KriYaanshDrabble| In the search of Sunrise| Chapter 13- Pg 38. 5/10

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shakz_KR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#241

luved it

chottu update hai but sweet hai

gud 1

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#242

I still can't believe that I just read an update...ya I actually did😳😆

The update was really nice

Both their povs and Kriya's fears of losing her close ones

And then the reassurance by him at the end...amazing

Pata nahi agla update kab ayega phir bhi puchleti hoon...update soon

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trishika rajput

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Posted: 10 years ago

#243

Awesome

Loved it

Excellent update

Live the way you describe kriya's views

Kriya want to be with Rey

She got scared when he was missing just for few seconds

Lovely

I hope Rey will never leave her

And I hope that they realise their feelings fast

Waiting for next update

Thanx for pm

Continue soon

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Annwesha

@sakura20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#244

Beautiful...
Luvd d update...
Kriya trusts Rey...
Awesome...

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Soha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#245

Chapter 13 It was just so sweet and adorable.
I loved how you showed Kriya's feelings, her trust towards Rey, her insecurities and innocence. *Will you hurt me Rey* Shooo innocent my Kriya!!
You showed Rey's side very well as well. The way he is getting attracted towards her and still doesn't want her to trust him. I sooo loved it.. Upi I can't get tired of saying that you are Simply Amazing!!😃 -Soha-

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 10 years ago

#246

this is so good ... 😊

kriya in her perplexed mode ... but still trusting rey... 👍🏼

kriya never asks ... then why is rey tensed... 😆

anybody would feel left out if their fellow people are out of the sight... 🤔

n with kriya's case ... its just more disturbing ... 😭

but he came back ... breaking all her bad thoughts... 🤗