Chalo Ghar Chalein: AsYa OS - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bheegi


aapke liye koi bhi 😉 RSG Ya Soni , koi bhi chalegi 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sangeeta, I am so glad you wrote about this scene BEFORE it was shown. I won't be disappointed when they fall short!! 😃 Yeah, we know it's bound to happen!!

First of all, I can't tell you how happy I am that Asad will go to SM and claim his love in style and bring her back in front of EVERYONE! The cameras were rolling, so it's going to hit the news! I am so proud of the lion. Finally!!

Coming back to the OS, brilliant portrayal of emotions! Perfect song Chal Chale Apne Ghar! Your song collection is awesome! 👏 👏

Ghafoor: hypocrite! All he cares about is his reputation!😡

Razia: I could care less for her attitude. Told ya after AsYa reunite, party badloongi! 😆

Humeira: relief!

Rashid: proud of his son but still mum and helpless! Although in the BTS, he did say to Shireen to let them go! 😕

Shireen: confused and worried as usual!!

BB: Did you feel sorry for Vidya Sinha?! Unhone bhi party badal di! I couldn't hear her dialogues in the BTS clearly, but seems like she finally supported her oldest grandchild and his love!

Ayaan: Wait? What was his reaction?! No withdrawal symptoms yet?! Yeh, toh dhoka hai! I know how you feel about him! 😆

Najma Imran: cute scene with Zoya. Imran koh bhi chodd diya easily?! You didn't want to be bothered by him?! 😆

Dilshad: (why is she missing on the show? Time off! ) Glad to see her bond with Zoya. Her love for Zoya has always been unconditional. I was pissed with her previously for not claiming Zoya back.

Asad-Zoya: sigh, perfect! The interaction in the car was so sweet! Finger entwined! Dreamy! Loved Asad's dialogue "no gear-change till we reach home. I don't want to take any more chances." Then at home, loved the dig on communication issue!

Ms Museebat-e-aazam-Bond-girl! Ha! Ha! New name for Zoya!!

Asad came closer and whispered, "museebat ki aadat si ho gayi hai ab. Life becomes too boring otherwise." Aww!


Poor Zoya. Touching all the items to reassure herself that she is home! Poor baby!!

"It had been days since Zoya had had a proper meal. Even though Ayaan, dadi and Rashid had tried their best to keep her stay comfortable at the SM, mumaani's piercing and Shireen's expectant gaze coupled with feelings of guilt and claustrophobia had killed her appetite completely. Zoya stared at the spread on the table and started sobbing softly."

This broke my heart! 😭 Yeah, never saw Zoya eating at SM! I just have one big complaint! Where was the pizza?! How could you exclude it?! That's what she would miss the most!! See, she didn't want the baingan, hence barely ate dinner! Can we get pizza, please?! 🤣

Glad Zoya realized her mistake in not sharing info with Asad and Asad acknowledged his mistake of not asking Zoya's opinion! Loved the reuse of "lekin ki koi gunjaaish nahin hai"

Ayaan: uff kebab mein haddi! "main tho apni biwi se milne aaya hoon." Ha! Ha! A knife through Asad's heart. Rub it in!

"Ayaan!" Asad clenched his teeth, "mujhey aisa behooda mazaak katai pasand nahin hai.

Did shudd hindi creep in? Mahabharat influence? That's not Urdu is it?


Loved Asad snapping at Ayaan! Cracks in the bromance?! Yeah baby, I am mean! I am still pissed with Asad for putting his siblings first over Zoya.


The best was the last part: "I need to get curtains and put locks on these windows!" Asad muttered and walked over to Zoya's room.


🤣 🤣

As I mentioned in a comment on one of your posts, the day Asad gets locks and curtains for those windows, we'll know AsYa marriage and SR are imminent!! 😃

👍🏼 👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Beautiful OS

What I liked most about it is how you depicted that things do not become normal in one minute. You are bound to feel awkard and even insecure.

Moving on is a gradual process. Also Asad's reaction to Ayaan's teasing was nice.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Loved it loved it loved it 🤗
I could really visualise it as I read... Asad Zoya Ayaan ...all in character..
Asad holding her hand and saying no gear change it we reach home... was wow...
The best was the last line...Asad to put curtains and lock the windows 👏
We have been waiting for this from when...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Amazing OS
Loved it
Everything back to normal
Wahi Asya romance Hayyye
InshaaAllah soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Awesome n adorable! Asad n Zoya's femotions n inner turmoils very so nicely written best part was outside sm to journey to km :-* to it

But but but Beechara Ayaan 😭😭 😆 😆
bag which had the music box hi toh dene aya tha nahi toh Zoya phir wapas chali jati rofl 😆😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Amaazinggg 👏 U r a brilliant writer Sangeeta ⭐️ 👍🏼
I had tears in my eyes reading this. I really wish ,aapka yeh OS CV's & QH writer padhei .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Brilliant OS di !!
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
loved the one-shot Sangeetha..reall very nice...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazinggg ...!!

Loved it❤️

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