SwaRon FF : Kahi Ankahi [JDM S2] #2 | CH 14 - PG 20 : 25th Feb' 14 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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swaron honeymoon. happy moments.. bt who is swayam's mother? waiting 4 d secret 2 reveal
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update..👏
hope swayam's mother will not create any problem in swaron's honeymoon..
super excited to read the next chapter..pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
amazingg part👏
d ice-cream part was cutee😆
waiting for d nxt part😳
hope swayam's mom doesnt create any probs
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Posted: 11 years ago
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*Un-Reserved*

Mariummm!! 😃
Sorryyy here too, mera sorry puraan is never ending re baba 🤢
Okay firstly Congratulations for the new thread! Both the works are going awesome ah, gooodd!!
This story has been awesome since its start.
And coming to the updates, each update is wow and am loving sharon swayam bond over and over again.
Deepy again! Super cute, intelligent and total sweetheart 😃
The farmhouse time was really very nicely penned, swayam sharon solved their misunderstanding and sharon even celebrated swayam's bday which was awesome.
but you know i am super eager to mention that line which cracked me up big time...when sharon wakes up and sees swayam not wearing his shirt and then her mind thinks "Did we do that?" 🤣
🤣
Lol moment for me!
Then rey kria are so sweet here! Poor rey..kria ke haath pit gya...haha
And Honeymoon tickets to singapore..coooll!
That cake from swayam's office is send some evil for sure. And you know i am still suspicious about sarah! 😆
Then the list handed to kria from sharon was sharon pagal h literally.
The laptop scene in singapore was thrashed oops the battery! Lol niceee it was!
I am waiting to read about singapore!!
Updateee.
Edited by surbhimathur - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved d update a lot..

it was beautiful.. n awesome..

swaron leaving to singapore for a week after nagging KR to cut short 2 weeks to 1...

sharon gave 43 pointed list of do n don't to kria for taking care of deepy.. like kria said sharon s more like a mother to deepy than sister n al ll want a mom like her..

so wen swayam returns back he ll get to c his so called mom's photo n know how she looks too..

poor battery had to face its death coz swayam sneaked laptop along with him to singapore poor battery..

ice-cream scene was cute n funny,...

so swayam gonna propose sharon in singapore nice waiting for that scene n next part...

Edited by vaishu88 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Marium 😊
Awesome update
loved it ❤️
loved way the how swayam and sharon was teasing each other
its great to see sharon cares so much for deepy as a mother
deepy is sooo adorable and cute loved her and her antics❤️
swayam and sharon went to singapore for their honeymoon great
pretty much excited about their honeymoon 😳
the description of their suite was damn good loved it ❤️ it is indeed a lavish suite
the ending was just awesome
sharon throws laptop battery and as well as ate swayam's ice-cream 😆
and hoping that swaym's mother does not trouble them in their honeymoon
the update is penned down beautifully 👏
splendid job 👍🏼
u r indeed a brilliant and exceptional writer
looking forward to read further
so plzzz update soon and do pm me
and thanks for the pm...

P.S:very sorry for late commenting 😳


Edited by dashinggirl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the chapter was amazing... i hope kriya and rey does take care of deepy well...
and i finally liked all their moments of spend time together of swayan and sharon and yup
they are on to road around place... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loving this kahi ankahi to the core of my heart. swaron bonding is superb, simply awesome.. nd dipi is so lovely n cute.. swaron honeymoon in singapore.. update soon yar nd plz do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter # 14


"Food Playground, National Orchid Garden, Marina Bay, Asian Civilizations Museum, Flower Dome, Bodha Tooth Relic Temple, Singapore Flyer, Marina Bay Sands Sky park, Wonderful light and Water show, China town heritage centre, The Southern Ridges, Flight experience Flight Simulator, S.E.A Aquarium, Jurong East Swimming Complex, St. Andrew's Cathedral, Bugis Street, Singapore XD Theatre, River Safari and Raffles Country Club." Sharon read all the names but they were just 19, once was left down by Swayam, may be. Mean while Sharon was reading this Swayam had already walk out of the washroom, dressed and was standing behind her watching her read, "Happy? You screwed but surprise!" Swayam said glaring at Sharon. Sharon bit her tongue and mouthed sorry'. "But hey these are only 19?" Sharon asked flipping the paper. Swayam didn't reply anything about this more, "What is this Sharon? We need to go and you are still standing here. Come on, you will ruin all the time!" Swayam argued. He took the paper from her hand and kept it in the drawer and they soon left the room. "Swayam how will be travel, cab?" Sharon asked in the lift. "That has already been under control, ma'am!" Swayam said like a servant. "You are too funny!" Sharon laughed at him and encircled her arm through his arm.


