SwaRon FF : Kahi Ankahi [JDM S2] #2 | CH 14 - PG 20 : 25th Feb' 14

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

hey dear please update.
eagerly waiting

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

res

unres

nice update😊

sharon is singing in the bathroom n the teasing portion was very cute

ice-cream scene was cute n funny

hope swayam's mom doesnt create any problem

update soon

Edited by piyu1990 - 11 years ago

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

res

unres

it was a sweet update

it had the fragrance of romance

starting from the point where

sharon is singing in the bathroom

n the teasing portion was very cute

swaron finally left for thr honeymoon

i also luved one chotu sa section where

sharon eats swayam's ice-cream n

thru his laptop's battery

this is wat i love about you

you can write romcom stuff very nicely

kriya's reaction on reading the list tat sharon gave

to her cracked me up poor soul

eagerly waiting for the next update

for some masti n mushy mushy sequence

b/w swaron

do update soon 😃

by soon i mean real soon 😉

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Make swayam a bit romantic
Eagerly waiting for romantic swayam n swaron romance
Chapter was awesome
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Awesome update :)

I can't wait to see what they do in Singapore and how their relation strengthens

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sanjana_D3

@sanjana_D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Fabulous update :)
Deepy is just becoming more cute after each chapter!
Hope they roam around singapore alot and discover more about each other and their relationship!

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lovely222

@lovely222

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Gr8 work will b waiting for the nxt update eagerly

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Reserved gal..😉
Unreserved finally..😃.
Phewww finally you update am in love with this FF of yours marium and you simply rock at writing romance and comedy both that is the reason why your updates are always something I look forward to reading..❤️.
I liked seeing the busy Sharon who went about like a tornado packing for their honeymoon and deepy's stay at Rey's home.. Even more I liked seeing Swayam's display of care towards Sharon and the thought process that follows after lying down he loves Sharon and he accepts that now makes me real happy..😃. Can't wait to read him confess it to Sharon.. Then the little teasing that follows when Sharon steps out of the bathroom was good to read too..😊.
The section at kriya's place where Sharon made a list of what to give and what not give to deepy was downright hillarious I could imagine Kriya's reaction in my mind and I was laughing my wits out on picturising it in my mind..😆 😆.
Then the suite that you described was quite interesting and lavish for the newly wed couple.. I liked how Sharon authoritatively not only throws his laptop battery out but also eats away all his ice cream..😆.
The part where Swayam wraps his arms around Sharon's waist was my absolute favourite in this update..
I look forward to reading the next update and for some Swaron romance do update soon..😃.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗.

Edited by sweet16cash - 11 years ago