ASHLOK FF-Criminals,Love&Death(NOTE PG76)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey all! I was bored, had nothing to do..literally, so I thought I would start an FF.
This idea was in mind for sometime now... So hope you guys could read and like it!
And let me know if I should continue or not. 😊


PROLOGUE


Is it okay to have feelings for a man who destroyed my life? Everything I had? She wondered staring at him having his food. NO! She thought to herself, how can I ever love a person... Sorry, I mean have feelings for such a disgusting man! Correction, handsomely disgusting, if that is a word.
Astha in deep thought did not realize that she was staring at him shamelessly.

He felt a pair of eyes on him. Don't tell me she is staring at me again, he sighed.
He looked up at her, she is pretty though, he thought to himself.
He suddenly thought of that night, where he met her, and everything had changed.
At that time, kidnapping her was the only option lying in front of him. He couldn't help but choose that option, or else they would've killed her. Shot her dead, then and there.

xxx

LET ME KNOW WHETHER I SHOULD CONTINUE OR NOT.. Thanks! 😳

Index-

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Chapter 2 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/4007626/ashlok-ff-criminals-love-and-death-note-pg76?pn=6
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Chapter 3 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/4007626/ashlok-ff-criminals-love-and-death-note-pg76?pn=13
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Chapter 8 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/107949753
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The title was little bit scary, yaar! But at the same time it is giving good hopes.. And the prologue was nice! Even though i'm unable to figure out what actually the theme is, i appreciate the way you managed it to make me so.. And to clear my confusions waiting for the update and so update soon..
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Loved the start continue soon :)
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plzzz continue love ur idea 😊
im waiting for ashlok romantic and dark and passionat stories😳
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Originally posted by: anu123.

The title was little bit scary, yaar! But at the same time it is giving good hopes.. And the prologue was nice! Even though i'm unable to figure out what actually the theme is, i appreciate the way you managed it to make me so.. And to clear my confusions waiting for the update and so update soon..


Woah! Suspense 😉

Thank you so much!

I'll update soon! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: fiza1995

Loved the start continue soon :)


Thank you!😃
Sure!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sdf21

plzzz continue love ur idea 😊

im waiting for ashlok romantic and dark and passionat stories😳


Thank you 😃

I'll try to make it interesting as possible! 😃
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Nice start 👍🏼
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Really nice start hope U update it soon
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Thank you! 😊

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