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Posted: 11 years ago
I am already excited for the Maha Update...
Awesome and yes I am also worried about Payal...
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M here on the valiant knight thread 1... Aftr thr dawn of the dawn...

O god diii wat a grt start... I bet its going to be bst like bts and tdotd ...

I am speechless by the way u showd up the characters ... As u said evrything in extreme...

Evn its love hate frdshi relationship...

Iya i mst say its too emogi type.. Bt for a grt change its superb... Coz.. As tdotd was totally fairytale with sme grt touches of reality...
Tvk is totally directed to the realities of life...

It irks me to see arshi in pain... Bt truly m sache saying its a broad story.. With evry character hav more and more to br yt explored... As dey hav lot more hiddn ... Behind curtains...

Bth are in pain and the love coming out of pain is always in extreme...

I am grl ... Bt that dsnt mean i feel pride and cnsider men less ... No dey are equal bt that dsnt mean m less than dem...

life can never be let alone with in urself u need sme one by ur side and men are the real savious ... Yaa destructors too exist bt the one who will let u be in heavens is always ur saviour...

We fail to undrstand the feelings of men coz... Dey sheild dem deep dwn and make us go weak and pour our feelings to gt easen... And gt bak to the bst of urself...
Y no one cnsider men too hav... Sme feelings...
And same way womens too ...

Bth are equally cnsiderd.by god den y this wrld created diff...

U deal with grt issues and realities of life in ur stories ... Hats off.. To u dii...

U ... Are a creative writer exploring more out of small small things which many of us miss to hav a glimpse of...

Happily Sipping cup of coffee sitting on a beanbag doesnt mean u didnt had a bad past...
Sme knw to cover up.. And sme knw to shw up...and very few knw to deal with it...

i dnt knw hw to put my thoughts into words as m too bad at this...


I am a deep thinker... So wat i felt aftr reading this parts is wat m expressing out in words jst thanks to ur updates...

I am in love with it... M sure their a lot to come its way...

Arnav here is a ruthless arrogant man bt deir exist a broken man inside him .. And to cover it he build this arrogant image of asr...

Khushi who frm begining itself seen jst the cruelty of this world will be exactly like hw u potrayed her character..

I guess arnav was an orphan was adopted by raizada's and for that anjali hate him...or may be he is a step to her...

Oh hw i frgt to say about nk.. I find it a bit differeny frm all tyms.. Hw u potrayd his character of a broker is just .. Totally diff... Ya this too is a realty sme men too choose such professions for their livelihood... Nt evryone is lucky to be a shining star...
Here one more guess nk will be related smewer in khushi's life in fthr chaps...

Prologue was totally like consternating for me... ..
Bt i hav kept my mind on rest for few chapters until some curtains are pulled off...

Bt sache di u are..amazing magnificent excellent marvellous fantastic fabulous ... Writer..

U really touch many hearts jst not with live bt evn with sme issues which we hav frgtn back in our lives.. Thanks for this story...

Here all characters all well shown up... Sply arshi...
I jst falln for aman😉 ... Man he is a gajab frd... Asr is lucky i mst say here to gt aman in his life... And all thanks to u dii...


Dard hai dil mei mere daba ab kahe
Kho gya hu mei wahe
Chod dia waqt ko ab peeche kahe
Aa gya hu ab aage chodkar sbhe
Hai na chain na khushi kahe
Bs dhoodhta hu chute zindagi mere
Paa liya sb pher bhe hu pyaasa abhe
Hai ye kaise tshnagi...
Hai ye kaise tshnagi...
Edited by arnavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
what a beautiful update .. i loved the way u have described tirupati .. i've never been there so really liked it :)
the arnav-khushi sapt was hilarious .. her demanding money was icing on the cake for me .. wondering what will be arnav's reaction !!
waiting for the maha update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update... really liked it. arnav did get attracted to khushi but they yet have a long way to go before anything happens. loved where she asks for the money... thank you for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
The Valiant Knight

CHAPTER 5

MahaaUpdate - Part 1

I wanna dedicate this mahaaupdate to two special friends hira_arnie for stalking for update 😆 and arnavini for being the sweetest person (thank you for your gift, means a lot)

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Then she saw him, the same pair of eyes behind brown lens...Much too familiar, still fresh in her mind. She took step forward and stood in front of him, I have no doubt that you are the one who burnt my dupatta. She shook her head giving him pathetic look.

