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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Vow !!! Loved each and every character sketch... Jalal knows Jodha and he is in love with her...Jodha respect Bairam khan ...vow... interesting ...Please update soon... can't wait for more... Best part Jalal is not married yet and His mind ruled by Jodha... and He loves her...vow... Mind-blowing concept... please update soon!!!

Thanks bhavani.🤗Actually i was bored seeing jalal saying i have 1000 wifes etc etc., so i made single and ready to mingle in my story...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mithrasayee

update chapters soon...

pm me..

wil update within half an hour dear and will surely PM u...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey friends after reading ur comments i was so glad u liked this story😆.Thanks for everyone for ur lovely comments🤗So i am updating the next chapter ,ofcourse receiving the thread Jaskaran.kaur08😆.Enjoy reading...
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CHAPTER:2
Jallal smiled made her stood up with him and held her both hands in a strong grip as he spoke''Do u trust me Jodha?''looking into her eyes.
''More than myself Jallal''replied jodha the second without hesitation.Jallal was really happy knowing how much she trusted him.
''Then trust me in this too.I will take care of everything .Even if this whole country stands aganist me,none can stop me.Even if i want to lose the throne i will do it with happiness .U r my world jodha ,u r the breath i take and i will do anything for ur happiness.I promise u jodha we will get married within a month and that too with ur parents approval ok. ''asked jallal with love in his eyes.
Jodha was speechless seeing his unconditional and selfless love for her just nodded her head.She then hugged him tighly and kept her head on his cheat listening to his heartbeat while jallal hugged her back and both of them lost in their won world of love for each other.
After few minutes Jalal opened his eyes and kissed her head .While Jodha hugged him tighter and jalal smiled at this.But jalal was so hugry as he didn't have anything from morning and he was tried from the past two days travel from agra he was already started to feel lightly dizzy too ,but he didn't want to worry jodha .
''Jodha''said jalal with a soft tone.Jodha who was lost in his hug heard his soft voice and replied ''Hmmm bolo jalal''
''If u finished enjoying my hug ,can we have our food?''asked jalal with a naughty voice.Jodha on hearning this realised that he might be hungry and broke the hug .
''Arrey jalal i am so sorry.u must be hungry na.come on i will ask mothi to arrange our food for us.And where is khan baba and miraz ?''asked jodha .
As jalal was about to reply everything started to spin around him as he held his head and was about to miss his step,jodha who saw this immediately held him by his shoulders and made him sit under the tree where she sat before and gave him some water from her bag.Jalal felt some what better after drinking the water.Jodha held his face .
''Are u alright jalal?''asked jodha concern clearly visible in his voice.Jalal kept took her hands in his and kissed her both hands.
''When u r with me i will be always alright''said jalal with love in his voice.But jodha was feeling really guilty on seeing his condition.She know he can't stay hungry for long and must be tried by his journey,but instead of caring for him ,she started fighting like a child
''I am sorry jalal.I didn't even think that u must be tried and hungry and started fighting like a idiot .I am really sorry ''and lowered her face like a small child .
Jalal smiled and his childishness and innocence .This is the character he loved the most.Jalal cupped her face by his one and made her look at him .But jodha still had her gaze lowered.
''Jodha look at me love''said jalal with a soft tone.Jodha finally looked him with moist eyes which held guilt .Jalal wiped the single tear that escaped her eyes .
''Jodha u need not to say sorry for anything.I know u can never hurt me intensionally even in ur dream.so stop blaming u .I alright ok.There is nothing to worry dear.''said jalal in a comforting tone.But jodha was still not convinced.
''No jalal its all bec...''but she was cut off as jalal kept his fingers on her rosy lips.
''shhh not one more word blaming urself.u trust me na?''asked jalal to which jodha noded her head ''Then if i am saying its not ur fault ,then its not ok .Now stop this blaming and can we have food?Already cats and dogs are started fighting in my stomach?''said jalal with a puppy face .
Jodha laughed on seeing his puppy and jalal too joined her and the ordered their food which was prepared by jodha personally for him.
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As they sat in their tent with their food before them.Jodha noticed that bairam khan and Miraz was no where to be found and asked.
''Jalal where is khan baba and miraz ? I didn't see them till now?call them na we can have food togetherly .''said jodha taking another two plates.
But jalal was tensed on hearing this and was afraid what will be her reaction if he answer the question.Jodha who didn't hear any replay asked him again.
''Arrey jalal call them na?''said jodha .
''Jodha actually ...i came alone today as both of them were out town ''said jalal looking at jodha like a child who was caught eating chocolate secrectly.Jodha was boiling in anger on hearing this.
''what? u came alone .Jalal are u out of ur mind. u know how much danger it was .How can u be so careless about ur safety jalal?Are u a five years old child jalal?Can't u even understand this jalal.What is the need of coming without any safety haan?
Jalal gulped his saliva on her anger.Being the shahenshah of hindustan he never fear anyone or how big the army was.But jalal always feared of jodha and her anger.Only he know how much hard it is to calm her once she gets really angry.
''I can't wait anymore to see u after three months''said jalal in a child tone.
''oh come on jalal seeing me is not important than ur life ''and she got up to go .But jalal held her hand and said looking into her eyes''But its important for me jodha. i don't want to upset u by cancel the meeting at the last moment ''with love in his eyes.
Seeing the love in his eyes jodha's anger melted in seconds.She sat before him and held his hands in hers.
''I know jalal will u never like to disappoint me,but its regarding ur safety.I can't see u hurt jalal.So please don't do anything like in future.Now promise me that u will never come alone to meet me after this ''said jodha with care and love for him
Jalal smiled and said''ok i promise .Now come on let us eat i am really hungry''
Jodha smiled and took two plates to serve the food,but jalal snached one plate from her hand and looked at jodha who was looking him at with a confused look.
''Jodha miraz always used to say if both person eat from the same plate by feeding each other,the love between them will increase.so as we are alone today why can't we increase our love too haan?'' said jalal in a naughty tone.Jodha blushed at this and nodded her with a shy smile as both of them sat facing each other to eat.
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As both of them feeded each other jodha asked jalal,''Jalal how is the food?''with excitement.Jalal who know it was her cooking ,though of teasing her and said with making faces.
''Oh god jodha .who ever made this food is really blind.Nothing is correct yaar.salt is more.chillies are less.Who is this bad cook jodha ?''
On the other hand jodha was red from anger on hearing this.Jalal was having a good time seeing her red face which made her more beautiful and was trying hard to control his laughter.
''ok then don't have this food if it is so bad ''said jodha keeping the plate near her and was about to get up ,but jalal pulled her towards him and she landed on his lap as jalal locked her waist by his hands.Jodha struggled to get up from his lap by he held her strongly and said''u are so beautiful when u r angry my wild cat''
''Jalal leave me.I want to go''said jodha still trying to get out of his tight hold.
''How can i leave u till u feed the food which u made specially for me''said jalal huskily near her ears which send shiver in her body and she closed her eyes .Jalal smiled seeing his effect on her.
''u know jodha ur food contains a special taste which i could never taste even from specialized cooks.u know why?''asked jalal in the same voice.Jodha just nodded her head in no still in the effect of his closeness.''Coz they just add spices to food ,but u add ur love for me with them.I love u jodha ''
on hearing this jodha was on cloud nine and whispered back ''I love u too jalal''and hugged him as he hugged her back.After few seconds jodha said still in his hug''Jalal lets us eat.the food must be getting cold''.But jalal who was in a naughty mood said''Lets us heat again .Now i am hungry for something other than food''with a naughty voice.
Jodha who understood the meaning of his replay pushed him and stood up ''Jalal u cheap...u r becoming naughty day by day.Now put a break to ur naughty thoughts and lets eat .THE FOOD ok.'' and glared at him to which he laughed his heart out and jodha too jooined him and they both finished their food teasing and feeding each other.
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As the afternoon monsoon wind kissed their face jodha sat under the tree running her fingers through jalal's hair who lied on the mat keeping his head on her lap with closed eyes and enjoying her soft and lovely touches.
''Jodha how u managed to come here ,that too for staying here for two more days?''asked jalal openeing his eyes and looking at her.
''Actually jalal my whole family when to atten on of my cousin marriage to janshi for six days ,day before yesterday.But i faked illness on the last minute and asked sujamal bhai to make them go without me .After they left i came here without letting anyone know with the help of sujamal bhai''said jodha with a naughty smile
Jalal slightly dropped his mouth on hearing this .He never thought jodha is this naughty .
''But jodha what about the marriage.You could have enjoyed there?''asked jalal
Jodha smiled at this and said''If u can risk ur own life for meeting me.then can't i miss just a marriage?.And moreover how can i enjoy if u r not with me''
Jalal smiled at this and hugged her waist and closed his eyes and said ''U know jodha sleeping on ur lap feels like heaven .I love u jodha''
Jodha too smiled and said ''I love u too jalal.Now just relax and sleep for sometimes'' and kissed his forehead and jalal went to a peacefull sleep after several months in her lap as she continued to run fingers in his hair.

