Chalo Ghar Chalein: AsYa OS - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: subhkisonu

Hello Sangeeta!! It's a wonderful OS. Till now I was a silent admirer of your writing. You are an amazing writer👏. I am a regular reader of your FF "Faasle". It's a brilliant work of writing. I think it is coming to an end.😭 I am requesting you to write another FF. I am a fan of your writing😊. And I don't miss your ep review as well.


thanks dear. I am honored that your first post on IF is about my OS

Faasle still has a few light hearted parts left

I am not sure if i will write a full fledged FF but yes, will continue with OSs and SSs


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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
That was beautiful OS; really felt for Dilshad...
-Sona
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
loved it and thnx for the pm
i loved it when asad pushed ayaan out of the window back.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Sangeeta, cute one. Love the car part the most and ending. And do hope they add them specially the car ride scene...
I really dont like how Imran is redeemed with no punishment at all, I dont want Asad to forgive neither Zoya so easily. He might be small player but caused biggest ruckus. How can he smile and behave as if he is just a victim always
I would love more intense convo between Asad and Zoya, he shouldnt stop her from talking what happened and she should listen how he feels. I can imagine Ayaan barging in, want to have a scene with him joking of Zoya as his wife and Asad's expression and reaction..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: _vineeta_

Hi Sangeeta, cute one. Love the car part the most and ending. And do hope they add them specially the car ride scene...

I really dont like how Imran is redeemed with no punishment at all, I dont want Asad to forgive neither Zoya so easily. He might be small player but caused biggest ruckus. How can he smile and behave as if he is just a victim always
I would love more intense convo between Asad and Zoya, he shouldnt stop her from talking what happened and she should listen how he feels. I can imagine Ayaan barging in, want to have a scene with him joking of Zoya as his wife and Asad's expression and reaction..


Hi vineeta. BTW, are u on FB? A number of us have migrated there to discuss the whow

I just post my ffs and OSs on IF now

I agree, the Cvs are letting off Imran very easily. I guess just because he is Najma's husband. Imran is responsible for a lot of this chaos for sure- in nikhat's life and in zoya's life too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
very beautifully written dr..n in a very realistic way!!!
though im very happy that zoya is coming back to KV...its definitely not going to be the same ever!!!...lets see how the cvs plan to continue!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bheegi


Hi vineeta. BTW, are u on FB? A number of us have migrated there to discuss the whow

I just post my ffs and OSs on IF now

I agree, the Cvs are letting off Imran very easily. I guess just because he is Najma's husband. Imran is responsible for a lot of this chaos for sure- in nikhat's life and in zoya's life too

Really? Thats why I see so less of u here. I dont want my main FB to have QH discussions as FB security I dont trust, will create one for this and will PM you. Add me please, I miss our discussions😭. Here people are very rigid by now, tired of beating same bushOuch I want to moveforward from here now that I see end of tunnel..
Being Najma husband is not some kind of credibility or character test, Najma is very weak individual herself. I hate this, just because she is Dilshaad's daughter she should be happy vs Nikhat, Ayaan and Nujhat should suffer as they are Shireen's, one own karma decides your destiny not your parents. And if Shireen is bad then Haseena is the worst and in that case neither Imran and Farhan should be happy..
They are encouraging that we should curse our parents for our bad luck and desiny vs ourselevesOuch
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
sangeeta ..u r a brilliant writer ...i dunno since wen m planning to read faasle ..but i alwaz stop ...coz dere r so many parts for me to read ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
this is so perfect...

wish it does really happens in the serial this way...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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"aaj ke baad aapko kabhie knock karne ki zaroorat nahin hai Ms. Farooqui. Mujh par aur meri zindagi par aapka poora haq hai. You don't need any permission to come into my room."
I ALWAYS WANTED ASAD TO SAY THIS. And here it is in you OS :D
Beautifully written Sangeeta <3

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