He didnt hear her properly as his eyes were focused on the blood oozing off her nostrils. Ignoring the continuous streaming of blood through her nostrils and her forehead, she wriggled her fingers, Nikal, Paisa Nikal...Rs500. 250 for my dupatta and 250 for the stress I had gone through. And APOLOGIZE.

He folded his arms at his chest and looked at her dangerously without saying a word.

What are you looking at? Take the bloody money out. She was about to hold his collar in her habitual way of treating men. Even before her hands raised to his chest, he held her wrists but she was too quick and bit the padded side of his palm. He yelped in sharp pain and twisted her arms towards the ground in a swift movement. Dont you ever dare to even think of raising your hand on me. I am not one of those street rogues who will bear anything you do. Brutally tightening his grip on her wrists, he whispered, Again let me make it clear if it didnt reach your thick head, YOU CALLED FOR IT. It was your fault to let it fly on people and your fault to call me names.

Not names, just a name a**hole, in case you still havent realized! She retorted.

He tightened his grip further, pulled her closer fiercely and she writhed in his grip. He dipped his head and Khushi leaned her head backwards in reflex to stay away from him as far as she could. Khushi instantly felt him doing something below to her wrists and something wet is touching her skin. She couldnt see properly as his gelled hair was literally brushing her cheeks and chin obstructing the view and she panicked thinking if he is doing anything inappropriate.

Chodo mera haath...Leave my hand before I slap the Sh*t out of you. She yelled struggling in his grip. Anybody behind them would think they are romancing as he covered his actions with his tall built frame.

How ironic? He mocked at her. He pulled his kara from his wrist and aggressively shoved both her tiny wrists into its side opening. She yelped in pain as the metal pricked her soft skin. For the first time she felt weak infront of someone and that didnt go well with her. She felt angry with herself and highly frustrated. She wriggled to get her wrists out from the kara while people watched them suspiciously.

The extreme pressure he exerted on his knuckles to hold her firm, made them burst and bleed again and his blood rubbed all over her wrists, on her navel soaking her sheer fabric and dripping down from his fingers to her skirt. He jerked her away and scowled at her taking hanky out of his jeans pocket.

Mr. Black & White, free my hands and fight like man...She gruffed in frustration.

Too filmy, Ms. Posy. He let out a mocking smile in victory, wiping his hands. Posy??? What the hell am I thinking myself..he mentally slapped himself.

Posy? She mentally questioned herself wondering what the hell that means but soon brushed away uninterested and pounced on him, I said free my freaking hands...She was in pain but her pride, self-esteem, morale didnt let her wince evidently...She cant show that to him...not to this man...

Why dont you use your manners and plead if you are in pain, He said as if he was told she was in pain. He continued wiping his hands and an ASR smile played on his lips celebrating the moment of victory. Being the master of knowing it all, it wasnt too difficult for him to crack his enemy's expressions.

I swear if I dont get you arrested for whatever you have done, mera naam bhi...

Shut up! He roared taking step forward, losing his patience and tired of people murmuring about them and constant glances that landed on them. Arrest him? what the hell is she thinking, his mind nagged taking his temper to new levels. But she didnt flinch, instead she stood straight with her chin up.

She was about to say something again, when he held her elbow and dragged her out of the queue from underneath the ropes that blocked people from entering the queue. Since they were exiting, no one really cared to stop them.

Where the hell you are taking me?

He just carelessly walked past many people who looked at them shocked. Both are almost drenched in blood and he heard someone call security as well.

