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Hola guys :D

Enjoy the update and thanks for ur likes and comments on last update :)

This update is dedicated to Kanica and my ridzy darling.


Chapter 8 :Meant to be together


Taani and her team mates were driving towards their destination.They were all set to ruin Vardhaan's plan.They didn't informed head quarters about their mission and no one except these four was aware of it.They were taking a very big risk by proceeding their plan but they has no other option.

~

Rey and D3 team were standing outside Sharon's house.They were all set to leave for their cruise event.They were hell excited as it was their first time to perform on some cruise.

They all started their journey towards outskirts of Mumbai from where the Cruise will board.They settled down in two different cars.

As they started their journey Rey was restless.Since morning he was trying to talk to Taani but her phone was out of reach.He was really worried about her injury and he was upset coz he didn't get any chance to inform Taani about his event.

~
Taani,Karan,Jai and Shaleen boarded the cruise.They were really excited and were looking forward to this mission.

Jai:"I love these kinds of missions"

Jai said excitedly as they were passing through corridor to reach their room.

Karan:"Yep.Humari khadoos boss vaise to chutti deti nahi hai.So,Mission ke saath aaj thodi masti bhi ho jayegi"

He said eyeing Taani.Taani and Shaleen shook their heads on their team mates silly talks.

Taani:"Bhai,Lets get fresh n up and then we'll meet on deck for further planning"

She said entering inside her room.Her team mates room was just beside hers.The trio nodded to Taani and then entered inside their room.

~

Rey and D3 team also boarded on cruise and they were spellbound with the beauty of cruise.They were really excited to perform here.They first wandered around on deck and then after checking on reception they decided to rest for some time.

~


Taani was sitting in balcony of her room.She was dressed in a simple blue semi-sleeved dress.Her shoulder injury was still paining a lot.Her teams mates even requested her to stay back and rest but she was adamant to not miss this opportunity.She was very much excited for this mission.It was her passion to play with danger.It was like a drug for her.She was addicted to this life style.Girls traits were not present in her.And she hated when anyone underestimated her talent only because she is a girl.

She was thankful to her Papa for handling her mother.She respected and loved her mother a lot but still her mother's continuous displeasure for her job was hurting her a lot.She wanted her mother to be proud of her instead of showing her displeasure.

As these thoughts were passing through her mind she couldn't control a certain person's thoughts invading territory of her mind.

The person who is now days 24 x 7 in her mind.The person who just entered some days back in her life and changed her life totally.

The person who never judged her.He neither showed any displeasure for her work and nor underestimated her talent only because she is a girl.

He was like a open book in front of her.He never hid any of his face from her.He was not like some other random guy.

In these few days she met his many roles.His passion and dedication for dance,his love for his friends,his sweetness towards his all fans,his naughty behavior with her,his innocence,his stubbornness,his trust in her,his care for her and more over his love for her.

His confession still gave her goose bumps all over her body.The way he confessed his love for her and asked her for marriage.

It was so easy for him to express his love.He explained his deep feelings in those three magical words and she still is struggling to express her feelings to him.

He faced so many problems since beginning.She could understand his pain.She knew its really painful to live without parents.But she was surprised with the way he hid his pain from everyone.Last night she was surprised when he mentioned her parents as Mom-Dad.But at that time she could feel something inside her.Her heart felt lighter than before.It sounded so good from his lips.

In beginning she was confused about her feelings for him but after last night she is damn sure that she wants to spend rest of her life with him but still its getting very difficult for her to express her love to him.

She was still lost in her thoughts when she heard someone knocking on her door.She got up and opened the door.She was expecting her team mates but what she saw made her eyes go wide and her mouth hung open.

~
Rey and Swayam were standing on deck waiting for their friends when Rey noticed Karan and Jai there.He was surprised to see them there.A little hope got in his heart that Taani might be also there.He knew he was being impractical and silly but he didn't wanted to miss this chance if actually his girl friend is here.

With hope in his heart and fingers crossed he moved towards them.

Karan and Jai were really surprised to see Taani's Romeo there.They inquired him and then got to knew that he and his team was performing there on cruise.They could not help a wicked smile appearing on their faces.God was also with these love birds and gave them chance to spend some quality time.So,they both getting the message of god acted like messengers of god to unite these love birds.

They gave Rey instruction of Taani's room and asked him to go and surprise Taani.

