KriYaanshDrabble| In the search of Sunrise| Chapter 13- Pg 38. 5/10

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

res

unres

upii its mee🤣🤗

wowwzz u started a new DS 🥳

Moi lovesss DS especiallyyy ur's🥳

fantastic updates👏👏👏

kria s hiding frm her step brother shivam

urrgghh hate shivam🤢

And now shes n rey's house😉

rey s shivam's friend rite😕

y s he helping kriya😕

hayeee kria finds rey attractive

moi want d nxt part soon

its interestinggg 😊

continue soonish😊

and me 1shhtt after a longg tym🥳

Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Res

first place gone :(

Aish stole my place😆😆

Unres.

WAIT! :O

Rey is Shivam's friend cum partner? :O

I seriously thought u wud introduce him as Shivam's enemy😆

but I am loving it since Rey isn't gonna give away Kria back to Shivam.

Rey seems to have hidden intentions behind all this.

Something good is that they know each other from before though they haven't conversed.

Kriya likes him..attractive! ;)

Reyaansh...

I am loving him in ur drabble.

Loved how u penned down Kriya again.

Update soon-ish pls.

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 11 years ago

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Jyoti

@jyoti_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Kriya's hidding from Dat vloodyyy cheeevam... :@
n as i guessed.. dat car is of rey ... Epppsssooo 😳

N Dat cheeevam is rey's friend.. 😡

rey is attractive.. we know dis kriya ❤️ 😛

love dis one tooo.. diii.. awsum update ❤️
It seems more intresting with each update [:-D>]

Edited by jyoti_arsha - 11 years ago

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Finally U have written something!! :D
Interesting concept.. I Love Dark-Love-Stories!
Plz continue soon

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
Res

first place gone :(

Aish stole my place😆😆

Unres.

WAIT! :O

Rey is Shivam's friend cum partner? :O

I seriously thought u wud introduce him as Shivam's enemy😆

When did I say Shivam is not his Enemy?? 😆 😆😆 😛 😉

but I am loving it since Rey isn't gonna give away Kria back to Shivam.

Rey seems to have hidden intentions behind all this.

Something good is that they know each other from before though they haven't conversed.

Kriya likes him..attractive! ;)

Reyaansh...

I am loving him in ur drabble.

Loved how u penned down Kriya again.

Update soon-ish pls.

Edited by SuckerPunch. - 11 years ago

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

POPS !!😲

This is bohut jyaaadddaaa acha.

Rey has some hidden moto's !! Bad boy Reyaansh!! YOOO!!!

Me waiting!! Ab jaldi next part update karna!! Please???

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

just finish read your both the parts together... error tyep ... on from phone
means to save herself from the goon she had enter someone car was of rey...
rey and shivam are partner in some work and kriya has landed in rey house and is
try to figure out how to run out it but rey ad stop her in do it... interest...
do continue soon and pm me

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

i loved it i loved it i loved it...
upi..u r a darling yar...bechari kriya...gaddhhe(pit) se bachi khaai me giri...
dark rey...yo...i so loved this thing...the guy has hidden motives for his business for sure...well may be...
acha tell me one thing...kl update nai kiya tha to aaj double gift hona chaiyw tha na...???

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Very interesting update!

They know each other...good thing or bad...so far not sure!

Rey's Shivam's Friend and partner😲I expected something else!

Rey knows Shivam's trying to find Kria still he opts to help her...some hidden motives!

Would be interesting to see how he responds to Kriya and

Mr. Dark Heart Rey...that line makes it sound even more interesting

Waiting for ur next update...hope it comes soon

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

yyaaayyy u updateddd...

ok so wait..whattt... Shivam n Rey frnds cum partners... like really? :P

i doubt that... xD

nywaz... Kriya likes him haan...well who wont anyway :v

but he being all.nice nice...kuch toh jhol hai bosss...

loving it nyway... :*