Hey..Mr...Whats your problem? Where are you taking me? She tried to stall herself from being dragged scraping her feet against the mud path but all her efforts went in vain before of his grip and strength.

Stop right now, I will scream if you dont stop. She tried to match his steps finally giving up her efforts to stop him as he literally dragged her.

I didnt know you would give up our fight so easily calling for help. I thought you are modern Joan of Arc. What happened to your audacity to fight back? He snapped slamming her to the secluded wall far behind the temple away from crowd.

She strenuously wriggled in his grip as he held her arms firmly.

Stop moving! He tried to take control of her.

Stay away..dont touch me..She barked.

ENOUGH!!! He roared on her face.

Momentarily she closed her eyes and popped them open with intrepidity which didnt please him. He had always seen vulnerable weak women. And this lady got nerves and is testing his already-no- patience brain. The moment she opened her eyes, without giving her enough time to retort, he spoke in dangerous tone, I hate to become subject of meaningless gossips which you just created plenty back there with your nonsensical attitude.

I..She was about to counter but he shushed her.

I am NOT FINISHED...He warned her again...Do you have even an ounce of idea that you are standing in temple and creating ruckus for no reason?

No reason? She spat back..Wait a min, dont tell me I will be lectured upon temple etiquettes by YOU?

When he raised his eyebrow giving warning glance, she mocked him further, Actually that would become the biggest joke, An animal like you believing in this stone building and that stone statue. She let out a mocking smile.

He momentarily loosened his grip on her wondering if she is even a girl. He thought all girls all religious and believe in God but here she is completely different calling temple as stone wall and God as stone statue. Unbelievable!!! As his grip loosened, she sought the opportunity to perform her usual stunt, to kick him in his crotch. But he was just too quick and calculative for her. The moment she raised her knee to kick him, he cupped her right knee and thrashed it down to ground.

Quite skilfull you are but your timing is pathetic. With a sly smile, he dipped his right ankle between her feet and spread them apart in a jiff and settled himself between her thighs but careful enough not to touch her abusively. She was surprised. She got first hint that he is someone who lusts and sense of satisfaction spread around her face but soon her dupatta burning down and she falling miserably flashed in her memory.

To his surprise, not once she stopped trying to get out his grip nor she called for help. Then came his words in much calmer yet firmer tone, I dont believe in God nor these structures. But unlike you I respect people who believe in it, especially my Nani. She wanted to visit this place for long time now and I wont ruin the experience for her because of some damn woman like you.

And the money I earn and things I buy with that money are most sacred for me which you happened to ruin it. You will not go until you pay for your mistake and apologize. She spoke hell-bent.

And who is stopping me?

I AM... Nani stepped forward out of no-where in Khushi's defense.

Nani? He looked shocked as she should be the last person seeing him that raged with a girl.

Tend her wounds! Nani commanded without any questions.

What? You have no idea what she did. He spoke in his defense.

I am not too interested to know your adventures with each other as it is quite evident with the way you both are looking now. If you are the reason for the bruises on her face, you should be the one to take care of those as well.

I am not doing anything of that sort. He growled and showed his back to her while Khushi enjoyed the scene heartfully. Finally someone from the family is sensible. She thought.

You will if you respect me. Saying that Nani walked away and joined Aman who sat far away clearly enjoying Raizada in such helpless state.

The moment Nani walked away he cursed Un-f*cking-real. He cupped her nape firmly shocking her. But her confidence and courage never faltered. And she tried again to shrug him off, he cared less about her struggle and raised his other hand but this time to wipe her nose with hanky. She turned numb and looked at him perplexed but that didnt last too long. She twitched and twisted not to let him touch her and splayed her wrists putting all her force on his broad chest when he said vexedly, Stop acting as if I am dying to touch you. She didnt oblige, she put more pressure on his chest to push him away. He turned to his left and noticed Nani and Aman turned the other away. He closed his eyes in frustration. Neither he was willing to tend her nor disrespect his nani.