~
And now he was here.Standing outside her room and watching her shocked state.She was still shocked to the core and didn't reacted at all.

He shook her a little and then she came back to her senses.

Taani:"Rey,what are you doing here?"

She asked loudly.

Rey:"Hie"He waved his hand and passed a bright smile.And then entered inside.She allowed him and then closed the door behind him and then turned towards him.

Taani:"What are you doing here?And how did you found that I am here?"

She asked desperately and he just smiled in response.She was getting irritated with his smile.

Taani:"Mr.Reyaansh Singhania,I am asking you something?"

She said loudly in her threatening tone.He pinned her to the wall.

Rey:"Shhh..."

He shushed her by keeping his finger on her lips.She just looked at him and then his finger simultaneously.

Rey:"Kitna bolti ho tum"

He said smirking and placing a peck on her lips.Her lips again formed a perfect O shape.

Taani:"Rey batao na,What are you doing here?"

She asked again desperately.

Rey:"Following you,I guess"

He said kissing down her throat.She was just lost in his touch when she felt his lips on her skin.But getting the meaning of his words she smacked his shoulder.

Rey:"Me n my team got an offer to perform on cruise.How are your injury now?"

He explained for formality and then started removing her dress from her shoulder to look for her injury.She just smacked his hand away.

Taani:"What are you doing?"

She said blushing hardly.He just smirked and leaned forward and looked into her eyes.

Rey:"I was just looking for your injury.What did you thought?"

He asked in his playful tone.She just pushed him back in fake anger and started moving away but he held her wrist and pulled her back.

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And before she could say anything he placed his lips on hers.She was surprised with his sudden movement and could not gather herself for the kiss.

He pushed her lightly on wall and started kissing her deeply.He nibbled her lower lip mercilessly and she was just trying to match up his movements.He left her wrist and held her firmly from her waist and she wandered her hands in his hair.

Her this act always takes him to new heights of passion.He was dying to enter in her mouth but she was still not able to match up his movements.He squeezed her waist in between his hands and she gasped with the sudden moment.And getting the chance he entered his tongue in her territory.

And after that she just melted in his arms.She was all lost and got introduced to new heights of passion.

He left her waist and cupped her face in his hands and kissed her more deeply and she just pulled him more into kiss.

His hands went down from her face and he opened the top buttons of her dress and pulled her dress from her shoulders and gave a gentle massage to her injured shoulder.She felt heaven when he did so and she moaned lightly with pain and pleasure.

He pulled off from the kiss to give her much needed oxygen but his ministration on her body didn't stopped.He started planting kisses down her throat and then moved towards her shoulder.

Her hands opened his shirt button to its own accord and she started roaming her hands on his back.

As he could not control more he started moving towards bed and then both lied down on it .He kept kissing her shoulder and her dress was loose hung on lower part of her body and his shirt was lying down on floor.

He worshiped her upper body like there is no tomorrow. She was so overwhelmed with his passion and his love.She just wanted him at that very moment.Her hands went to buckel of his belt and she tried to open it but he came back to his senses and stopped kissing her.

He got up little and helped her to get up too.

Tears brimmed through her eyes as she faced his rejection for the second time.She could not believe that he was committing the same mistake again.

But he was well aware of her state and didn't repeated his mistake of leaving her alone.He just turned towards her and kissed her full on her lips.She protested due to her anger but he held her wrists in his hands and kissed her deeply.She too gave in after some time.

After kissing her for long and assuring her with his kiss and broke away and kept his forehead on hers.She still lie on bed and he just above her.

Rey:"I am sorry,Baby.I know you are confused about your feelings and I don't want to rush you.I'll wait for you forever.I want our first time to be really special.So,We have to wait for it lil more"

He said looking deep in her eyes and then after completing sucked her tears which flowed down her cheeks.She just smiled on his thoughtfulness. She could not thank god enough.She felt the luckiest person on earth when he uttered those words for her and only her.

He lied down beside her and she kept her head on his chest.And he kept giving light kisses and massage to her injured shoulder.

Precap:Dishum-Dishum,Lots of romance n TR Dance :)



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Edited by butterfly-ravee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello I am sorry I couldnt comment before. U know na exams just killed me. I wanted to be the first one to comment on the update but I m not the first one. I hope I am not the last one to comment.

Originally posted by: butterfly-ravee

Hola TaaReyians :)

This update is dedicated to Kanica for eating my brain to update fast. lol.


