||SriShank as JaGanFF(GPOV)Caught In The Rain-Part2(p3)11/1Part3,p5|| - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
@Mehwish new part is just woow
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow I was laughing when ganga thought everyone wanted mannu to sleep with him🤣 BH people are more excited for their SR than jagan themselves 😆

jokes apart, I loved Ganga s hesitance and her understanding that dr.saa loved her more than she could think or express

loved unromantic Ganga, reasons why she is wife of drsaa are to die for This is my Ganga who I fell for and thanks a tonnn mehwish to give ganga back in your FF that is destroyed in show now I was literally crying reading her thinking for herself and dialogues of drsaa for her 😭
when i read rain initially I got that this is going to be more hot day by day ☺️

for 2nd part:
wow black nighty 😲 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️

Ganga s drying of hairs was just romantic kash drsaa per drops gate hote ☺️ ☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️

seeing her in nighty and pen falling out from his mouth 🤣 🤣 says a lot about desi romance ☺️ ☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️

she was hesitant but still trying to give love to drsaa as she was also mad in love with him just bit shy. her hiding knees was so innocent and drsaa pulling her leg for she should come in nighty in front of DS 🤣

aah and last para is out of comment and imagination ☺️ ☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️

3rd part:

she kissed 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

2nd para ; ***face palm******

ganga was not dead with his killing starring looks but i am 🤢 🤢 🤢 mehwish what have you done 😡 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️

wese hamari Ganga bhi kam nahi he, her blushing throws thousand arrows to drsaa 😉

damn next morning is so killing, her efforts to make drsaa s impression better in society by make up and saree without pallu on head just because she loved him,

aah moments after drinking are just pure dreamy
Ganga said I love you but saint drsaa is more concerned about her health and we got lip kiss initiated by shy and unromantic Ganga 😲 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️

aah Drsaa grabbing her when she wants to get up and she recalls all, drsaa says nothing was wrong and going to kiss her, he is upon her body ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️

nighty se jyada drsaa ko iss drink thing me mazaa aaya lagta he 🤣 I feel i am listening to saiyaan BG when drsaa is grabbing her and she is trying to get away and "excuses " 😭 sorry for ruining your FF by this crying emoticon but I can't just stop myself missing all 1st nov moments.

last but not the least: Awesome FF, you have kept Ganga in her character very well. I can feel MY GANGA. ** you know what **


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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Hot!!!🤢☺️🤪
jaanu u know i have read the whole story in oneshot for the feel.. and i cant tell u how i feel now..☺️
wow just wow..
the shy village girl wanna prove that she could be a lil bit different..
she wanna make her husband feel special.. and her effort of wearing a westren wear..😳
Black hmm.. i bet dr.sa would have reacted in same way if Ganga would have done such thing..
i can clearly imagine sriti in it and shashank giving that reaction.. aww adorable wonderful jaanu
She felt nervous.. umm and held the book upside down🤣 poor dr.sa was confused or say smitten 😉 he dint observe that his wifey was holding the book in other direction😆
pride and prejudice.. was the book and dr.saab was reading it and ganga is just line maraoing her pati and dint pay attention to.even a single word😳
Ganga dear u r so in love😳😳
This dress infront of dadisaa..🤣 i am sure dadisaa will go wacko thari bhali hove chori yeh tune kya kapde pehan rakhi hai..🤣
dr.saab is cutie he understood ganga's state of mind and gave her space and time.to adjust...
Ganga you r damn too lucky
...
Wowwie.. Jagya(shashank) i can imgine how he looks there.. jaanu great job..
ganga in red saree and simple jewels and she will.look perfectly stunning..
The best part..🤣 she was drunk rofl🤣
I wanna drink you☺️☺️
and direct kiss in the lips.. hmm dr.saab☺️
n she was on him..☺️
sherni on her sher..☺️☺️🤢
mehwish this was ur dream isn't?
Loved ur dream..
she kissed him all over and she get to know abt it in the morning and dr.saab was all.. surprised and naughty..
hayee jaanu u pushed me into the dreamland..
so happy that you updated it..
love you dear🤗
keep writing jaanu i love your.writing and miss SriShank a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mehwish,tumne to aapne update se tehelka macha diya...Main naya kya bolu...

The very first scene,Ganga sleeping on Jagya's chest instead of pillow...WOW...

Then Ganga thought that Dactarsaab is sleeping to wo agar aapna Gown utaregi to kaun dekhnewala hai...But jise dekhna tha ussne dekh liya but Dactarsaab to jaruraat se jyada saint nikle,unnhone notice taak nehi kiya,upar se puch rahe hai what u are searching...😆..Dactarsaa is really adorable...

The moment when Jagya took her in front of mirror and said this is extraordinary...WOW...Indeed she is very beautiful...

The highlighted part...Ganga drunk...She was feeling funny,andaarse...😆

Dactarsaa ki izzat khatre mein...😆...but who cares...bada saint baan rahe hai...

She confessed and and and she wants to drink him..😆...Paar kaise!Mehwish ki tarha milkshake mein ghol ke?

Ussko dhundla sa yaad hai ke kya kaand kiya raat ko...but clearly kuch yaad nehi...to dactarsaa ne kaha demo dikhau?Aur dikha bhi diya...
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Ganga phirse excuses!Tum to talli hi achchi thi..But dactarsaa ne mana hi liya aur chora nehi iss baar...

So the bottom line is this update was fultu phatakedar update...I am in love with this FF...Sad part is ye khatam ho gaya...And the best part is khatam itne grand tarike se hua ke kya batau...Thanks mehwish for this lovely FF...


Edited by shankythebest - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Omg this is super romentic..never imagined drunken Ganga. And then wat happend was too hot and romentic. I can imaging SriShank JaGan and their shy faces. ❤️❤️❤️ last part was killer..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
wow its beautiful loved all 3 parts 😳 Mehwish u outdo yourself every time⭐️👏
the long rainy night ..the post wedding hesitation ..ganga drunk was too cute ..and the mirror scene wow the kiss on the lips ☺️
wish we could have seen something like this in the show but alas ..the bv cvs😡🤢
waiting to read more awesome ff do keep writing 🤗
Edited by ...RamonaG.... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
I had missed the last part😭 Mehwish 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow,what an amazing writing,simply superb,keep up the good job@yanks.
Edited by Andriaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you santhiyaa_J & Andriaa

thank you Vildana for the beautiful siggies. I commented in your gallery as well.

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