He put more pressure on his fingers and steadied her nape firmly and spoke inbetween his gritted teeth...Use your listening ears and listen to me carefully cos I wont ask you second time. You let me or I will let you bleed to death here and with that she became quiet and number unsure whats happening, unaware why he is suddenly being fairly nice to her. Yes, not even good, just fairly nice when in fact he could have turned his back and walked away. She thought.

She felt content when his Nani scolded him. But when it dawned upon her what Nani actually asked she resisted him from touching her. But what came next left her more surprised, shocked and stood stunned feeling the intensity with which he was tending her. While one hand held her captive in menacing grip, the other hand wiped her nose tenderly and delicately with intention not to hurt her. There was absolutely no match or co-ordination between both hands. COMPLEX! was the first word came to her mind. He gently dabbed her nostrils with hanky to absorb the blood, and when the padded portion of his palm touched her lips in the process, she pursed them and looked away in disapproval giving him ample time to gaze at the trembling corner of her moist lips that shone under morning rays. NATURALLY PINK..NO LIPSTICK! He noted, why? He had no reason.

Her eyes that were impressively draped with thick black liner on her lower lids instantly turned from irritated to calm and soothing; His mind suggested nothing to describe her beauty. Honestly he had seen much more beautiful women in his life and was nothing extra-ordinary in her but what set her apart is the natural shine in her skin and the way her eyes expressed her every emotion she is going through. SHE IS EXPRESSIVE! His mind suggested, again for no reason.

Her breathing got heavy down his elbow and her stomach flipped in and out and he was well aware that its due to her IMPULSIVE TEMPERAMENT just like HIM. She is pissed, enough to kill him... unknowingly he started reading her. Her front covered in lazy pleats of her pallu pretty much exposing her flat midriff but he didnt shift his gaze beyond her wound as he was not interested, not in this woman who left no stone unturned to insult him. Then what was the need to tend her? His mind questioned. Just for Nani was his silent reply to himself and he had no reason, absolutely no interest and intention to dwell through the possibility of other reasons.

He squirmed the hanky in his fingers to find cleaner spot and moved towards her forehead, ignoring the blood seeping out of his knuckles. When the base of his palm touched the peak of her nose, she bunched his lapels tightly for support as she hissed in pain. Slowly she shifted her creased forehead and squinched eyes to him, silently warning him to be gentle. At least thats what he understood and right away lifted his palm off her nose, the moment he felt her knuckles digging against his chest and low hiss escaped her lips. They laid the first stone to the foundation of new understanding that very moment.

The moment she hissed in pain, unknowingly warning him to be gentle, she was more than pleased with the way he picked on her cue and removed his palm weight off her nose. When she turned to his face as she got inquistive to read him, he made no effort to look at her while her gaze was fixated on him. She didnt know that he was very well aware & used to such attention from women. As she read his eyes, they portrayed no aggression, no arrogance, and no pride at that moment. They were just softened, too softened to handle and too contradicting to his hold on her nape and to his ruthless vibes she is experiencing from his closeness. First time she realized that she is actually looking at his chocolate brown eyes without shades that hit the the floor long back in their fight. If he wanted, he could have wiped once just to keep his word but he got too serious and tended her gently as if out of his own will. She could see herself twinkling in his eyes. HE IS ABSTRUSE! the intensity of his gaze suggested her mind. His breathing calm and relaxed unlike when he was enraged and his lips in perfect stern shape neither gritting nor smiling.

She is expressive and he is unfathomable everything else about them is so much similar that one could mirror the other's actions and reactions. Would this single dissimilarity with many other similarities among them be enough to wrong one of the most famous history's saying Opposites Attract. [Thanks Lala, my conversation with you on previous chp led me to write this para for you]

The moment she started reading him, he didnt like it. He didnt like anybody trying to read his intentions or thoughts. Assuming that she would turn her gaze away any moment, he initially didnt made effort to look at her eyes. But when she didnt, he was bothered and felt extremely uneasy as if someone is peeking through his privacy which is when he gave up and looked at her eyes finally. Her eyes puzzled while his eyes warned her from entering his domain. His fingers slowed down in their own accord on her forehead and her fingers unleashed his lapels involuntarily. She looked away after a brief moment for being caught and her each finger in its own volition raised from fist to splay in its full form against his chest. He noticed the movement of her fingers and his gaze lingered on her fluttering lashes for few moments before he turned his attention to her forehead.

