Akdha FF:Khuda Ho Tum Mera[CH 10 updated 30/12/14]

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waiting for your story...update soon!!!😳😳
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Hey friends thanks for ur lovely feedbacks.so here is the first chapter.Enjoy reading...

Akdha FF:Khuda Ho Tum Mera
Chapter:1

As the monsoon winds kissed her lovely face a beautiful girl in her early 20 with a breath taking beautiful clad in a yellow and white choli studded with lovely gems and with simple jewellaries sat under a tree near the beautiful river with a irritated face hugging her knees to her chest.Another girl who said beside her with normal clothes who was her best friend ,stared laughing seeing her iritated face.On hearing her laughter the beautiful girl glare at her best friend and said
''Mothi don't u dare laugh .I am already in avery bad mood and please don't make me more iritated''said the girl and pouted a little.
''ok ok i will not laugh ,but Jodha why are u so much irritated? .Atleast tell me the reason na?''asked mothi trying hard to control her laughter.
''WHY-AM-I-IRRITATED?.Don't u know the answer?.Here i am waiting to see after 3 month for the last 3 hours and still there is no trace of him.what is he thinking of himself haan?Everytime he is late and today we are meeting after 3 months ,can't he come on time atleast today?.But today i am not at all going to utter a word to him haan''said jodha with a angry face .
Mothi laughed harded on hearing this .Jodha was irritated seeing her laughing this and asked
''why are laughing like i have cracked a big joke in the world?''
Mothi controlled her laughter and said''Jodha please say something u can do ok.Everytime u are saying that''I AM NOT GOING TO TALK TO HIM'',but u can't stay even five mintues without talking to him,as u r blindly in love with him right?''and started laughing again.
Jodha blushed on hearing the word LOVE and said ''Haan u r right too mothi,i can't be angry on him for so long ,coz i love mre than myself.And more than that when he gave his famous Puppy face ,how can i angry with him?''with a dreamly look as mothi coughted teasingly jodha came back from her drem land and said ''But today i am not going to speak to him.It's a challenge.If i lose this challenge u can ask me anything .ok?
Mothi was behind jodha and left the place with a smile.Here jodha hearing no reply from mothi jodha asked again ''Arrey mothi challenge ok na?Belive me i will not talk to him at anycost. ok''
''so my love is not going to talk me today ?''said a manly voice which made jodha to turn with a jerk
There stood a handsome guy in his early 20 with a dagger in his hand near his horse looking like greek good in his blue dress with a smile admiring her beauty .Jodha was lost his handsome face after 3 long months,but she slapped her forehead metally forgetting she is angry with and turned looking an angry glare to him.The guys smiled at his love's antics and went near her as he kept his hand on her shoulders and said''Jodha ,angry on me?''.Jodha shrugged his hands went and stood near the river .The guys too went near her and hugged her from her back and rested his head on her shoulders and said ''Jodha i am really sorry love ,i know i made u wait so long but i will not be late next time please talk to me.U know how much i missed ur lovely voice''.
on hearing this Jodha's anger melted in seconds ,but she of teasing him some more and freed herself from his grip and stood away from him showering her back to him.The guys thought she was really angry on him and thought of something and had a evil smile .
''Jodha plea.. AHHH MY LEG''cried the guy in fakely holding his leg kneels down and pressing his leg with a pained expression.
Jodha on hearing his cry turn and looked at his pained face and she felt like someone stabbed a knife in her heart.And ran towards him and kneeled down with him .
''JALLAL are u alright where is it paining?Is it paining to much? I am so sorry Jallal its all coz of me .Tell me where the pain is''said a corcern jodha as few drops of tears fell from her eyes on his foot .
Jallal was guilty on seeing her tears for playing this stupid prank and cupped her face as looked into eyes and said''Jodha i am alright .I was just joking love look i am alright.Now please stop crying''.Jodha's anger reached her peaks on hearning it was a joke and she shrugged his hand stood up with a boiling rage.
''Joke its just a joke for u .u know what jallal its no use of talking to u.i am leaving''said jodha as she turned to walk away but jallal held her wrist as he went and stood before her .