When they stepped out of the hotel a car, rather an amazing looking white car was parked at the side with a man standing aside it, holding "Mr. Swayam Shekhawat' banner in his hand. Sharon chuckled and shook her head, her husband was surely a luxury freak! "Stop thinking whatever you are thinking or else I am returning to the room," Swayam warned Sharon looking at her mocking face. Sharon glared at him in response, "One must never talk like this to his wife!" She said and giggled again, irritating Swayam a bit more. "Sharon, sit," He said sternly to Sharon who raised back her eye brow but seated. He also seated himself, beside and close enough to Sharon, "Where do you want to go, sir?" The driver asked once he started to drive, "To Urban Fairways," Swayam said and saw the driver, nodded. Sharon looked at Swayam and winked at him making him shock, "What was that for?" He asked. "There was something in m eyes!" Sharon said, simply. Swayam nodded and turned to another side and murmured, "Liar!" with a smile breaking on his lips. Which obviously Sharon heard, "I heard it. Bad manners to say a girl, liar'" Sharon said and winked again. "What now, liar?" Swayam asked smirking at Sharon. "Whatever it was, is still irritating me I guess." Sharon said started rubbing her eyes, faking. "Super liar!" He murmured again making Sharon laugh aloud and with her, he himself laughed. Sharon slide closer to him as he wrapped his arm around her shoulder pressing her side into his body. "Singapore looks quite good at night, seriously!" Sharon said amused looking at the places and lighting of outside the car. "Yeah, it's so fun and bright, right?" He asked and Sharon squealed in agreement.

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It would be an understatement to say Sharon squealed, gasped or was shocked to see the inner Urban Fairways. She was on verge of screaming with excitement, "Goodness, you didn't scream!" Swayam said eyeing people there, all English, Americans or Singaporeans, may b few were Asian presents too. "So what, people do it for fun, right?" Sharon said like this was no big deal and made a mouth like she was about to shout. Seeing her Swayam turned away like s stranger so that even if she shouts he could say that she is not with him. Sharon laughed and made him turn around, "Swayam, you are so mean!" Sharon said giggling at his face and punched at his chest. "No, I didn't turn to run to away from you!" He said and Sharon goes all awe, in mock. "Awe, how sweet, then?" She asked, "I was just seeing how many are there to prove you a mental!" He said and smirked at her. "Meany!" Sharon murmured. "I heard that!" Sharon pouted, "I know that!" He replied wrapping an arm around her and walking towards the bar. "The interior here is so cool. It is by wood, I love wooden furniture. I always thought to decorate my home with few aspects on wooden designs made by myself in that. I love decorating places, you know?" Sharon said in joy. "Yes, definitely these wooden designs and above all these small lights attacked with all of these looks just brilliant. You never told me you love interior designing?" Swayam asked asking one of the bar tender to come. "Err, may be never got a chance. Anyways, forget it. Order some drinks please!" Sharon said while the water reached to them. "Two tequila; on the rocks and cocktail for the lady," Swayam said straight forward. "No wait, actually make it 4 tequilas." Sharon corrected stopped Swayam as he tried to speak and indicate waiter to go and get the order. "I am not under age!" Sharon argued. "Have you even ever tasted tequila?" He asked looking at shocked. Sharon pouted, "No, but you drinking that so it must be good, right?" She pouted again, after all convincing Swayam.

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Swayam could never be more thankful that Sharon thought It tastes like shit' for tequila and didn't drink the second one. Good for him! So he got her cocktail drink. "I would have to wash my mouth with sanitizer in hotel afterwards, God how you are drinking it?" Sharon asked glaring at him. "Don't glare at me! I told not to drink!" Swayam said and chuckled, making fun of her. "This drink feels heaven right now in my mouth!" Sharon sighed, drinking a large gulp on her fruit cocktail. "You think tequila is bad and I hate fruit cocktail. It is so girly, stupidly girly in taste!" Swayam said humor. "And that is too manly in taste, way to manly. Suits you only, Man." Sharon said arranging herself in her long seat. Sharon suddenly saw above her. "Swayam how much money do you have right now?" She asked curiously. "You want something? I have cash and credit cards as well, why?" He asked looking where Sharon was looking. He saw Sharon was watching the thousands of wine glasses hanging to the ceiling in entire Urban Fairways, giving it a very amazing look, but even if one breaks, all others will follow that one. Goodness they had some super fast covering for it. As there was small electric wire attacked almost unnoticeable and even a slightest movement for even a second between those glasses will activate that wire and a thick matching wooden tray will appear under all the glasses and above the head's of people in here so that no one gets hurt. "What are watching?" Swayam asked. "Just thinking how much will it cost you if I will break even a single glass from all of these," Sharon said so calmly like she was speaking something very normal whereas Swayam gasped. "I need to run, I guess!" He said making Sharon laugh. They spend few more minutes there before walking towards the golf field.