Are waaah!!!

This update is dedicated to me..

Thank you so much!!!

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Chapter 7 : Eternal Love

(Maha Update)


Taani is sitting in her cabin and is silently sipping her coffee while reading a case file. That's the best thing about her which everyone admires.No matter how stressed she is,no matter how many problems she have in her life but she'll never let anything overpower her work. She always keeps her personel and professional life separate. Even if everything is messed up in her personal life even then she'll give her hundred percent to her duty.And that's why everyone in her field respects her for what she is.

Taani was still busy in her file when her phone ringed.

Taani:"Hello"

She replied immideately after checking the caller's name. Its Farhan,her most trusted informer.

After chucking the call she called her team in her cabin to discuss over the information she got just now.

Karan:"I thought you were joking when you gave off to Jai.That's not fair Taani."

He said crying over his yesterday's conversation with his not-so-fair-friend.

Shaleen:"What happened Taani.You are looking stressed over some matter"

Shael noticed that since they entered inside Taani is pacing the room in tension. She is definitely thinking over something deeply.

Taani:"Bhai I got call from my informer. Tomorrow Vardhaan is selling over his consinement over seas. How is this even possible.He is here in cell and Raana would never take such step without Vardhaan's order"

Karan and Shaleen were definitely shocked and confused after what Taani told them. Here they are planning to catch Raana and Vardhaan's illegal consinement but Vardhaan is one step ahead from them.He already planned to sell off his whole material before NCB could reach it.

Taani:"I am sure there is someone in NCB who is helping that Vardhaan.But the real tension is that we don't even know who the hell those buyers are.Even after such tight security they are planning to smuggle drugs from our country."

Taani was hell angry with everything happening around her. Her informer could not get whole information about the buyers.

Karan:"Are you sure that this information is correct. There are possibilies that this might be a trap for us"

Taani:"Do you think I don't know that. There are 80% possibilities of it being a trap for us. But I can't back down now. These drugs are killing people.And We don't even know who those buyers are. If we'll let it go now then they might sell these over whole India and after that we'd be helpless.I just can't risk our country's safety,not now. Even for 20% possibilities we have to take this step. So,I am in for this even if this is a trap. Now its your decision whether you want to continue or step back"

She said in her confident tone.She looked at her friends to know their decision. Actually they don't even need to voice it coz she knew that stepping back would be the last thing in their mind.They are the best officers of her team .

Karan:"So What's the plan Boss.I know there is something cooking in that Shatir brain of urs."

He said giving a pat over Taani's back.She rolled her eyes.Karan never leaves a chance to comment on her .

Shaeleen:"Let's call Jai also.Or else he'd eat our brain that we left on a mission without him "

Taani:"Yeah or else he'd defiantely start his Drama over again.But this mission is a secret in between us four.We can't risk this time.I am sure someone is working for that Varshaan from our team"

Karan and Shaeleen nodded in understaniding.

After calling Jai they discussed over the plan .Around six Taani decided to visit her home to meet her parents.


Sorry but I didnt read this part carefully as I always read Taarey part carefully in every OS SS or FF. So sorry for that

After bidding bye to her team mates she left .She was moving in parking lot to get her car when she saw Rey standing there with a bouquet of roses.

She smiled looking at his puppy face.He was definitely the best thing happened so far with Taani. But she got reminded of his stupidity last night. So,She moved forward with a stern face.Ignoring him totally.

Awww Rey standing there with bouquet of roses. So sweet.

He followed her till her car.

Rey:" I am sorry"

He forwarded the rose bouquet but she jerked it off and gave him a cold stare.

Rey:"Taani,I am sorry.Plz forgive me.I didn't did it intentionally.Please just forgive me last time .I won't repeat that mistake again"

He said again with a puppy face.Taani was having a hard time to not just grab him and kiss him senselessly.He was making such cute faces.She decided to forgive him but then his next words angered her more.

Rey:"I am sorry for losing control.But I promise I'd never do anything against your will.I don't know how I lost my senses .Why are so silent now.Plz speak something"

This scene was nice but Rey without knowing the reason of her being angry started saying these words.


Taani:" I am so fed up with you. Why can't you understand that I too have some expectations from you.I also want my boyfriend to understand me.I want you to speak something But you always behave like if you'll open your mouth then I'll eat you up. I am not some monster.I am just a cop but that doesn't mean I'll shoot you if you'll open your mouth. Its true we girls like to dominate our boyfriends but that too only till some limits,After that we want our boyfriends to care for us,to love us without any fear.But you behave like a..."


