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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Rey shivam's friend thats a twist
And they finally met
Awesome update
Loved kriya's pov about rey
Awesome description
Pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Wow really interesting series.
liked the mystery element of Kria's life and then the involvement of Rey adds to it.
just love the story.
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
I am also waiting for what explaination hes gonna give to Kriya...

I loved both the chapters...

Hes protecting her from Shivam...being Shivams friend...

She was hiding in Reys car...

Why is Shivam finding her???

Why did he had dat gun in his hand...???

Is he some kind of goon??

Do write. soon...

n yeah sorry for late review...

my xamz are goin on...so couldnot read ur update...

buh plss keep the PMs comming...dont do that to me...

I will surely read n review...when I get tym...

Sorry again...for being late...

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Awesomeee
Ahmazinggg
Superbbb
Loved it
Interesting track
ah han so is shivam really his friend or rey is upto somefink else wid him
Update Soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
awesome... rey is shivam's friend...thanks 4the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46


Chapter 3.


"I tricked the goons last night, sending them in opposite direction. Ermm... Or else they would have killed the poor street-beggar who told them you were hiding in basement parking lot. And they believed me pretty easily. Erm.. Knowing about my contacts with their boss!" He continued, tapping the knife on table, while chopping the cucumber pieces.



"And...I reconfirmed your whereabouts from the street-beggar. Also it didn't required much of thinking in finding where could a young girl hide that too in a parking lot. So... luckily I found you in my car and thought it was better if we drive to a safer place" He completed forwarding her piece of sandwich.
"Hungry?"



"No. This was...How you brought me here. Now tell me... Why you are being so generous? I don't even know you properly. And you also know nothing about me." She said in her hyper tone. Obviously she needed a reason of everything. She simply couldn't believe on this man. Oh yes.. He is attractive.. But... She barely knows him whether he is good or bad.. No Hell Yes! She peeled her gaze off his face, noticing other details about him, such as the massive stretch of his shoulders, the hard muscles oh his chest barely covered by the smoky-blue polo shirt beneath his jacket. Stop! She breathed harder. Kria. Focus.

"Simple it is...You wanted to escape and I..." He paused, looking at her confused innocent face. He clenched his jaws, stiffening his hold on the knife handle. "And I wanted to teach Shivam a lesson" Shit! He just missed it. By one word- Revenge.
"A lesson?" Kria mocked in disbelieve.
"Look Kria.. I am working with him from past 3 months. And all he does is...A plain Rubbish! We gangsters have some rules. And unfortunately your Brother is breaking all them and this in turn can trouble all of us. This is a business. And one should follow the rules. And I helped you for the sake of saving you and you also know why Shivam was after you, Don't you?"

" He was after you for the property which you father left on your name. And believe me.. If he gets it...he can create problems for all of us." He breathed in, patting his back mentally for putting it up so well. And then he looked at her, sighing in relief as she seemed to b e finally believing in the story he told..Erm.. Cooked.

"Okay... So... I think I need a shower." She said holding her head. It was practically impossible to believe on someone like this, but she was believing him. And this was not good but she didnt even had any choice, had she? Maybe this could help. Maybe he could help her find out about the property which Shivam wanted so desperately that he was forcing her to marry one of his worker, ultimately forcing her to run away from her own so called wedding. And now she was with Rey. She looked at him one more time before making her way upstairs. Should she trust him so easily?

He watched her climb upstairs, lost in her thoughts, She was not at fault. It was him, who needed to be blamed. Hell yes! He told her the half truth! And half truths are always dangerous. He closed his eyes, summing up his strength. This is going to be a long journey. A long dark journey.
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Chapter 4.

*Flashbacks are in Italics*


She twisted the knob and closed the door, leaning against its cold wooden frame. Closing her eyes she inhaled sharply. All the sore recollections flashed in front of her eyes.


A little girl wearing lehenga and choli, chasing her dog in whole house and she stops finally, laughing, as she finds the dog hiding beneath the rocking chair. She looks up at the man sitting on it and smiles. That man carefully picks up the dog from beneath and hands it to her, his face enlightened on seeing his daughter's naive smile, his only guiltless possession.


A tear drop rolled down her cheeks. It was difficult for her to keep running like this. But she was left with no option. She have to make sure nothing goes wring this time.

They say it right, Strange are the games of fate. Everyone was burning in a fire, She was burning in fire of struggle, Shivam in the fire of conceit and Rey...in the fire of vengeance.

*

He picked his car keys from stand and walked towards his car. It was pouring heavily, with sky bathed in a shade of Grey and Dark blue. Smell of earthy oils filled his nostrils, soothing him, washing off all the secondary thoughts and strengthening the old loops. This was a revenge from Shivam or anyone who was related to him in anyway...including Kria. He tightened his fist in resolve.



Sounds of the ghungroo filled the entire hall. A young girl was running before a dog trying to catch him. Her feminine body adorned with a long Indian skirt and top. Her simple dupatta tracing her path as she runs behind the dog. Her lips shaped up in the most beautiful smile one would've ever seen. Her eyes looking at the dog pleading to stop. And she stops running, catching her breath as she found the dog hiding behind someone. She looks up and smiles at the man. He carefully pushed the dog in her direction and she picks it in her arms, hugging it. There was a something about this girl which made the man stop and watch her cuddle her dog. A certain peace, innocence, warmth, her childlike smile.

"Thank You" She thanked him and squealed as the dog again escaped from her grip. And the man? He watched her run again, care freely behind the dog. The entire hall again filled with the sounds of ghungroos and her giggles.

"Who is she?"

"She is my sister. Kria." Shivam smiles as he puts his hand on Rey's shoulder, answering him.

"Your sister?"Rey watches him in disbelief.

"Yes. But that's not important lets discuss the propositions which you've suggested for this deal."Shivam said as they walked across the hall.

"Yes, The propositions, Beneficial ones" Rey muttered under his breath, still looking at Kria who was giggling while running across the hall.


Getting inside his car, he quickly dialed Shivam's number.

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Double Update for you all :D

Do lemme know how was it :)

Love ❤️

Edited by SuckerPunch. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
double update...

great...

loved each nd every part of both the updates..

dis story is becoming really interesting now..

Amazing..

update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Res. Unres.
Read all parts in one go..😃
Awesome story.👏
It is so much hard for Kriya to not admire & drawn in rey's perfection..😉
Loved it.
Thanks for PM.
Update soon.😊
Edited by mir_mishti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
mummaaa. a big jhappi to u
reshhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
awsiom updtes
cont soon

thnx f rpm

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