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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ashlok OS-Bardhast







Friends it will be impossible for me to write os tomorrow so giving you one more os today... enjoy...


Astha was on cloud nine ...as she was not expecting such thing from shlok...

She was falling more and more for shlok...

Astha:''shlok ...aaj mujhe aap par itna pyaar aa raha hai ke mera dil chah raha ke main aap ko kacha chaba jaon''...she was smiling like fools while making coffee...

Flashback

It was almost one month she was tolerating weird behaviour of additi...every now and then her single task was to remind shlok of what they used to do in their childhood...
On hearing ''tumhein yaad hai shlok hum bachpan mein ye kartey they woh kartey they''...from additi...at times astha wanted to apply fevicol on her lips...but as she was guest in their home...she was tolerating her non-sense behavior but she was getting on her nerves more and more with every passing second...

That day shlok was really worried about astha as he was sure that some one is trying to harm astha...when suddenly additi placed her hand on his shoulder...while astha was putting sarees in the cupboard...

Additi:shlok chalo na kahin bahir chaltey hain...dekho kitna acha mausam hai...bohat maza aaye ga...

Shlok:mujhe nahi jana...

Additi:tumhein yaad hai shlok bachpan main bhi tum aisey hi zidd kartey they aur main hamesha tumhein forcefully chalney ke liye kehti thi... now don't be a spoilsport...hum chal rahey hai matlab chal rahey hain bus...

Shlok got irritated to the core on seeing her dominant behaviour...moreover the way astha was looking at him with sad eyes made him mad...

Shlok shouted jerking additi's hand...''akhir tumhari problem kya hai ...guest ho tu guest ban kar raho...merey sar uper chardh ke bethney ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...and stop saying this ..''don't be a spoilsport''...''don't be a spoilsport''..he imitated her...and said.''i m getting irritated by hearing this stupid line repeatedly''...

Shlok:''aur haan aik aur baat ...yeh kya tum har waqt mujhe yaad karwati rehti ho ke hamarey bachpan main tum kya karti thi aur main kya...mujhe hairat hai ke tumhein 4 saal ki umer main kya kya hua sab yaad hai ...but roz raat ko bhoot ban kar tum kya kya karti ho...yeh tumhein yaad nahi rehta...really surprising ...meri baat apney kaan khol kar sun loo...mujhe iss baat main koi interest nahi ke bachpan main tum kya kya karti thi...but main itna janta hoon ke ab tum mujhe bohat pareshan kar rahi ho''...

He get up from the bed and stand next to astha...''aik aur baat additi...tumhein mujh par order chalaney ka koi right nahi hai...agar aisa koi kar sakta hai tu woh sirf astha kar sakti hai...he hugged her from side''...

Astha was shocked that shlok is saying all this...

Shlok:''umeed hai tumhein meri baat achey se samajh aa gayi hogi ke mujh par sirf astha ka haq hai...meri patni ka...he kissed on astha's cheek...to show additi that how much he loves his wife...

Additi who was feeling so humiliated after hearing this insult left their room immediately ...While Astha was feeling super happy on shlok's behaviour...she was continuously staring him...

As additi left shlok looked into her eyes once again...

Shlok:''kyaaa hai...jao ja kar merey liye coffee le kar aayo''...

Astha was surprised at his changing moods...a second earlier he was claiming infront of additi that he loves her and now he became akdu once again...

Shlok:kya dekh rahi ho...jao naaa...he spoke loudly...

Astha:acha ja rahi hoon but aap se kuch kehna chati hoon...

Shlok:kyaaa???...he made a twisted face...

Astha kissed him instantly and rushed outside the room saying that i love you mr. akdu...

Shlok smiled ''yeh really bohat badtameez ho gayi hai...iss ka kuch tu karna pardhey ga''...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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till last week it was raining cats and dogs..but today its ur OSs..loved it!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sreekailas

till last week it was raining cats and dogs..but today its ur OSs..loved it!!!!!!!!

thank u sooo much 😛😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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stop saying this ..''don't be a spoilsport''...''don't be a spoilsport''..he imitated her...and said.''i m getting irritated by hearing this stupid line repeatedly''...

mujhe hairat hai ke tumhein 4 saal ki umer main kya kya hua sab yaad hai ...but roz raat ko bhoot ban kar tum kya kya karti ho...yeh tumhein yaad nahi rehta...really surprising ...
loved dese 2 responses frm shlok!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sreekailas

stop saying this ..''don't be a spoilsport''...''don't be a spoilsport''..he imitated her...and said.''i m getting irritated by hearing this stupid line repeatedly''...


mujhe hairat hai ke tumhein 4 saal ki umer main kya kya hua sab yaad hai ...but roz raat ko bhoot ban kar tum kya kya karti ho...yeh tumhein yaad nahi rehta...really surprising ...
loved dese 2 responses frm shlok!

🤣😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
Really aditi needs that firing frm shlok
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: swathin

Nice update
Really aditi needs that firing frm shlok

true...she really needs such a treatment...and thank u sooo much dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Evn i ws getng iritatd by aditis "dnt be a spoiltsport" atitude😡 acha sunaya shlok ne😈 dil ko thndak pad gayi😃
U hv a whole treasure of os's in ur brain👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this one is awesome yaar

shlok imitating aditi..lol..good one that was..hope in actual also..shlok shouts at her..and makes her realise she is guest..so behave like one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Evn i ws getng iritatd by aditis "dnt be a spoiltsport" atitude😡 acha sunaya shlok ne😈 dil ko thndak pad gayi😃
U hv a whole treasure of os's in ur brain👏



true..she has treasure of OS's

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