My favorite dialogue. I love the way Taani said these lines.

Rey grabbed her waist tightly and pulled her towards him with a force.She collapsed on his chest but before she could react he slammed his lips on her to shut her mouth.

He started kissing her senselessly.She too lost her all control and grabbed his collar in her fists and started kissing him back.He deepened the kiss after her surrender.But he again broke the kiss abruptly.

Rey:"Shit...I am sorry.I am sorry I again kissed you without your permission.Sorry..."


Not again Rey.

She pushed him in anger.

Taani:"You just go to hell.You are just...ahhh...Just go away from my sight or else I'll definitely shoot you with my revolver. Just go away you idiot. And don't dare you come in front of me again"

She shouted and drove away from there in her car.

~

Taani entered inside her mansion.She saw her parents sitting there in living room and having their tea.

Taani:Papa ,I missed you so much"

She ran towards her father and hugged him from back.He smiled and kept his tea cup on table and stood up and hugged her back.

Mr.Shekhawat:Awww my Baccha I missed you too"

Taani:"So How was your honeymoon?"

She asked her father and teasing her mom.

Mrs.Shekhawat:"Hat Pagal.Kuch bhi bolti hai."

Her mom smacked her head and then hugged her too.

Taani:"Hitler main aapse thode hi pooch rahi hu.Main to apne Darling Dad se baat kar rahi hu.Kyu aapko Jalan ho rahi h kya?"

Mr.Shekhawat:Yes My princess is talking to me.Vaise my honeymoon was too boring Baccha.Teri Maa to poore din Shaadi ki preprations mein hi lagi thi.Romance ka to time hi nahi tha inke paas.Phir mujhe dosh deti h ki main unromantic hoon"

He said sighing dramatically.Taani's mom was all red due to embarrassment.

Taani:"Haaye mere bechare Papa.Saare plans flop kar diye Maa ne"

Mrs.Shekhawat:"Kuch to sharam karo tum dono.Accha ye chodo tu kaha thi abtak.Aur humein lene airport kyu nahi aayi?"

Taani mom said changing the topic.

Taani:"Sorry Maa.Vo kuch zaroori kaam aa gaya tha.And tomorrow I have to leave for a mission also.So,I was just preparing for it only"

She said while they all settled down on couch.

Mrs.S: "Haaye phir se mission.Mujhe to teri ye naukri samajh mein hi nahi aati.Maine to bola the ladkiyon jaisi koi acchi naukri karle par tere hi sar pe bhoot savar tha.Pata nahi kya hoga Iss ladki ka.Kaun Shaadi karega isse."

She completed dramatically and Taani and her father rolled their eyes on her never ending drama.

They started talking about random stuff after that.Then Taani got a call from her secret informer and she left house to meet him outside.Her Mom again started her drama that she doesn't even have time to spent with her family.But her father assured her that he'll handle his wife and she should go and complete her duty.


I loved Taani's bond with her parents.

~

Rey was doing rehersals with his friends but his mind was lost somewhere else.He was trying to understand that what was the reason behind Taani's anger.

Sharon:"Guys we have a new event offer"

Sharon stopped everyone and announced about their new offer.Everyone hooted and cheered .

Sharon:"Tomorrow there is a big party on Cruise at outskirts of Mumbai.And they offered us to perform in their evening party and also we'll get chance to spend whole day on cruise absolutely free of charges"

Everyone got happy but Rey was definitely lost in some other world.

Swayam:"What happened,Rey.Where are you lost?"

Swayam asked gaining his attention.

Rey:"Nothing dude.You guys please carry on.I have to leave for some work."

Rey excused himself and left from there with a new mission in his mind.

~

Taani stopped her car near Sea port.It was dark outside and very few lights were there on port.It was a vacant place where no one comes.This port was closed long ago.So Taani decided to keep her meeting here only.

She took out her revolver from her bag and stepped down.She dialed her informers number but no one was picking up the call.She followed the ringing of phone and entered inside a old buildng type.There also light was dim but was enough to see the surroundings and there she saw Farhan's dead body lying there.She checked surroundings but no one was there.But she was sure that the killer must be hiding somewhere there to attack on Taani.

