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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Sangeeta di u are a brilliant writer👏
This is awesome and I can see it happening!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
It is really an amazing
Everything won't be
the same anymore, not for a
long time...and AsYa, most
importantly Zoya is gonna
realise that when they get back to Khan Villa
I'd love to see Dilshad-Zoya
bonding too.
I really miss Dillu Momma
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Thanks everyone for your wonderful responses

After today's episode, I feel that there might actually be no awkwardness when Zoya returns to KV. So, what I have written might actually never happen.

Humeira's outburst in the episode today has changed the dynamics. Zoya will never feel guilty about her taa umr philosophy or returning back to KV now.

Thank you Humeira for breaking those chains around Zoya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Awesome story. Loved it. Love the way asad start behaving with ayan. Hope same way asad behave in show also. Enough of so called irritating bromance
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Nice love it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Hi di i am back😃I promised that i will read this OS for you so here i am just for you😳
i know i am very very very late and i won't say i was busy or anything coz i wasn't that busy that i couldn't read your OS but i just couldn't make up my heart to read it that time I tried reading once and i cried after reading their drive part so i left but now since i am in a good mood after diwali i finally read it😃And can I say I am so glad i read it today in such a good mood coz my bad mood doesn't deserve your brilliant OS😳
Di what an amazing OS...Had Cvs had even a fraction of your brain they should be showing Asya the way you did...I must say you handled asya after the whole fiasco with perfection
Ghafoor stomped away, humiliated but rendered wordless by the two badtameez lovers.'
Lol how much you have been waiting for your 'batameez lovers' haina?😆I am glad you will see them very very soon😃
but silence was the best way to start that healing process.
Wow👏beautiful line di..yes they have lots to talk about and lots to discuss but right now all they need is to be with each other silently trying to listen to what the other's heart wants
Wow di the car journey was beautiful...reminded me of my asya the one who didn't need words to communicate a gesture was enough and here the the firm hold of other's hand was all kind of communication that they needed😳
With his eyes glued to the road, he replied, "no gear-change till we reach home. I don't want to take any more chances."
Aww so sweetI wish asya never had to see a gear change ver in their lives but unfortunately that will not happen
I am glad Imraan deciced to tell najma everything,,,baki no comments on him...i can never like the man 🤢
I loved the way zoya dashed into dilshad's arms and dilshad finally remembered her daughter...although i loved their initial hug i wanted a heart to heart convo between zoya nd dilshad..they need to talk and have a serious discussion IMO...
zoya ran out of her mother's house without thinking of her once and dilshad abandoned her just like anything...No mother would do thatand i know ki a mother daughter relationship is too strong to be broken but this wasn't a small thing and i wish dilshad would realize and apologize to zoya for abandoning her and zoya would apologize too

Zoya glared at him and then smiled as she walked off with her back to him. Before settling at the dining table, she walked around the living room and kitchen. She caressed the sofas, the kitchen counter and cabinets.

Beautiful touch di...i loved how zoya touched everything..very realistic and beautiful😃

"Yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai. Agar us raat maine Mr. Khan se baat kar li hoti, unhein sab bataa diya hota, tho itni saari zindagiyon ke saath khilwaad na kiya hota."

I am so so so glad that your zoya realized her mistake and didn't just kept blaming everyone else...this was a very needed reality check for her

Everything was the same but why did something seem out of place?

Beautiful di...i loved how you showed zoya's hesitation..something huge happened and it would be unrealistic to show her not being affected by that and just be back to her normal bubbly self.And i loved the way asad acknowledged everyone's fault and the way he convinced zoya that their love was stronger than everything else was beautiful😳

Phir se aa gaye bin bulaye mehmaan😆

ayaan really doesn't think before speaking does he?calling zoya his wife very insensitive

"I need to get curtains and put locks on these windows!" Asad muttered and walked over to Zoya's room.

🤣lol yes those windows need to locked and draped if asad plans on doing any romance😆

Beautiful OS di...i wish the CVs do atleast some of the things you showed and maybe then they will be able to undo some of the damages😃

I loved it di..i will sleep better after reading this and knowing that i fulfilled my promise and read your OS..

