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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushiani


🤣bhabi ko dhamki de rahe ho kya kakusaa..
waiting for next part jaanu
mere exams se pehle update karo yaar



uffooo tum logo ke exams bhi na, when is your exam? 😡 I will try to update sometime this week...but not sure which FF I will update first, probably that other one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: yanks28



uffooo tum logo ke exams bhi na, when is your exam? 😡 I will try to update sometime this week...but not sure which FF I will update first, probably that other one...

iss friday se jaanu😭
aur toh sunday bhi exam hai..😭🤢😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2-


"Ganga, how come you're more drenched that I am?" He asked. He was looking at me from head to toe. I was wearing a saree which was completely wet. I felt cold. He tossed me his towel. I tried to dry myself off, but it was no use. I'd need to change. I flung my hair over my shoulders to dry it off and water drops flew across the room.

"Sorry..." I said. He smiled. "Why don't you change into something dry?" He said.

"No, it's ok...you first...I'll um...unpack in the meantime..." I said. He nodded and went to the bathroom. I sat down at the edge of the bed. I was so nervous. I'd never felt this way in my life. What did I want? I didn't know. I wanted to show him that I could be different, but the truth is, I didn't know how to even attempt being different. I was the shy Ganga. Seeing him look at me the way a husband looks at his wife made me feel shier but he deserved to be treated like a husband. I couldn't do this to him. I had to let him feel wanted, because he was. Now, if only I could snap out of my low self-esteem.

I looked through our bag and found what I was looking for. I'd bought it a few weeks ago when he took me and Mannu to a mall, but I'd kept it hidden under piles of clothes because I didn't have the courage to wear it. I was going to wear it tonight, somehow. He came out of the bathroom and I went in next. I showered and dressed. It was this black nightgown type thing. There was a sleeveless part which was black and up to my knees. It was silky. There was a black gown to wear over it which was made of silk and lace. It had long sleeves and looked elegant but I was afraid to check how I looked in it.

I dried my hair and combed it. I was terrified to look into the mirror. I didn't have any makeup on and I was wearing something I'd never even dreamed of wearing in my life. With nothing else left to do, I went outside. He was already in bed. I slowly walked out. I was shaking from nervousness.

"Please Dr Sa, don't get repulsed..." I thought I was going to pass out before I made it to the bed, but I made it. I sat at the edge of the bed but I was scared to look at him. "C'mon Ganga, you can do it..." I told myself. I turned in his direction. He had a pen in his mouth which he was using to write something in a notepad in his hands. His glance slowly rose and he turned his head in my direction. His mouth opened slightly and the pen fell out. His eyes slowly widened and I saw him gulp. He blinked really fast a few times and I looked away because I just couldn't figure out what his reactions meant. I was going to cry. I tried to hold it together. I pulled the covers up and sat in bed. I sat very still for a minute. I peeked through my hair at him and he was back to biting the edge of his pen. He wasn't looking at me. He must have gotten the hint that I wasn't in a good mood. He was so understanding, I felt lucky. I didn't know what to do next. There was a book on the table on my right. I took it and pretended to read. It was a way to calm myself down. Of course, I wasn't reading. I was thinking. I was trying to figure out what I wanted. The truth is, all these experiences were new to me. I didn't understand my own feelings. I knew I loved him too, but I didn't know how to express it. I knew he loved me, and I still couldn't believe it. I also knew he respected me and my space. He would never ever try make a move unless he knew I was comfortable, so it meant I had to give him a sign. There was also the fact that I hadn't even said that I love him yet. He deserved to hear it, but not tonight. Tonight, something else had to happen, but what? I wasn't sure. It felt like my attitude was leading to an invisible ice wall going up between us. I had to break the ice somehow.

That's when I realized that the book I was holding was upside down. All this time, I'd been holding a book, pretending to read it without turning a single page, and it was upside down. I smiled and then burst out laughing. I covered my mouth but I couldn't control my laughter. Dr Sa was staring at me and looked slightly concerned.

"Ganga, what's so funny?" He asked. I tried to explain it to him but I couldn't speak because I was laughing so hard. I pointed to the book and he didn't get it.

"I was...holding it..." I said and continued laughing. He grabbed the book and looked through it.

"It's an English novel..." He said. He was flipping through the book and his expression was confused and amused. He shook his head. I held his hand.

"Dr Sa...I was..." I paused and took a deep breath. "I was holding that book upside down for a good ten minutes..." I said and then burst into giggles again. He grinned and shook his head. He put his arm around me. My stomach was hurting now. I rested my head against his chest. His hands were on my shoulders. I was holding him tightly.

"You're adorable, Ganga..." He said.

I blushed. He slipped his hands down to my back and hugged me tighter. I closed my eyes and tried to relax. It felt so right to be in his arms. I felt safe and loved which was something I'd always craved for desperately. He held my face and my skin burned at his touch. I felt nervous again, but not a bad kind of nervous. He looked deeply into my eyes. This was too much. I looked down in an instant. He whispered and I felt his breath against my face.

"You look really beautiful..." He said. I didn't know how to handle a compliment, but the fact that he said it was important to me. I sat next to him and looked at my hands.

