Akdha FF:Khuda Ho Tum Mera[CH 10 updated 30/12/14] - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
IMPORTANT NOTE

I am so sorry friends ,i am not going to discontinue any of my works .It's a stupid prank played by brothers as i forgot to log out yesterday.So don't be happy that u guys escaped from my tortures.I will continue all my works and update it regularly.

With Love,
Scarlett.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
I very happy that u saved jo n it was just a dream...
Bt I not tlking to u...u made me cry in ur last update which was nt even true...hmmm
Waise nice chapter
will wait for ur next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Hey friends thanks for ur lovely comments.so here is the next chapter.Enjoy reading...
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CHAPTER:5
Both of them stood peacefully in eachothers arms forgetting about the present and not worrying about the future just feeling their love for each other.
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After few minutes jodha felt something wet dropping on her feet and looked down to see few blood drops there.Just then jodha remembered jalal's wound and slowly broke the hug and took his injured hand in her ,but jalal removed it with a jerk .Though jodha was little by this angry and rude behavoiur of his ,but she know she is at fault.Jodha again took his hand but this time held it more tightly and tore the end of her shwal and tied it around his wound to stop the bleeding.During this whole process Jalal was looking everywhere except jodha.He was more hurt than anger by her words.so he keep quiet not wanting to let out his anger and hurt on her .Jodha on the other hand was really feeling guilty for her words and hurting jalal.Finally jodha decided to break the silence which was very uncomforable unlike from other days.
''Jalal lets go to the camp and treat ur wounds properly''said jodha looking at jalal who was still not looking at jodha.Jodha know he was still angry on her and decided to calm him down.so he cupped his face with her other hand and turned his face towards her but his gaze still didn't came on her face ,this bought tears in her eyes knowing how much hurt he is as he was refusing to see even her face.
''U will not even see my face now haan?''asked jodha in a broken voice still cupping his face.
Jalal anger slightly melted on this and turned to look at her .He can see the hurt,pain and guilt in her eyes.He rised his free hand and wiped the single tear that escaped from her eyes and nodded his negatively .And kissed her fore head.
''Lets go to camp''said jalal in a plain voice .Jodha was bit happy atleast he replied finally and they both walked towards the camp hand in hand.
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Once there reached the camp ,jodha took jalal to her tent and ordered mothi to bring medicine for his wound.Inside the tent jodha made jalal to sit on the bed and sat kneeling before him taking his hand in hers and started dressing it.Once she cleaned it with water and she started appily the medicine.As the medicine made contact with the flesh he hissed in pain.Jodha immediately blowed air on his wound ,once she finished dressing his wound she sat there keeping her on his lap closing her eyes as tears escaped her eyes .
''Please forgive ur jodha na jalal?''said jodha in a chilidish voice as more tears leaked from her eyes wetting his pants .Jalal anger now compelety melted seeing her like this and he caressed her head lovingly and kissed her head resting his head on her's.
''There is no need of forgiving my love,i can understand ur feelings.But if we can't live a life with our love then what is the use of living jodha.I know i am not just jalal but a shahenshah too,but i too want my love beside me at every step and desicion i take and i want u to the love ,none can be my begum other than u jodha.So never again talk like this ok''said jalal with moist eyes .Jodha slowly lifted her from his lap and looked in to his eyes which held only love for her .Then she stood up and sat beside him resting his head on his shoulders while jalal encircled his on her pulling her closer to him.
''I promise u jalal i will never utter this words again''said jodha with a promising tone.
Jalal thought of chaning this gloomly mood and had a naughty smile on his face .
''Jodha do u know something i received a marraige proposal last month from jhansi''said jalal
''Hmmm so what?''asked jodha in a casual tone not knowing his intension
''Her name is Ayesha Banu ,u know how much beautiful she is?''asked jalal is a dreamy voice.Jodha frowned her forehead on hearing this and asked ''And?''.
Jalal had a smirk seeing her reaction and continued ''And she has so long and beautiful hair just like peocock feather ''said jalal caresing her hair ,''her eyes are like fishes''said jalal admiring her closed eyes and ''her lips are like rose petals ''said gazing her lips and ''her nose is li...'' but he was cut off by jodha who got up from his shoulders and grabbed his shirt and pulled him closer and said''If u once again talk about any girl to me ,then u will never ever talk again by this mouth.Do u understand Mr.Jalaluddin Mohammad''giving an angry look .
Jalal smiled and her possesiveness and pulled her closer by her waist and said''Hmmm now a days my wild cat is becoming more and more possessive haan?''.Jodha left her hold on his shirt on seeing him this close and looked into his eyes.
Jalal smiled at her and continued''but u know what jodha i just love this wild cat and always will?''whispere near her ears .This made jodha blush and she stood up and ran out towards the exist but within seconds jalal held her wrist and pulled her closer to him encircling his hands around her waist and rested his on her shoulders''U know still now i never have never seen someone beautiful both inside and outside.so this Ayesha banu will never stand before u.I love u for ur inner ans outter beauty jodha.And this Jalaluddin mohhamad is always urs physically and soully.''said jalal huskily while jodha blushed and smiled at this .Then jalal turned and cupped her face and was about to kiss her forehead ,there heard a very familiar voice from the enterence of the tent.
''Not bad bhaijaan getting training before marriage with babhijaan haan?''
Both jodha and jalal turned and looked to see Miraz and Bairam khan standing there while miraz was smiling naughtly and bairam khan trying hard not to smile.Seeing them akdha got shy and stood a little apart from each other and started blushing.Miraz now started to laugh more loudly seeing them like this and eeven Bairam khan didn't control his smile now .
Miraz came and stood before jodha and said ''What have u done with my bhaijaan bhabhithe great shahenshan is blushing like a new bride?'' to which he gained a light slap on his shoulder by jodha .
''Enough of this teasing my bhai .Now tell me how is the travel?''asked jodha with a smile.
''Yea bhabhi everything is alright ?''said miraz with a smile .Jodha then looked at Bairam khan and ran towards him hugging him and aked ''How are u dad?''asked jodha with a smile .
''I am fine beta ''said Bairam khan caressing her face with a smile.Then jalal came and hugged BK and asked ''How is the travel baba ?''''Everything is fine jalal .''said BK .
''OK guys i have to announce smething to both of u ''said jalal looking at jodha with a smile .Jodha who understood what he was going to announce smiled back at him.
''Miraz ,Khan baba jodha and me decided to get married ''said jalal with a proud smile.This bought a million dollar smile on both Miraz and Bairam khan face .
Miraz hugged jalal tightly in happiness and said''Finally the both love birds decided to get married .Really i am so happy for u both bhaijaan''And he turned towards jodha and said''Thank u so much bhabhi the day we have waited is going to happen soon''giving a bright smile to her to which Jodha smiled back.
Bairam khan to hugged jalal and jodha and said looking jodha''I know beta u will be the perfect life partner and The Mallika -e-hind of hindustan''with a proud smile on his face .Jodha was moved by his words and hugged him.Both jalal and miraz smiled at their bonding.
They spend the rest of two days happily and planning for the wedding .The night when jalal left to agra promised jodha he will be back in a week and ask her with her father and left to agra while jodha let to amer.
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After jalal went to agra he was going to marry a hindu princess everyone opposed it first ,but when jalal was ready to give his throne to Miraz for jodha they understood their kings love for this princess who was appreciated by everyone all over india .As ruqu was out of town she didn't know anything about this.Hamida was the most happiest person by his decision and prayed to god to keep them happy forever.The next day jalal left agra with everyone and reached amer .
Though jodha's father first refused it ,sujamal convinced him how much Akdha loves each other and agreed happily coz nothing is important more than jodha's happiness .Finally after 2 weeks their marriage took place uniting Akdha for the next seven lifes.