-To Be Continued

PRECAPE:
Jalal felt as if someone took his life out of his body when the sharp dragger entered his jodha's stomach and he shouted in horror ''JODHA''and ran as he held he body before it hit the ground only to hear her last words before she closed his eyes''I...I...LO...VE...YO...U...JA...LAL''
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So here ends this chapter .please give ur lovely feedbacks .Sorry for the spelling and gramatical mistakes.

with love,
scarlett.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
res
unres
fantastic chapter👏👏
loved it❤️
ja-jo ..😳
loved jo's concern 😃
your writing is amazing👏
precap 😲
update soon 😃
me first 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the update😳😳😳... Oh my god!!! what was the precap??😲😲 i know nothing will happen to.them but i dont want any 2 or 3 janam.. i just want them to be like this😭😭.. i know u cant do anything neither to my jodha nor to jalal😡😡... so i will wait for next update😉😉... update soon...👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
luvly n awesm update..
liked whole part
plz update soon
pm me if u cn
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome ff 👏
plz pm me when u update
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: SARA4444

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<font size="3">unres</font>
<font size="3">fantastic chapter👏👏</font>
<font size="3">loved it❤️</font>
<font size="3">ja-jo ..😳</font>
<font size="3">loved jo's concern😃</font>
<font size="3">your writing is amazing👏</font>
<font size="3">precap😲</font>
<font size="3">update soon😃</font>
<font size="3">me first😉</font>

Thanks a lot dear ...will update soon...and will surely do PM dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08

Loved the update😳😳😳... Oh my god!!! what was the precap??😲😲 i know nothing will happen to.them but i dont want any 2 or 3 janam.. i just want them to be like this😭😭.. i know u cant do anything neither to my jodha nor to jalal😡😡... so i will wait for next update😉😉... update soon...👏👏

Thanks a lot dear...and about the precape ...u should wait and watch...will update soon...
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Thank u ...

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