She felt warm drops falling over her forehead bringing them out of their thoughts and she looked up creasing her forehead while his gaze was already rooted there, SHE WAS STAINED WITH HIS BLOOD IN THE PRESENCE OF ALMIGHTY and few others who are important in their lives. But just these both were oblivious of what just happened and how their relation took whole new level in their religious culture while his words came unexpectedly, his eyes on her wound, his voice crisp, stern and determined, This is as much as you can get from me. You ain't getting a penny nor an apology. I hate drama, specially on streets, which is exactly what you did. I just put an end to what you instigated. He spoke coldly in his business tone referring to tending her bruises.

That hurt her ego. She showed grit and did her best to stifle his force on her. Gathering all her strength, she pushed him thrusting her fisted palms against his hard chest. What a di*khead jerk you are? You burnt my things, you dropped me to bleed, you arrested my hands, you dragged me out here...you were the one who put up a show infront of public and how dare you accuse me? Utterly obnoxious...She yelled.

He held her arms tightly pushing her against the rocky wall, glared daggers at her and grumbled between his teeth,YOU WERE THE ONE WHO dropped that piece of Sh*t almost making me ram into the truck, asked me to let you go when I saved you from fall, raised your hands instead of apologizing for your fits of temperament, started yelling in public insulting me AND before I lose my control, YOU BE THE ONE TO GET OUTTA HERE. With that he jerked her against the rough wall. He never had to deal with any woman for such longer minutes. But this woman was something. She got a nerve. He wanted her out of his sight that very sec, before he hurt her in any possible way, physically or verbally.

She closed her eyes tightly for a fraction of second and silently winced in pain as the rocky grits pricked her skin on her back. But soon she stood unmoved and unflinched, absolutely not intimidated by his voice or his demeanor which riled him up further.

I said GET THE F*CK OUTTA HERE! He snarled at her taking a step closer to her.

She jerked up startled at his roar.

Arnie!!! Aman came running to him. Forcing his palms on his chest, he tried to take him away. But he was too difficult to be moved and stood rooted on his ground while she didnt move either.

Arnie..MOVE...Aman tried once again to drag him away and apologized to Khushi who was still looking at Arnav angrily. Sorry Ma'm...

Why the F*ck are YOU saying sorry? She was the one who made mistake.

You were the one who is responsible for everything. I didnt do any mistake. She yelled back.

What the heck you mean I am responsible? He charged on her.

Guys, stop it...Aman tried to stop them from punching each other well not literally.

Dint you burn my dupatta?

Because you called me...

As*hole..Thats exactly what I called you. She filled it for him. And before he stepped closer further she continued, Thats because you threw it on the road.

You f*cking almost killed us throwing it on our windshield. He barked.

That sounds so good to my ears. The people on earth would have lived in peace and felt much better in your absence. She said it finally and felt satisfied with her retort.

He stood grinding his teeth, flaring his nostrils, reddening his ears and not to forget, his eyes burning with rage. He is raged beyond reason and for the first time so much towards a woman.

Aman who was facing Arnav all the while to control him, shot back at her in shock as he heard her words. You shouldnt have said THAT. Anything but THAT!!!! He snapped defending his friend.

Thats when she realized she said something terrible, something that shut him off completely. She expected a counter but he kept mum. She couldnt understand if that was hurt or rage that flooded in his eyes. Though she regretted to cross the boundary she didnt let it show on her face and she knew it would be his advantage if she showed any hint of remorse. But nevertheless, she decided to clarify and when she opened her mouth to speak...