So,Instead of going towards Farhan she turned around to leave.She just took two steps and as she expected two men came out from behind the containers.

Man 1: "Drop your Gun over there and raise your hands"

He said in his heavy voice.Taani turned around and there they were standing with guns in their hands.

She didn't obliged and as she expected they started moving towards her.She just lowered her hands but didn't left the revolver.

Man 2:"Don't be oversmart with us.Just do as we say or else you'll lose your life"

He threatened again but Taani waited for them to come near her.

The first man came near her and he snatched her revolver from her hand and threw it to his mate.He tried to punch Taani on her stomach but she was fast and she grabbed his hand and pulled him down and shot him with his own Gun.

The other guy tried to shoot Taani but she kicked off his gun and it fell down on ground.She grabbed his hand too and held it behind his back and kicked him on his stomach with her knee.He fell down on ground and Taani kicked him hard on his face and blood started oozing out from his mouth.

Taani:"Next time act more and speak less"

He lost his conscious with her constant attacks.She grabbed her revolver from ground and was about to pick him up to take him at headquarters for investigation but suddenly someone shot that guy from outside.He shot another bullet at Taani but she was fast enough to jump aside.She saw that guy was masked and he started running away.

Taani loaded her revolver and followed him.She was running behind him to grab him but he too was not weak.She didn't even wanted to kill him by shooting.He also tried to shot her by turning behind but she every time saved herself.

Finally she got hold of him.She grabbed his jacked and tried to undo his mask but he kicked her hard on her stomach and pushed her back.She tried get hold of him again but got tangled with rope lying there on port and hit the rod hard and her shoulder and right hand started bleeding.

That man started running but Taani shot him on his leg and then he was not able to run fastly.

But before she could hold him he jumped into water beside port.

Taani shied angrily on guts of this man and jumped behind him.She tried to find him everywhere in water but he just disappeared from there and Darkness around was not helping her much.

~

Taani:"I'll just kill that bas***d if I'll find him somewhere."

Karan and Jai chuckled over her childlike frustration.

Karan and Shaeleen were checking the three dead bodies for some proof And Jai was tending Taani's wounds.

Jai:"Jhaasi ki rani,why didn't you informed any of us before coming here.You don't leave any chance to put yourself in danger"

He said while stiching her cut on shoulder.

Shaeleen:"Taani don't be sad.You did a great job.These evidences can help us a lot."

Shaeleen tried to cheer her up.Kajai also nodded.

Taani:"Ya Bhai but I lost my best informer today.And he was planning to give me some important information about tomorrow's mission.But they killed before I could arrive here"

After that they called ambulance to take dead body to Jai's forensic Lab.They collected all evidences from around and dead bodies cell phones,valet for further investigation.

After Shaleen's strict order Taani left for house to rest.KaJai and Shaleen decided to stay at headquarters for some preprations for tomorrows mission.


Again sorry I didnt read this part also.

~

Taani opened her house door with spare key.She tiptoed through living room.She didn't wanted to wake her parents.Its already 2 am and her mother would surely eat her alive if she'll get to know about her injury.

As she started moving from stairs someone switched on kitchen's light.She saw her Papa standing there and warming food for her.She shied and moved towards him.

Taani:"Papa,Why didn't you slept?"

She asked sitting on dinning table.He came out with plate full with food.

Mr.S:"First wash your hands"

He ordered her as she tried to take food plate from him.She showed her bandaged hand to him.

He sat down beside her and started feeding her with his own hands.

Taani:"Where is Maa?"

She asked while chewing her food.

Mr.S: "She slept after taking her medicines.Thank god or else I don't know how she would have reacted after seing your hand.By the way how did this happened"

She explained him everything in detail.He smiled on the way she was explaining everything in detail with action of her hands.He commented where needed and gave her some wise advises too.She also listened everything carefully.She really respects her father's advises.

Mr.S:"By the way there is a surprise for you in your room."

Taani:"Surpise! What Surprise?"

She asked excitedly.He smiled and got up to leave for his room.

Mr.S:"Go and check yourself.And ya ask your surprise to leave in an hour,Maximum"


Awww Taani has so caring n loving father but protective too. Nice

She was more confused with his last words.She walked towards her room to see her surprise.



Nice dress

She entered inside and closed the door.It was pitch dark in room.She switched on the lights and heart almost failed when she saw the scene of her room.