-To Be Continued.

Hey friends i know this chapter is a rush,small and a crap ,but nothing came to my mind today and moreover i have no idea how to continue this one before their wedding ,so I am sorry if i disappionted u by this chapter.Even i didn't receive many comments for last chappy this made my interest low.So if u want me this story further please comment or this will be the last chapter of this FF.

With Love,
Scarlett.🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
lovely chapter as usual 👏
akdha marriage😃
update soon 😃
and plzz do not discontinue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
i will kill u😡😡... dont even think to stop it... of course some were shattered by ur dream which seemed to be real.. but dont worry.. soon u will get response.. nd their is no problem with ur hurry chapter.. bcoz i also loved them married only... bcoz before marriage they live so far apart.. how will they meet.. continue soon dear...w ill wait for chappy..😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
awesome chapter👏👏
nd dare to discontinue it😡
u will soon get lots of luv 😃
i also thought of stopping my ss but i m very happy now with the luv of the readers😉
nd i know same will happen with u
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
LOVE UR UPDATE AND DREAM PART IS SUPERB😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
wow miss. scarlet..i read both the chappy's n both are FANTABULOUS!!!!👏 but goota tell u that dream of urs really scared me!!!!😆😆 i was very upset aftr reading that chappy...😛😛 but next two chappy's made my day yaar!!!😃😃 tenku...😉😉 just love these jodha jalal..they are JUST soo MADE FOR EACH OTHER... those dialogues of MY JALLU..uff uff uff...MAAR hi daala!!!!😉 total lovely dea...😉😉 n plzzz don't evn think of discontinuing..u r going great!!!😳😳 but jst curosity wanna ask..ur story starts from jallu jodhu ALREADY in love...i mean aren't u gonna reveal their journey of love..their first meet n all...😉😉 would love to knw that...😃😃 but neverthelesss...maybe u have other plans n am in for it!!! conitnue soon!!!!😳😳 n am sure all loving ur work..who won't??!!!😉😉 just some must be lazy like me to comment!!!!!😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Sorry yaar I couldn't comment last chappy... Res... for both chapter... U going awesome... Hey I loved both the chapters... I loved how Jalal got emotional when Jodha decided to leave him... Just hearing that he hurt himself... What a beautiful update...and Mirza is going to be king... Can't wait for more... please update soon... Yaar don't discontinue please... thanks...
Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi scarlett,
lovely update.. continue soon & add me in ur pm list.

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