Aman didnt give her a chance and showed his hand in the air gesturing her to stop & dragged Arnav forcibly. Arnav wasnt in position to face that woman even for another fraction of sec. He obliged Aman and walked away hurt & enraged but not before giving a deathly glare to Khushi.

Tu iss dharti mein bhoj banke aaya hain [you have entered this world as nothing but burden]

You are unwanted..Why dont you get it?

I DONT DESERVE THIS NOT THEN NOT NOW...His mind chanted as he retreated his steps.

Aman who walked few feet, stopped in his tracks and turned to her who was looking at Arnav's retreating form bewilderedly. Do you want me to call Doctor for you?

She didnt respond. She was too engrossed to sort out why he was so offended. Out of all the abusive words she used, he had to pick only this to get offended. She wasnt sure why it made impact this time. Once Arnav was out of sight, she walked away, her hands still locked in his Kara, her maang beautifully adorned in his blood. What a pretty bride and what an exceptional marriage?

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Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago
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The Valiant Knight

CHAPTER 5

MahaaUpdate - Part 2

Soon after Aman noted down Madhumati's number in the queue, he turned around to check on the bitter enemies only to find them on the other side of the gate. Madhumati was shocked and happy to see her daughter being cordial with a MAN, as she didnt comprehend the real situation since Khushi was showing her back marring her expressions. Nani too smiled proudly watching her grandson listening attentively with his hands crossed at his chest, assuming that finally he found someone he could listen to.

Dont they look too beautiful? Nani squealed in Aman's ears in excitement.

Except that they think otherwise and are now ready to kill each other any moment. Boyfriend ki girlfriend, fix your glasses and look keenly..They are fighting. And make sure you pray well for both of them as none is backing out soon. Aman suggested fluttering his brows dramatically.

When all three came out after darshan, they didnt find the bitter enemies, nor they could come out through the way they entered. Aman and Nani didnt reveal to Madhumati that they were fighting. Instead they asked her to collect prashad and they both bypassed the same queues leaving Madhumati behind. And when they came around the temple, they spotted them arguing. Aman and Nani settled down in a corner admiring the way Khushi stood with her chin up giving Arnav tough time.

You have to hook THIS LAVANYA to your grandson. She is the one who will handle him and show him his ground all the lifetimes not just one. Aman grinned thoroughly enjoying Arnav's frustration.

Her name is Khushi. Nani supplied information with glee smile.

That name reminded him that he needs to meet that catering lady..I will be f*cked if I dont settle it tomorrow. He murmured under his breath.

Kuch kaha? Nani asked with her eyes fixed on the couple.

Nice name..He smiled bringing his attention back to the couple in view.

When Nani saw Arnav not relenting and was sure that he would make move any min, she stepped in to trigger some sparks between them which is when she asked him to tend her wounds. Just as she expected Sparks lit but it just didnt quite hit the nerves of the 2 dumb people involved. When Nani spotted Madhumati approaching, Aman and Nani turned to her almost blocking her from the budding romance. But they were not quite successful when Madhumati peeked over Nani shoulder and spotted Khushi standing close to Arnav holding his lapels. A smile escaped her lips but soon faltered. And thats the sight shook the ladies, Arnav's blood dripping from his fingers and flowing onto Khushi's partition perfectly on the right spot. The ladies exchanged glances and let out an uncomfortable smile. When Aman gave questioning look to Nani, she smiled and winked at him almost throwing him off the balance. Madhumati failed to see Kara on Khushi's hands and when she spotted blood on her face, she panicked and was about to rush to them when Nani assured Madhumati that Khushi is safe where she is and took her away for little chat leaving Aman to guard them.

Soon things went out of control which is when Aman rushed to them and tried to stop the fight but ended up defending his friend. Nobody, nobody in this world has any right to judge his friend. He deserved and will always deserves better. On that note, he dragged Arnav away leaving Khushi to her own.

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Madhumati came rushing to cottage after not finding Khushi in the temple. She slammed the doors open and noticed Khushi sitting on the bed tiredly with her eyes closed leaning against the headboard.