Many boquets of Red roses were kept there on her bed,couch.But the real shock was that that There Rey was sleeping on couch in between of bouquets in sitting position.

She came out from shock and moved towards him.She shake him from his shoulder and then he got up.

Rey:"Oh when did u came?"

He asked like a child rubbing his sleepy eyes.

Taani:"What the hell are you doing here?"

She asked trying to show her anger but was failing at it.

Rey:"Oh I was waiting for you to return.But then I slept.And these roses for conveying my Sorry.Now I understood why you were angry on me"


Chalo Rey understand y she was angry.

Taani gaped at him in shock.

Taani:"What...what did you understood"

She asked feeling embarrassed.He smiled and took a step ahead towards her and she in reflex action took a step behind.

Rey:"Why didn't you tell me what you wanted last night"

He asked coming more close to her and she again stepped back.

Taani:"I..I...I didn't wanted anything"

She tried to answer back but was stuttering badly.Her back hit the wall and before she could run he caged her in between his hands by placing them on wall.

Rey:"You wanted me to continue ,ri8?"

He asked looking staright in her eyes.She shook her head in denial.

Rey:"Oh is it so.But I really want to continue what I left yesterday in middle.So Can I?"


Rey is so naughty.

She blushed in deep shade of red.He got his green signal.

He grabbed her waist with his right hand and pulled her towards him.He started placing wet kisses at base of her throat.She too grabbed his shoulders and arched her neck to give him better access.His hands automatically made their way in her top.She wanted him to kiss her but he was just doing time paas all around .She grabbed his hair and pulled him in a deep fierce kiss.

Rey:"Impatient haaa"

He said teasing her but she bit his lower lip hard to stop his teasing.

Rey:"Why your clothes are damp"

He asked noticing her top wet with water,it was sticking to her body .

Taani:"I was playing Holi outside"

She chucked and again pulled him in a kiss.While kissing they both started moving towards back and fell down on bed.

He started kissing her more deeply.After kissing for long they parted away and he started kissing her neck again.His hands were teasing her belly button and she was losing her control totally.He suddenly tried to remove her jacket and top from her shoulder and that time she winced in deep pain.

Romantic part loved it


Taani:"Ahhh"

He got confused that what happened to her suddenly.But then he noticed some blood on his hands.He got up from above her and saw her jacket damp with blood.

He pulled out her jacket carefully.Her sleeveless top/vest gave perfect view of her bandaged shoulder now bandage was also drenched in blood due to his actions.

(Ravee:Guys she was wearing some other jacket before but then she changed it coz it was drenched with blood and she didn't wanted to scare her parents,especially her mom.Now from where she got new jacket,don't ask me.Plzz. )

(Ravee:Jai tended it coz her vest/top had no sleeves.There were just wide straps in it.Hope you can imagine.)

Rey:"Damnit"

He swore loudly and got up from bed.

Rey:"Where the hell is first aid box"

She mentioned towards cupboard and he came back with first aid box.He unwrapped her bandage.

Rey:"What the hell is your problem girl.How dare you hide such thing from me.I am your boyfriend and I have all the rights to know each and everything about my girlfriend and you hid such big thing from me.Just because of me your wound got deep.Are you mad or what?"

He cleaned her wound and bandaged it again.After completing his work he gave her a pain killer he too lied beside her on bed.

Rey:"How are you feeling.Is it paining a lot"

Caring boyfriend.


She smiled and shook her head in denial and snuggled in his chest to sleep.

Taani:"How did you entered inside?"

Shee asked looking up from his chest.

Rey:"Through door,obviously"

He said as a matter of fact.She slapped him on his chest.

Taani:"Through which door?"

Rey:"Main door.Why?"

She sat beside him.

Taani:"Are you the surprise Papa was talking about?"

He too sat beside her.

Rey:"I don't know.May be.I met him downstairs and he suggested me to wait for you here.And I had my dinner with Mom-Dad and they are really impressed with me.So,Our line is clear now."

She got up angrily.

Taani:"Wat the F...I thought you sneaked inside through window,God now Maa will not leave me for even a second.She'll eat my head to marry you as soon as possible.You are so unromantic.I thought to continue this dating period for 1 or 2 years.But Now Maa wll get me married in a month only"

She shouted on him angrily.

