SwaRon FF : Kahi Ankahi [JDM S2] #2 | CH 14 - PG 20 : 25th Feb' 14 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Congo on your second thread!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊
I m new to IF nd have been following yr posts i mean yr FFs ie. JDM and JDM 2 or kahi ankahi nd Alphas Territory nd i have to say u r an awesome writer. i love yr concepts nd i really really am in love with this ffs or actually with all yr wrks. coming to this FF, u have done a really commendable job in expressing thngs nd feelings. i really loved the 12th chapter nd swayams happiness on the fact that his bday was celebrated in such a grand way nd that too sharon gave him a surprise was really nice. u really potryaed each nd every emotion well nd as i said before i love the concept as well as Deepy❤️...she is so cute!!!!!!!! nd she is so mature for her age!!!!!!!😃😃😃 i mean she understood many thngs u dont actually expect kids of her age to understand😉😉😉...nd sharon toh of course i love...she is the perfect wife for swayam and the perfect sister cum mother for deepy. loving the swayam deepy bond tooo...nd last but not the lest do update soon!!!!!!!will be eagerly waiting for the next update!!!!😊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Edited by swarontruelove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22


Reserved

Unreserved

First of all i am so sorry for the late comment.

I was very busy. 🤔

Congratulations for the new thread Marium 🥳

now coming to the update

Simply fabulous Marium!

Truly amazing

This was such an amazing chapter.

The celebration was simply perfect each and every part of it was so touching and so beautiful.

I really love seeing Deepika's and Swayam's bond. It is getting stronger and stronger by every update

The way swayam becomes a small kid with deepika. It is too adorable. I simply love reading those parts.

And the part where Sharon choked her drink. 😆 I was simply trying to imagine Sharon's face. 🤣

Nicely written 👍🏼 Lovely update.

Can't wait for their honeymoon track

Please update soon as i really can't wait.

Thanks for the PM

Update very soon and do PM me 😃

I am waiting.

Love you 🤗 Take care.

Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Congrats for the new thread
You really deserve it
Awesome update
Aaawww that was really sweet
I loved the bit between KriYam and Deepika-Swayam
I'm so happy the update was tension free
Please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
First of all congratulations for the new thread marium🥳
nd i'm so sorry for not commenting from 9th chap
i was very busy 😔
now coming to the update..
tere update kab acche nahi hote.. it was fabulous as usual😃

chap 9
I loved the opening scene where swayam admired sharon it was sooo pure and lovely I could imagine the looks he was giving to sharon while admiring her like that in the morning
I liked the little teasing that sharon did in bathroom😆
then swayam n deepy little convo was always pleasure to read coz both are way too cute
swaron romance part was just magical😳 well u r expert in writting romantic parts so no comments

chap10
Sharon and swayam's bond is getting stronger day by day
swayam immediately ate when sarah told him that sharon would'nt like it if he would'nt eat breakfast and sharon was touched when ajay told her that swayam had already told him to call her sharon
You described the farm house beautifully
Deepy's antics were as usual cute
and finally swaron misunderstanding is cleared

chap 11
so simple but sooo sweet😊
loved the jealous sharon
reyam's convo was hilarious n very much entertaining
sharon had made deepy sit upon him so that he does not run away🤣
the first time deepy was sacred and ran away from swayam bcoz of his irritating questions was that very hilarious 😆

chap12
i loved the description of deepy's greeting card.. such a sweetheart she is.. nd kitni creative bhi..
I wonder what was she telling Swayam which made Sharon stop her by putting her palm over her mouth.. Uska secret reveal karna please
rey's gift honeymoon tickets was great and sharon choked the pepsi on knowing what is rey's gift was funny 😆
Can't wait for their honeymoon track

update soon.. mere holidays chalu hai to iss time late nahi hoga.. my own selfish reason..
nd came to know about your eye infection
so get well soon and take care dear..
Edited by piyu1990 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
this is very much SwaRonish
I enjoyed it.

there was a lot of cuteness filled in the update.. And that's what I enjoyed the most..