P.S.-This was just for you di😳I hope you loved my diwali gift to you😳

Love you loads di❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Hi di i am back😃I promised that i will read this OS for you so here i am just for you😳

i know i am very very very late and i won't say i was busy or anything coz i wasn't that busy that i couldn't read your OS but i just couldn't make up my heart to read it that time I tried reading once and i cried after reading their drive part so i left but now since i am in a good mood after diwali i finally read it😃And can I say I am so glad i read it today in such a good mood coz my bad mood doesn't deserve your brilliant OS😳
Di what an amazing OS...Had Cvs had even a fraction of your brain they should be showing Asya the way you did...I must say you handled asya after the whole fiasco with perfection
Ghafoor stomped away, humiliated but rendered wordless by the two badtameez lovers.'
Lol how much you have been waiting for your 'batameez lovers' haina?😆I am glad you will see them very very soon😃
but silence was the best way to start that healing process.
Wow👏beautiful line di..yes they have lots to talk about and lots to discuss but right now all they need is to be with each other silently trying to listen to what the other's heart wants
Wow di the car journey was beautiful...reminded me of my asya the one who didn't need words to communicate a gesture was enough and here the the firm hold of other's hand was all kind of communication that they needed😳
With his eyes glued to the road, he replied, "no gear-change till we reach home. I don't want to take any more chances."
Aww so sweetI wish asya never had to see a gear change ver in their lives but unfortunately that will not happen
I am glad Imraan deciced to tell najma everything,,,baki no comments on him...i can never like the man 🤢
I loved the way zoya dashed into dilshad's arms and dilshad finally remembered her daughter...although i loved their initial hug i wanted a heart to heart convo between zoya nd dilshad..they need to talk and have a serious discussion IMO...
zoya ran out of her mother's house without thinking of her once and dilshad abandoned her just like anything...No mother would do thatand i know ki a mother daughter relationship is too strong to be broken but this wasn't a small thing and i wish dilshad would realize and apologize to zoya for abandoning her and zoya would apologize too

Zoya glared at him and then smiled as she walked off with her back to him. Before settling at the dining table, she walked around the living room and kitchen. She caressed the sofas, the kitchen counter and cabinets.

Beautiful touch di...i loved how zoya touched everything..very realistic and beautiful😃

"Yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai. Agar us raat maine Mr. Khan se baat kar li hoti, unhein sab bataa diya hota, tho itni saari zindagiyon ke saath khilwaad na kiya hota."

I am so so so glad that your zoya realized her mistake and didn't just kept blaming everyone else...this was a very needed reality check for her

Everything was the same but why did something seem out of place?

Beautiful di...i loved how you showed zoya's hesitation..something huge happened and it would be unrealistic to show her not being affected by that and just be back to her normal bubbly self.And i loved the way asad acknowledged everyone's fault and the way he convinced zoya that their love was stronger than everything else was beautiful😳

Phir se aa gaye bin bulaye mehmaan😆

ayaan really doesn't think before speaking does he?calling zoya his wife very insensitive

"I need to get curtains and put locks on these windows!" Asad muttered and walked over to Zoya's room.

🤣lol yes those windows need to locked and draped if asad plans on doing any romance😆

Beautiful OS di...i wish the CVs do atleast some of the things you showed and maybe then they will be able to undo some of the damages😃

I loved it di..i will sleep better after reading this and knowing that i fulfilled my promise and read your OS..

P.S.-This was just for you di😳I hope you loved my diwali gift to you😳

Love you loads di❤️


Thanks Anu...u r such a sweetheart. Loved reading your comments (as always) All my ffs and OSs are incomplete without your comments😉

I agree, Zoya and Dilshaad need to have a heart to heart chat too

I am willing to give Dilshaad the benefit of the doubt because I feel the writers goofed up more than Dilshaad, the character

Also, would like to see a heart to heart between Asya before they embark of song and dance sequences.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
I wish you had continued this!
I loved the Ayaan part especially

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