"You should dress like this in front of Dadisa..." He said. I stared at him and he smirked.

"You're kidding..." I said.

"No, I want to see her reaction." He smiled. I pulled down on the nightie and tried to cover my knees which were exposed. He grabbed the book which I was pretending to read.

"Wow, Pride & Prejudice...I've heard about this..." He said.

"Oh, what's it about?" I asked. I hadn't even read the title. I knew he could tell how self-conscious I was feeling, and he was trying to divert my mind. It always worked.

"It's a love story...and social commentary...and about a middle class family in England...many years ago..." He said.

"You read it?" I asked.

"No, I saw the movie...once..." He smiled. "Um, why don't we read it together?" He raised his brow.

"Oh, you know my English...that book looks like it has really big and complicated words...and..."

"Ganga..." He sighed. "C'mon..." He lay down. "Come..." He said. He wanted me to lie next to him. I lay down, but there was still a lot of space between us. I turned in his direction and he started reading. He read and I listened. I admit that I stopped listening within a few minutes because I got lost in him, and I realized that I didn't like the distance between us. For the first time that distance bothered me. I wanted to get rid of it. I moved closer and closer but he didn't notice. He kept reading, and I kept staring at him because I'd never seen a more perfect man in my life, and because I was madly in love with him.

He stopped reading and looked at me. "What happened? Don't you like it?" He asked.

"I love it..." I said.

"Really? Then tell me what I just read, like a summary..."

"Um..." I turned red.

"You weren't listening..." He said. He turned and put his hand on my arm. "What's going on in your head? Tell me..." He said.

"Nothing, I'm fine..."

"Hmm...ok then...let's sleep. Tomorrow we have to continue our journey and check into another hotel...I know you love hotels..." He grinned.

"I guess this one isn't so bad..." I said.

"By the way...when did you buy this...dress?" He asked curiously.

I blushed. "Uh, a while ago..."

"Oh, um...you should wear it...again...I mean, you really look stunning...black is your color..." He said. He cleared his throat. He looked nervous for a change.

"You say that about every color..." I pointed out.

"Because it's true about every color..." He smiled. I moved closer to him and now we were right next to each other. We looked into each other's eyes and I felt like I could die for him. I was so overwhelmed by love. He placed his hand against my face. I didn't know what was happening to me. I closed my eyes and next thing I knew was that when I opened them again, his face was right above mine and he was looking at me intensely. He closed his eyes and our foreheads touched. He was leaning over me and I couldn't move. He caressed my cheek and I shivered. I couldn't control my breathing. My chest heaved up and down quickly. We looked into each other's eyes.

"Ganga..." He said.

"We should sleep..." I said weakly. My throat felt dry. He nodded and looked like he'd just come out of a trance. He was looking at my lips. I blushed and moved away and he lay down again. My heart continued beating fast for the rest of the night. He closed the lights and fell asleep and I watched him while he slept peacefully. I slept too but in the middle of the night when I woke up, he was holding me. I thought he was awake but he was fast asleep and we were both pressed together. His chin was on my shoulder and his arm was around my waist. Both of us were laying on our right, totally sandwiched together. I felt warm. I felt him breathing against me. I tried to entangle myself from his arms but it was impossible, besides, it felt perfect. I continued sleeping that way.


Edited by yanks28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
need to read 1st part also. res
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
🤢 🤢

Thanks mehwi,that update is enough to kill a sensitive person like me...I will comment properly when I will be able to gather myself...have to read it for the second time...Its unbelievable man...Too much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Woow Mehwish I really like it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its freaking hot...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Mehwish u are a killer writer...⭐️😉❤️

waiting for the next part...no honestly i cant wait...😉😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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❤️❤️❤️ its lovely, beautifull.. Super romentic and cute ff. Ganga bought a nighty was really serprizing. One can feel that unezyness and shyness that Ganga was feeling, wery well writen Mehwish. Very beautifull moments and some naughty moments too between Dr.Sa and his Ganga.
Edited by KiranlovSriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Totally dead..🤢🤢🤢...forget to comment about the update...😆
I cant believe how dr.sa stay so calm after watching Ganga in wet saree...😳😉

i like shy Ganga..😳ofcourse dr.sa deserved to get all the rights over u...common girl...😛

awww!!!!!Ganga in black night gown...hmm...nooo...i dont want Jagya to be like this much good boy😒😉

wow...so desperate Ganga,even dont know how she holding the book...🤪😉😆
putting arms...resting against in his chest...killing moments..☺️

night gown infront of dadisa...🤣want to see her reaction...😲😆

readind n hearing...is this the time for reading books???...🤓

Ganga lost in him...not interested to hear any stories...😎moved closer to him but Jagya..😡mehwish u made Jagya as a saint...😲😆

awww...he want Ganga to wear night gown again..😉hope this time he wont read any story...😉

i cant able to say anything about their passinate moments...☺️omg its really killing...iam dead again...🤢

what??? he slept this soon...😲😲😡poor Ganga watching her hubby while sleeping...😳

both are like sandwich...🤪☺️

i dont want them to sleep...😒😉

please update next part soon...😃





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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome writing mehwish.. Continue...waiting for the next part..

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