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Aishwarya

@Rictusempra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

So... Am not gonna unres... :/

Naya post lo ab aap...

So, lets begin! 😃

Chapter 1
Okay. Initially, I wan't getting head or tail of what was happening! But, as I understood that its actually a thriller am reading, everything made sense. :P
But... The last part !!! 😲 Although I was certain that the car was of Rey, yet I became hell anxious. And my heart pounded till my page loaded! 😆

Chapter 2
Hmm... The beginning was fun! 😆
The way you proceeded was hell interesting. I was getting way too curious, as in why is he saving her. And the story that he 'cooked', I was like aisa bhi hota hai kya? Then socha, Upi dii h... Ho sakta hai! 🤣
And your synopsis on 'Being Attractive' -- I totally loved it! ❤️ Sacchi! 😃

Chapter 3
The way he explained everything, I thought 'love at first sight' type kuchh hoga. But you shocked me with that revenge-thingie! Still! Hamara Rey hai. Revenge ke liye Kiri ko thodi hurt karega! 🤣

Chapter 4
Firstly, I loved the way you describd the flashbacks! 😊
And then there came a sentence which made me think, 'Ye Kiri ke saath kya karega?' But... I have faith in you... :* :* :P
Perhaps, abhi nahi but ages back, it might have been a love at first sight for him... Bass, guess hai! 😃

So... Done with my reviewing!

*whoosh*
Thank gaya main! Ab Just Accidental likhunga! :* ^__^

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Aishwarya

@Rictusempra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Ek toh maine unres nahi kiya, upar se ye double post ho gaya! Sorry dii! 😆 😆

I'm not a spammer! This happened by mistake...🤣

Edited by ..MereWhisper.. - 11 years ago

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sun_flower60

@sun_flower60

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

okay so I dnt knw where I res'd but here you go...

have I said before how much I love ur writing and ur stories...

and this one being a dark and angsty story...which i absolutely loved...😃

rey ka charm koi resist nehi kar sakta...nt even our kriya...rey ka ek hidden motive and he had seen kriya before...the flashbacks were good...

but last mein rey called shivam...mujhe janna hai kyun!! update soon...😳😃

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Yeh kya se kya ho gaya..🥱🥱🥱

Pehle I thought maybe.. first time milengey..

But then what did you do..

Tell me one thing how did she end up in that room.. Utha ke laaya kya?🤣 And she was majje mein sleeping.. That she didn't even realize. *Me runs away before you kick me*. Seems like Bahut badi khumbkaran hai.

He was Shivam's partner.. Like uss Cheepo ka... I literally had double thoughts over the thing about his intentions.. Mujhe waise bhi Kabhi yeh Banda seedha lagta hi nahi.. Teda kaam hi karta hai..

He cooked up a story.. Jhoota.. He is so... Akdu.. Saddu kahin ka.. Aur Madam Kri ko yeh Attractive lagta hai.. Bhagwaan bachaye aise attractive logon se.. aur unke intentions se..

Pata nahi kya kya plan kiya hoga.. Well what is he going to do with Kria? 😆 Jo bhi hoga I know you won't disappoint your readers 😉

Mujhe Flashback hardly samjha.. But okay.. Let's see What Next..

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

nyce story upi... 😊

m glad I read it so late... 4 chappy at once... 😎

varna zyada soch soch k tension ho jati... 😆

rey ka motive clear nhi lag rha... seems like he actually likes kriya... but its surely not the case... 😳

their's something really dark abt him... mysterious n confusion...

is there a huge age gap between them? .. thoda sa to chalega... 😛

kriya ko toh unintentionally huge crush hoying rey pe... itna hot maal jo h...

rey called shivam... why??!?!?? 😲 ... bloody shivam 😡

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

double update...omggg yyaaayyy *jumps*

uppi yaar tu kamaal hai... i loved both the chaps bahut zyadaa :D

Rey unintentionally told her the half truth.. and how he moulded the truth...that was amazing.. :D

i guess not only Kriya...even Rey finds her attractive.. ye toh 4th chap mei proof ho he gaya.. :P

ok Shivam n Rey are gangsters??? :O

and i was thinking them to be normal bussiness partners cum enemies.. :P

nywaz..loved it...

update jaldi se...

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Supar intresting story read all four parts relly amazing

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Amazing

Really love the way its going

Half truths are really dangerous...

Is Rey gonna tell abt Kriya to shivam?

eaherly waiting for ur next update

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

First of all sorry for the late as well as short reply.
Busy with studies and fracture.

The story is quite interesting.
I'm truly enjoying it as a reader. Thanks for the PM.
Update soon.

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

chapter 3 and 4 ... this was i wonder what her in property that will make shivam win
and they all will have to suffer a huge loss of it... and some how rey saved kriya from
that goon because he is is up for something and why he called shivam and inform about it
and do continue soon and pm me

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