''Jodha its just a joke yaar please don't over react for these small things''said jallal trying to wipe her tears.But jodha again shruggedhis hands
''I am over reacting?. It may be small joke for u jallal ,but it pains me like someone stabbed my heart with thousand knife whenever i hear u got hurt in a war.u know how much i fear durning ur each war each and every second i will be living in hell.I can't even sleep or eat peacefully this i get the news u r save. u may be shahenshah of hindustan.But for me u r only my love .The love of my life ,without u i can't even breath for a second.But for u ,the great Jallaludin Mohhabat and the shahenshah of Hindustan ur pain is just a joke.These three month while u where fighting in war i was living in a hell jallal .I may be a brave princess jallal but i always afraid for ur safely .whenever Khan Baba sents me message that u r hurt in the battle i used to feel the pain more the u do . I love u more than my life jallal ,please don't ever play like this ever .If something happens to u ,the next moment i will kill myself.''and she broke down sitting on the ground.Next moment jallal took her in a bone crushing hug and rubbed her back and said''I am sorry Jodha .I never thought u will be going through this much.I am sorry love i will never do anything like this .I promise''as tears came out from her eyes too .
Jodha was still sobbing in his hug and hugging him tightly like life depending on it while jallal too hugged her more tightly resting his head on her shoulders.After few minutes jallal broke the hug and kissed her fore head,wiped her tears and said ''I love u jodha.u don't have any idea how much i missed u in this three months''with a husky voice tugging her hairs behind her ears and looking into her eyes.Jodha who was lost in his eyes which only held love and onging for her ,wiped his tears and whispered ''I love u too jallal and missed u like hell.I don't want to like a second apart from u .I want to become ur begum as soon as possible''with love and longing visible in her voice.
''Then let us get married Jodha''came a instant replay from jallal.Jodha shockingly looked at jallal with a questioning look.Jallal understood his shocking look and said''yes jodha lets get married .we have waited long and i don't want to wait anymore.we are in love for the past 10 years jodha and its time to make u mine .''with a determined voice.
Jodha on the other hand who was shocked on hearing this asked with a soft voice''But jallal what about dad and mom .I don't know how will they react to this ''
Jallal smiled made her stood up with him and held her both hands in a strong grip as he spoke''Do u trust me Jodha?''looking into her eyes.
''More than myself Jallal''replied jodha the second without hesitation.Jallal was really happy knowing how much she trusted him.
''Then trust me in this too.I will take care of everything .Even if this whole country stands aganist me,none can stop me.Even if i want to lose the throne i will do it with happiness .U r my world jodha ,u r the breath i take and i will do anything for ur happiness.I promise u jodha we will get married within a month and that too with ur parents approval ok. ''asked jallal with love in his eyes.
Jodha was speechless seeing his unconditional and selfless love for her just nodded her head.She then hugged him tighly and kept her head on his cheat listening to his heartbeat while jallal hugged her back and both of them lost in their won world of love for each other.

-To Be Continued.

so here ends this torture.Iam sorry if its not up to ur expectations friends.I really don't know what made me write this.so please tell me if i should continue or not.sorry for the spelling mistakes.
p.s :For PM for the next part please hit the like button below and buddy me .PMS will be sent only for those in my buddy list

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⭐️superb update👏👏
your way of writing is amazing👏
plzz update soon😃
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Thank u all for ur lovely comments will reply everyone separately tomorrow .love u all
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it's very interesting start. update soon.
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very very very interesting.. continue soon dear!!! sent a buddy request.. pls pm me next time... or haan update regularly.. seems that u r a good writer😉😉
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very interesting and new concept
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interesting and awesome concept hai... will like to read more!

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