All I can say is each one of them is antique.. unique in their own ways..

but that's how I love them..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Demand completed🥳🥳
Update update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
M late
Sowwieee
Congozz for d new thread 😊
D update was sooo sweet and cuteee 😊
Swayam's bday 😊
And kriyaansh,Sharon and deepy had planned a surprise for him 😊
I jus luvd kriyam part a lottt
And deepy I luvvv that cutie pie 😊
Now rey has booked tickets for swaron's honeymoon 😉
Waiting for the next part eagerly 😳
And I lubbbddd d whole update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Thank you!



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Thanks to everyone who liked, even commented and spammed as per my demand. Love you all lovely people. My readers list have been decreased with immense counts but who are left are very precious and i accept that i take time to update but i am never going to discontinue any of my work now. Love you all and thanks once aqain!



-Marium
Edited by blush. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter # 13





The next day went off to be seems like a runway race between Sharon and Deepy as they all returned to their home. Swayam and Sharon both wanted to take Deepy with them but Kriya insisted to keep her to their home. Sharon was a bit worried because she didn't wanted to leave her alone without her being near her after what had happen in the park that morning but after Kriya and even Rey's insisting hours she agreed. Deepy didn't have any problem staying except that she took promise to get lots of gifts in return when they will return. She wanted chocolates from there and even asked them to take their pictures so that she would paste those in her scrap book naming Life time'. One thing was really good among all this that Swayam and Sharon have practically begged Rey and Kriya to cut short to honeymoon to a week rather than two which they both agreed as long as they went and enjoy themselves as a married couple'. It was almost 4:00 in evening and Sharon woke up 8:00 in the morning and afterwards Sharon was practically doing all the necessary stuff for the honeymoon packing. She was didn't even have lunch properly. Swayam helped her as he has informed in office that family is off to vacations' for a week and asked Karan and Ajay to handle everything in his absence. At the moment Sharon was preparing Deepy's bag with her basic everyday toys, scrap book, drawing book, her entire course book in case teacher ask for a non schedules note book anytime in school. She didn't have a large bag for the clothes, school shoes, slippers and uniform and the one they had was practically too eww' for Deepy's taste so she went to shopping with Swayam and brought a brand new Dora's hand carry which now is containing all her stuff.

Sharon was baking few chocolate cookies for Deepy to give it to her before leaving but she needed a desperate nap even for at least an hour or two to cool down her head. Swayam came home after dropping Deepy at Kriya's house as after getting ready they will be going there only and from there they will be going to airport at night. He sighed seeing she has not yet stopped working, "Sharon?" He said in a low voice and Sharon turned around to face him and gave him a tired smile. "Put down the spatula," Swayam made rather stern face, "Just 20 minutes more." Sharon said like there is nothing big and turned to work again, "Not even a second more." He said took the spatula from her hand, placing it on marble slab. He took her hand and led her inside the room asking her to take a nap with him. Swayam laid down taking Sharon with him who sighed and soon enough dozed off for a little peaceful sleep. Swayam wasn't sleepy at all neither he was tired as such as he took sleep almost till 12:30 PM but he didn't moved even an inch from there. He kept starring at Sharon who was seems to be at peace.

Swayam had nothing left to do so he would get up and do that because Sharon had already managed everything pretty efficiently. All he could think of that they were really going to the Honeymoon; like a real honeymoon to which a normal, happy wedded couple goes to. They weren't normal in any aspect in being wedded but they were happy and they were in love each other, he thought. Alright, he knows she loves him but she doesn't knows that he has also fallen in love with her and which is bad since sometimes she would wonder if he could even love her or not when on other he hand he already does so he decided he needs to confess her that he loves too her and he couldn't get any better chance than Honeymoon, but how? He thought but he shrugged off the thought thinking he would rather think about in Singapore only and not now. He felt a bit sleepy and thought to take a nap too to make himself more refreshing for late night flight. He put down the alarms to 6:00 PM for about 2 hours later and slept with Sharon.

