||SriShank as JaGanFF(GPOV)Caught In The Rain-Part2(p3)11/1Part3,p5||

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sush_

@sush_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

hmm pehle full on comment..

much much awaited ff for me😳

thanku jaanu for posting it early.. balancing two ff is definetly difficult

only few parts is there any way to increase no. of parts😳

Can you understand that I will be hurt if you don't go with me? I want my wife there with me

ganga still thinks she is not right one for her docsaa.. but when jags said the above lines hayee😳

this Is what I love I can peep in character's mind.. while reading ur FF⭐️

she wants to go in saree😉 kyun ganga mujhe kuch aur reason dikhayi de raha hai😛

I have such an unromantic wife

poor ganga🤣 he said it directly.. come on sherni prove your sher wrong😉

I was beginning to feel shy because this was the first time since we'd gotten married that we were completely alone at night. Mannu was back home. There was no family. It was just us in one room, and a long rainy night.

😳😳 hmmm I am blushing too

ke hoga next😉😳ek innocent question😆

awesome update mehwish.. I can completely understand what running in ganga's mind😳

waiting for the next one.. post it soon

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jagan_fan

@jagan_fan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

super update as usual...☺️ waiting for next part soon hope cvs showd such scenes ☺️

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zephyr29

@zephyr29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Wow! This is really good, Mehwish ⭐️

You have captured Ganga's innocence, hesitance, and anxiety so well. Awww poor thing is scared of making Jagya angry or upset. She still feels she's not good enough for him and is still left wondering how he happened to fall in love with someone like herself 😆.

She might not be ready to "go all the way" with him as of now but she's more than willing to make an effort to be more wifely 😉.

So Dr.Sa pretends to sleep so he can watch his wife in slumber ☺️. Ganga's matter-of-fact way of saying you shouldn't waste your time doing that was just hilarious 😆.

Loved her innocence at being inside a hotel room. Other people have lived here? Other people have slept on this bed? LOL 😆 So cute.

Sooo looking forward to the night ahead

Amazing start 👍🏼!

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

owww looks really intersting,
waiting to read more of Jagan

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yanks28

@yanks28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

I'll try to update this as soon as possible. I haven't been updating because I haven't been in the proper frame of mind...I've wanted to write but been unable too.

These FFs will continue to be dedicated to the original actors enacting JaGan...Sriti & Shashank...so they are now SriShank FFs...because when I write, I imagine Sriti as Ganga...with her own powerful, fiery, childlike portrayal of Ganga. Sorry if I offend anyone by not replacing Ganga in my head, but my imagination doesn't accept anyone else in her place...so with keeping Sriti's Ganga's 10 months + ...her mannerisms, gestures, expressions in mind...I'll try to update ASAP.

Thanks for the patience.

Edited by yanks28 - 11 years ago

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Colt.Pixy

@Colt.Pixy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

impressed with Ganga s pov

yes this is my dreamy Ganga

. waiting for next update 👍🏼

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yanks28

@yanks28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode
impressed with Ganga s pov

yes this is my dreamy Ganga

. waiting for next update 👍🏼

Isse lamba comment karna padega warna next time no entry 😳

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sush_

@sush_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: yanks28

Isse lamba comment karna padega warna next time no entry 😳

🤣bhabi ko dhamki de rahe ho kya kakusaa..
waiting for next part jaanu
mere exams se pehle update karo yaar

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Libra123

@Libra123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Arrey yaar.. Update karo na... Why luring like this ??

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yanks28

@yanks28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Libra123
Arrey yaar.. Update karo na... Why luring like this ??

my thread was on page 10000000000 yaar, I had to post a note to let ppl know that I havent abandoned the FFs...😕 Ab likh lu toh phir update bhi kardungi 😆

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