KriYaanshDrabble| In the search of Sunrise| Chapter 13- Pg 38. 5/10

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
means i proved myself dumb again...😆

😆 Na re... Its not your fault.. Itne Hot gangster se kaun nafrat kare? Even I love him.. ☺️

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sana2c

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

interesting update...waiting for next update...

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akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: SuckerPunch.
😆 Na re... Its not your fault.. Itne Hot gangster se kaun nafrat kare? Even I love him.. ☺️

then its fyn...wese bi i love dark hotties...
anyways..tu muje mera os kab degi???
PS: i know tu iska reply nai karegi AS ALWAYS

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Akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

uppi i just seriously love how yoi describe situations...circumstances...emotions...everything so beautifully..

its like u can see things happening in front of u urself..

so..i loved the update...

what i loved the most was the contrast u showed b/w sunlighy making Rey's body shine but also hide the darkness within him...and those past memories still haunt him somewhere...

m loving how Kriya and Reyaansh's unknown yet known relation is progressing... They talk more with eyes..

so yuss...m loving it all.. ^_^

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

mummaaa🤗

update wass fabbb thanks fr this lamba one😛

hayeee they way u describeddd was fab👏

kria is nt trusting rey finaally she somehow started to trust him

and the flashbaack gosh rey😭

who killed krias father reveal the suspense soon

rey ka past kitna dreadful haiii

kria ki ye bhi pata chalgaya wo notes rey ne bhejaaa

i thought rey villan types haiii lekin nhnnn

update next part soonnn

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Nice update

Rey's past ke bare me pata chala

Feeling pity for him

Kuch na karke bhi sara blame us bichare pe aagaya

N then kria trusting him

That was really sweet

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

then its fyn...wese bi i love dark hotties...
anyways..tu muje mera os kab degi???
PS: i know tu iska reply nai karegi AS ALWAYS

😛 Nai.. Aisa nai hai..Arre yaar.. Merese kuch bhi likhte nahi ban raha hai. Mind set is totally off these days. Idk why... Kuch nahi ho raha merese aaj kal.

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akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: SuckerPunch.
😛 Nai.. Aisa nai hai..Arre yaar.. Merese kuch bhi likhte nahi ban raha hai. Mind set is totally off these days. Idk why... Kuch nahi ho raha merese aaj kal.

m nt going to buy that...THESE DAYS???...absolutely not...tune muje assure kiya tha during kamli days that u r gonna give the os on upcoming monday(for proof check ur own kamli thread)