*

Swayam woke up from his nap hearing someone faint or that someone rather Sharon. He sat on the bed and looked around. Alright, it looks like a faint voice as Sharon was proving to be a bathroom singer right now. She grinned hearing her voice and realized how nice a singer she was, in the bathroom as well. He thought she must have woken up by alarm as he saw the time that was 6:20 PM and they need to leave home for Kriya's house at around 7:47 to 8:00 and need to spend a good hour with Deepy there. He laid down and waited till Sharon would come out of the bathroom. After few minutes she walked out of the bathroom, Oh so the sleepy head in awake?" Sharon asked giggling towards Swayam. "Yup, why are you giggling like teen age college girl?" Swayam mocked her. Sharon showed him her tongue, "Because when I tried to wake up, you didn't and started smiling like idiot or might be you were dreaming about your teen age crush on some celebrity!" Sharon said teasing him. Swayam raised his brow at her, "Or might be I was dreaming about you!" He said, making Sharon cut quiet with her teasing and she turned around towards the mirror. Swayam smiled to himself knowing his charm does work.

Everything was done by 7:30 and Swayam has taken lot of time to dress but finally he does. Swayam loaded both the suitcases in car and paid Sarah for week of her home and sent her on leave days and sat in the driver seat while Sharon was talking to Kriya, telling they were on their way and then they drove to Kriya's place. After almost 20 minutes drive they reached there. While entering Sharon heard Deepy and Kriya laughing hard as Sharon entered he saw Deepy all over Rey, tickling him with Kriya and Swayam and Sharon burst out laughing. "Yes, rock his muscles baby!" Swayam cheered for Deepy and grinned at her and ran to him. "Hey," She said. "Hey back," He said while Sharon walked inside and gave Kriya a small list to read about things to do and not to do with Deepy. "Alright, what we have here, No peanuts, No banana, No hot water for bath as her skin is allergic, No ice creams more than twice only a week, and no chocolate once as she doesn't like a bit bitter taste of it, No caramel candies. Now coming to the food, she doesn't like carrots, cauliflower and raw onion coming into her mouth or raw garlic, she will create fuss." Kriya read it all with open mouth as without even reading everything she counted of those and it was 43 points to read and remember while all this week. "Whoa, Sharon, who would need a mother if they gets a sister like you, almost a mother. You take care of this little girl a lot." He said eyeing Deepy warmly. Sharon turned around to see Deepy doing gossiping with Swayam but Swayam was looking at him and smiled.

There flight was on 2:00 AM at night and it was exactly the time to leave for airport as they will minimum get half an hour to reach there and then all those formalities. Deepy didn't sleep even after Sharon insisted. She was more than willing to drop off them to airport and besides Swayam thinks it's a cool idea rather than she laying on bed and missing us. So she came with Kriya and Rey to. "Be a good girl to Kriya di, alright?" Sharon asked getting lower to her level. "Yes, I will." She replied and Sharon kissed her cheek. Swayam bid them good bye to and went inside.

*

They took place at their business class arrangement. Swayam heard the announcement for passengers to turn their cell phones to aero plane mode and as he took his phone from his leather jacket pocket, he found 2 message notifications. He checked and it was from Elena, "Swayam, I got to tell you something. I have found something in all the investigation and... your mother's photo as well." He was shocked at hell, the other when said, "Swayam? When I tried calling you, your mobile was off. I know you are going for vacations so we will talk about all this after you return, enjoy till then. See ya! :)" Swayam replied, "Thanks, yes we will talk about all this after I return." Swayam face was tensed and he loved in his seat uncomfortably thought the seat was extremely comfortable. Sharon saw this, "What happened? You looked nervous." Sharon said with concerned. "Ah, nothing!" Swayam said, "Alright," Sharon said and rested her head on Swayam's shoulder, earning a smile from him.