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They entered in a plain field, green and totally clean from any dirt. "Here we go," Swayam said walking inside with Sharon. It was a large, rather extremely large spread grass field. "So these are the holes we are going to push throw the ball in, right?" Sharon asked disgusted, rather Swayam looked more disgusted at what she said. "We are not going to throw the ball. We will play, Sharon. Remember, play?" Swayam corrected her. "Oh, please. I know we will play, don't show off as if you only know everything in this world." Sharon said irritated and walked further outside of the bar and into the play field to found few lakes there as well. They couldn't be said as properly lake but eventually those were lake like. "Fine, your highness," Swayam stomped his feet on the field and ran to catch up with her. "So you are helping me?" Sharon asked looking around, seeing few people far across playing as well. They seemed to be a group of college teenagers but rest of the field was empty. "Why this is empty?" Sharon asked. "Because this is not a place for people who want to do random hang out and have beers and everything. This place is normally engaged in business meetings, lunch meetings and people like visiting here in day light. So you see there are not too many people," Swayam explained to Sharon, "Oh, so you have been here before?" She asked out of amusement. "Of course, few times but have never played though. This will be my first time playing Golf here. "Cool. Hey, but there those teenagers are present then if you know teenagers are considered to be not present anywhere in here?" Sharon asked pointing slightly to the teenage group she saw few minutes back. Unfortunately a guy from the group saw them and waved towards Swayam with a smile. Swayam waved back and smiled too, slightly. "You know him?" Sharon asked. "Apparently they are here because the I just waved practically owns Urban Fairways or rather say his father does. Remember, we have recently got a big contract from Singapore on which I am asking you to work?" Swayam said turning from the guy and walking towards their playing area while Sharon gripped his arm into her's. "Yeah, so?" She asked. "Well, you know... we have got the contract from Urban Fairways," He said,

Silence, silence, silence,'

Sharon has got into shock, merely.

"Alright, don't freak out..." Swayam said because he could see Sharon scolding and freaking out on him now. "Freak out? Did you just really say that, Urban Fairways, really?" Sharon did, freaked out. Swayam tried to say but poor he, couldn't. "You knew that this contract is so important yet you asked me' to hold this contract. It is Urban Fairways, didn't you realize? I can screw everything!" Sharon got on more hyper mode and whispered yelled at him. Swayam soothed her, "Alright, alright. I understand now. I will not force you anymore to handle it if you don't want it, alright? I promise." Sharon kept looking at the ground like she does when she gets scared and didn't react towards Swayam. "I promise, Sharon?" He asked again to get her to react. Sharon made a fist out of her palm and held the hem of her shirt tightly. Swayam pushed his body towards her and held her in his arms. Sharon slowly wrapped her arms around him too and inhaled his cologne. "I am sorry. You know all these suddenly having half you're your property and everything was so difficult to cope up, yet I tried. You helped a lot, but handling such a big contract and that too such an important one is just not my thing. I like doing normal and simple things. I won't be able to handle all this. I am sorry." Sharon lightly whispered in his arms whereas he in engaged in soothing her to make her normal again. He felt sorry for destroying her happy mood. "I should have understood it, it's totally fine!" Swayam lightly whispered in her ear. "No, don't say sorry. You know I think I panicked a bit... so I am sorry for that, but Swayam you should know I am not used to of these things. I had a very small life which I have dedicated to Deepy entirely and I never wanted to change it so when I see things changes like this, it's just... just... hard to adjust with all these sometimes. Not like I am not happy; I am believe me but still sometimes I just lose my confidence. I hope you can understand me, ya?"


Sharon asked quiet innocently like a small kid pleading for favorite candy but the answer she got made every innocence fade away from her face and brought shock, immediate shock to be kissed by Swayam Shekhawat.

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Can i have 60 likes and 10 pages spammed, please? 😳



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Edited by blush. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was an amazingg update as always
as a writer you did a fab work by creating two unique characters an audience will fall in love wit
the story which began wit two ppl who are emotionally incomplete and get completed by their mate-to-be turned into a heart-touching story
you are exceptionally clever, imaginative and ingenious about your story's concept and execution .
swaron on thr honeymoon finally n having fun which was like awesum
but the best was the end which was perfect 😳
do update soon
looking forward to your updates 🤗

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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