KriYaanshDrabble| In the search of Sunrise| Chapter 13- Pg 38. 5/10

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-Monika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awesome concept..

well described...

loved it..

update soon..

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trishika rajput

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

NICE CONCEPT

really like it😃kria was running from his step brother shivam...so he is the villain.😡..and in whose car did she hides...must be rey's car...😆

pls continue...😛

and thanx for pm😊

Edited by trishikarajput0 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Loved the update
Pls pm me when u update

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trishika rajput

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

really loved the storypls update soon...

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KReyAS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

amazing updt

love kriya ch

shivam is kri s bro

wht is the motive of rey

loved it

cont soon

thhnx f rpmm

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Sanchita Naha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

👏 it was beautifull

the way u writed its Awesome
Eagerly waiting for next
Update
The kria's character was amezing
I would love to read it more nd
more reall thank u for the pm 😳 😳

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TenTinyBreaths

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

amazing start 👍🏼

cont. soon

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
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Unres.

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I guess I've to read this again n again until I get the exact meaning and its relation to the OS.😆

"Hatred paralyzes life; love releases it. | Hatred confuses life; love harmonizes it | Hatred darkens life; love illuminates it."

Coming to the update,

I loved how you portrayed Kria and her fear..

Vocab was brilliant especially when u showed how scared she was.

Kria running from her evil brother Shivam..umm..seems like there is a reason.

AND WAIT :O

Rey too has hidden motives?

I thought Kria got into a stranger's car.

It will be more exciting as the story unveils.

I am waiting for the story to unfold..

and more eager to know how Kria and Rey's bond will shape up.

I love this concept.

Its kind of different..

AND ANGST ! ☺️

Me would LOOOUUU to read Angsty Romance..been ages since I read one! ^_^

I am lovin' it already.

Baby,

please kindly be a bit kind and update this piece of work daily ;)

LOVEE YOUUU :* 🤗

I LOVEE YOUUU TOO! 🤗

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
BRILLIANT concept upi...
the quote in the begining...i guess its for whole series or was it just for this one ???...
anyways...long time...i missed shivam...honestly..best antagonist...
well...was that pakka rey in the end...???...
i loved ur terminology girl..u described kriya's emotions very well...good job .
about ur daily update thingy...madame...u promised the same on an another drabble smthing twinges krke..(sorry muje nam yad nai rhte..m sure tuje bi ni hoga:-:-))...nd u forgot that one after 3 chapters...u promised nile also...alas..m still waiting for it...
nd nt to forget...mera pyara os...on tera nasha...usko RIP kr du kya...???

Meko sab yaad hai ! I'll pakkka plomish do it!

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Chapter Two

Kria breathed in the scent of clean bed sheets and followed by lots of struggle she opened her eyes. Sunshine angled through closed miniblinds that covered the large window. With her sleep bugged brain, she tried to register things around her. Clean bed sheets, aroma of brewing coffee teasing her nostrils, Sound of wall clock ticking. And with that, she stared at the wall clock with horror.

"11 A.M.?!?!?" A shudder rattled through her, clear into her heart.

No, She managed to escape pretty well last night then how come she be in her home...? And she paused for a second with that thought, looking around. This wasn't her place. She got up from bed and walked towards the window, carefully looking out through the miniblinds. And what she saw next left her in a complete shock.

It was Rey Singhania checking his letterbox. Rey Singhania!

She quickly closed the miniblinds and hid herself behind the wall when she sensed him looking in her direction. This was impossible! How can she be with him when last night she was hiding in that car...Oh Shit!

And with the thought coming into her mind reality hit her hard. It was Rey's car and now she was in his bedroom! Wow! Perfect! She shoved her hands in air, punching imaginary walls.

Rey was Shivam's new friend cum partner and she had seen him various parties but never got chance to converse properly because of her highly pissing brother. Not like she wanted to talk to him...But there was something about him..which draws her closer to...him.

But now what? Rey is here to take me back? Wait! Something is missing! Why the hell did he bring me here..Shivam knows about it?

She quitely searched for her bag and walked downstairs after pulling on her boots.

This attractive guy cannot make things fall back to zero! I've paid so much to be here, free and I cannot go back now.

She looked around, making sure there was nobody watching her trying to elope. And just when she thought she is one step ahead in this game, she was pulled 3 steps back.

" Are you looking for something?" He asked hoarsely, alarming her, making her turn on her heels, losing her balance and falling straight into his arms.

She closed her eyes, as tightly as she could, in anticipation of god knows what, and when she opened them, she was...lost! No...this is not Good. There was nothing classically handsome about his features...his nose perfect, his mouth aggressive, his lips full, his dark eyes unavoidable, riveting. And yet he was attractive. His eyes.. Darker with untapped Intensity. Indeed this man was beautiful and...WAIT! She pulled back, glancing at him in horror.

"Hi Kria... This is Rey. Hope you remember me"

He spoke smiling wisely, making her even more confused. Why is he being so nice to her? Isn't he supposed to pull her by hairs and submit her to Shivam?

"You are safe now. Shivam cannot find you here" He said, almost reading her pale disbelieving face.

" Why are you doing..."

"...Doing What Kria? Oh so you wanna know how you landed here? " He interrupted mischievously.

And she nodded, trying her best to maintain her composure. Yes the man is attractive. But sometimes attractive ones are dangerous too.

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First of all, Sowwie for not updating yesterday! I was busy watching X Men 😆

Anyways! Thanks a lot for loving this drabble! 😃

So, here Mr. Dark Heart Rey enters 😎 I love him in this drabble. Lets see what 'Explanation'he gonna give to Kria 😛😆

Love! 🤗

Edited by SuckerPunch. - 11 years ago