Rey:"Calm down sweetheart.I'll convience Mom to wait for an year atleast.And I thought its not right to enter inside a girls bedroom withour her parents permission.That's why I asked them to allow me to keep these bouquets in your room"

She looked at him more shocked with his words.

Taani:"Rey this is 2014.Nowdays every guy enters inside his girlfriend's room without anyone's permission.I hope you didn't asked their permission for kissing me"

Rey:"No.Its little awkward to ask such things.But if you have any problem then I can ask them for you"

He tried to joke but She looked at him shocked with his words.He chuckled at her expression.

Taani:"Rey you are just impossible.Just get the hell out of here before I shot you with my revolver.Just leave"

She spat her words angrily.He moved towards her and held her waist.

Rey:"Okay Okay Calm down darling.I won't ask them for anything from now on.And If you want then from tomorrow onwards I'll come through this window.Okay.Now you go and sleep.I'll call you in morning.Bye.Good night"

He pecked her lips and left from there.After he left she got changed into her night dress and slept dreaming about Rey only.


Nice part

to be continued~

Precap:Dishum-Dishum and Lots of romance.

No Proof reading.

PM's Later

Hola Again :D

So how was it guys? Plz tell me your fav part from update.Plz.

And I have a request.Guys I don't want to repeat it again and again but as you all knw that I m in 12th and its very difficult for me to write my stroies along with studies.But I also love to write so thats why I have no control on myself.But It took a lot of time and energy to write so long updates.So I expect long comments from you.You comments really encourages me.So,plz Give long comments if you want me to give big and fast updates.Plz its a request.

About Fic:

I am planning to complete this SS in some chapters.So,Now 3 more chapters and then epilogue.Thanks a lot for your constant love and support :D

Next update: Chapter 8- 25/3/14(After 9pm)

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Edited by taashareyam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: butterfly-ravee



<font color="#ff0000" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">To Karle Pooja...I wnt mind. Jeete Raho Baalak ;)</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2"><font color="#ff0000">I also love him...Muahhh :*) :*) </font><font color="#ff00ff">(its for Rey nt for u :P )</font></font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">Yaar stry to end karni hi padegi na...but abhi to 3 chapters bache h.</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">Chal lets see agar expand kar sakti hu to.</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">Okay...Naughty Rey...done boss.</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">Dnt be sad..One Muahhh for u also :*)</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">Thanks dear for d lovely comment :D</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">Thanks dear for d lovely comment :)</font>
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<font color="#ff0000" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Thanks DI.</font>
<font color="#ff0000" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I am glad u liked the update.</font>
<font color="#ff0000" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">And thanks for mentioning the parts u loved the most :D</font>
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<font color="#ff0000" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Hmmm Yeah. ;)</font>
<font color="#ff0000" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Thanks for comment re :D</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">Thanks dear :D</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">Thanks dear :D</font>
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Ohhh [:O] tu meri fav
Dil ke pass wale stry end kar
Rahi hai nahiii 😭
taani.priya1997 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres
chapter -8 awesome loved every line of it '
rey's naughtiness yet passionate kiss going to bed and then ultimately stopping
and then again kissing her but with the love and made her understand his reason of not going forward and ultimately taani realized and is loving him more and more
waiting for the next raviee
update soon
Edited by taani.priya1997 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely cute and romantic
loved taani's braveness
and the way she did her duty
rey what tosay abt hin
asking taani's parents permission for putting bucket in her room
lovely
taani what to say abt her
loved her naughtiness

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..
Tani shocked at seeing rey!
Rey givinv massage to Tani!
Rey's thoughtfullness is so sweet..
Excited for precap..
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Posted: 11 years ago
haaye...
maar daalaaa!
allaahhh
maar daala!
allaahhh!!! 😆
seriously paisa wasool tha
it was such a cute coincidence
both the love birds meeting
and uske baad me kuch bol nahi saqti
i felt as if u were healing the pain i went thru in
WMWB
it was so emotional and brimmed with love
and taani was missing his love the next second
but love rey for his thoughtfulness
waise ye sab toh har update me hona hi hai 🤣 ☺️
will be waiting for nxt update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab update!!!!! Very romantic one!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Super romantic update
Love it
Rey surprise Taani... Lovely
Taarey romance cute
Rey understood Taani feeling love it
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow :) Wow :) Wow :)
Awesome update :)
Amazing :)
Mind blowing :)
Fabulous :)
Loved it :)
Rey is so so so so good :)
I'm floored :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)

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