away from her step brother..shivam..hmm interesting

kriya got into a stranger's car..

now what will happen to kriya..😲

well superb concept..👍🏼

pls update it soon..



with lots of love
moumita❤️


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I so wish that the car is being driven by reyaansh
Loved the update
Pls pm me when u update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good 1...
Pm me whenever u update nxt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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BRILLIANT concept upi...
the quote in the begining...i guess its for whole series or was it just for this one ???...
anyways...long time...i missed shivam...honestly..best antagonist...
well...was that pakka rey in the end...???...
i loved ur terminology girl..u described kriya's emotions very well...good job .
about ur daily update thingy...madame...u promised the same on an another drabble smthing twinges krke..(sorry muje nam yad nai rhte..m sure tuje bi ni hoga:-:-))...nd u forgot that one after 3 chapters...u promised nile also...alas..m still waiting for it...
nd nt to forget...mera pyara os...on tera nasha...usko RIP kr du kya...???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsm strt mumma
finally aggression
update next part soon
waiting eagerlyy

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