*

After long journey they were finally in Singapore and in their honeymoon suite. Hotel was extremely expensive and very beautiful. Their suite were on the major top floor and not to forget it was the most expensive one among all the honeymoon suite because of it was the only one which has the way to the top balconies of hotel, with pools and small private Cineplex in it. Sharon was proudly happy as Swayam just transferred the entire payment of their hotel suite in Kriya's account just now; without them knowing. He thought flight tickets were enough as gift. Sharon and Swayam had a good laugh thinking Rey's or Kriya's reaction when they will find out all about this. Sharon came out of the luxurious bathroom after a refreshing quick bath and saw Swayam on bed with his... laptop! What! "What is this, Mr. Swayam Shekhawat?" Sharon shouted a bit and glared at him. He understood and gave her a grin like a chiseled cat. "I didn't pack your laptop!" Sharon said tapping her foot on the deep purple colored carpet only around their bed side area. "Well... I did when... hiding from you," He said and made a puppy god face. Sharon glared harder than ever and snatched it from his hand. She placed it on the bed and took the battery out of it and gave it back to him. While all this Swayam was praying that she don't throw it from the top of the hotel. She did throw, but the battery. God, Swayam closed his eyes as he couldn't see the poor laptop's battery to be thrown out this brutally. "This, laptop cost around 2 Lac but the battery would cost couple of thousands. So yeah," She said with an attitude.

Around an hour later both of them were eating their dinner in their room. "Does your ice-cream taste good?" Sharon asked making a disgusted face as she took first spoonful of her ice cream after dinner. "Yeah, it's nice." Swayam answered, "Alright then..." Sharon snatched his ice cream and sat on the bed comfortably devouring his ice cream now. "What was that? Give me my ice cream back!" Swayam said running towards Sharon while she ate all of it in just 5 bit bites. "I will never tell you how my ice cream tastes from now on!" Swayam said and Sharon laughed. She ran towards the large sized glass wall, covering almost entire wall from which outer view of the Singapore could be seen easily. Sharon tapped her palm on the mirror, "Whoa, it looks so beautiful at night. Isn't Swayam?" Sharon squealed with excitement. Sure Singapore looks so bright and lively at night with expensive and huge places of entire Singapore glittering with beautiful night lights of different color. Swayam smiled at her happiness and walked towards her. "Yes, you looks beautiful!" He said wrapping his arms on her waist from behind. Sharon blushed slightly and then giggled. "It tickles," She said. Swayam left her with a pout. "I don't want to just stay here at night as well. It will be so boring!" Sharon said sighing desperately. "Who said you would? We are going out for some fun." Swayam said and Sharon eyes beamed with joy. "Great! Where are we going?" She asked. "Well, we are going for some night life sports fun and I promise you will enjoy your heart out. We are going to Urban Fairways," Swayam told Sharon. "Alright, and what sports are we going to play there?" She asked. "Golf," Swayam said, "Whoa, Golf? I would love to strike some balls then if you help me!" Sharon said excited.

Sharon started changing her clothes while Swayam was in washroom when she a found list, written in Swayam's hand writing called '20 places to visit in Singapore'.





Disclaimer : I am getting to know from people that they don't want to read my stories because i have Tanha wala Swaron banners or Vrushan wala Swaron banners. For them i would say imagine who you want, as no one has a power to anyone's imagination. I have used Tanha in this FF's banner but i imagined both Swaron's in it sometimes. This is what we call human, if you don't wanna read just say directly don't make lame excuses. If there are people who think i have problem if they would imagine old or new Swaron, then i don't have a problem, imagine whoever you want too.

OK, 10 pages to be spammed. Good amount of likes and comment too.


Edited by blush. - 11 years ago
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I need to update so whoever have reserved post, please edit it.

Especially Nidhi and Sanskriti have reserved post on first page so come on i have reserves on at least first page! 😆

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