Buaji came rushing to her, seeing her in the same attire and her forehead covered in dried patches of blood. She patted her cheeks and felt relieved when Khushi woke up squinching her eyes.

Buaji, you are here? I was waiting for you. Khushi said stifling her yawn with her locked up wrists, which is when Buaji registered her condition. She looked too fragile and panicked seeing Khushi's hands like that.

Yeh kya hai? How did you get into this like this?

Nothing..woh...Khushi got up in pretense to look for something.

Khushi, who did this?

Nobody Buaji. I found this kara on the street. I was amazed to see how big this is and was intrigued to check if this would fit my wrists and look it did fit. She said with glee smile. The smile which appears on Khushi's face when she lies to Buaji.

Khushi never shared any problem or trouble she had with Buaji. Being the single mother, she worked so hard to support 2 girls which is why Khushi made sure her problems, her encounters with cheap men were always kept in dark, which is another reason Khushi turned out strong enough to protect and manage herself without being burden on anyone else emotionally or physically.

Understanding her discomfort in telling truth, Madhumati let the matter go and spoke in hurt, Are you planning to wear them all your life long that way?

Khushi understood that Buaji didnt believe any word of hers and spoke barely above whisper. I needed your help to take me out of these.

It took lot of effort to take that thick metal off her wrists. She was barely able to move her hands. Thick blue ring formed around her swollen wrists signifying blood clot. She masked her pain and excused herself to bathroom while Madhumati lost in her thoughts to talk to her about what she saw earlier.

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Aman didnt reveal what happened to Nani as he didnt wanted her to be upset. He evaded the topic saying Arnav is suffering from bad headache which is why he locked himself up since afternoon.

But Nani knew too much about Arnav to believe that. She knew he is in pain otherwise he would never lock himself for so many hours and also she needed to speak to him about something she saw in the afternoon.

Ignoring Aman's suggestions, she knocked at his door. And when she heard no response, she whined in her typical charming tone. Boyfriend, I am missing you. Can I see you just once pleassshhh?

The next moment the door opened with his eyes squinted with sudden of throw of external light on his face. He was in dark room with absolutely no light.

Nani stepped in turning on the lights as he went back to his bed and laid on his stomach. She sat next to him, caressing his hair. I know you are upset but I dont know why and I want to know why. Could you share it with me? She asked sweetly.

I am not upset Nani was his mumbled reply.

Nani felt sad that he never shares anything with her or with anybody as a matter of fact. Changing the topic conveniently, You didnt eat anything since morning. You know that its not good for your health.

Not hungry. Was his moody answer.

Then something is definitely wrong. Brushing her fingers in his hair, she spoke convincingly like how a mother explains her child, Sometimes somethings get out of control and happen beyond any reason unintentionally or unknowingly. Its better to push them aside and carry on with life.

He shot open his eyes remembering her words, The people on earth would have lived in peace and felt much better in your absence.

Not if those are instilled in every drop of your blood. He said curtly.

But that blood always gets purified.

He remained silent. How will he tell that even his purified blood carries grits of pain thats pricks every corner it travels through his body and soul. That will only die along with him.

Whatever is bothering you, its not worth your time and mental peace. Come, we will eat.

You havent eaten yet? He shot his head up and asked her.

Not without you! She pouted.

Kya girlfriend? Come lets go. He dragged her out to the table where a monkey in the name of Aman Verma is already waiting with sunken eyes.

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Khushi stood in the bathroom and looked shocked to see herself in the mirror. She tried to raise her hands to touch her forehead but they didnt co-operate. She closed her eyes remembering how he tended her bruises. Ironically, she forgot the fact that he was the reason for her bruises.

He was hurt too. Realization slowly dawned upon her as she remembered seeing his knuckles bleed and soaking her forehead. She looked at her hands, her pallu, her belly, her skirt completely stained in blood. His blood. She murmured unconsciously. With great difficulty, she took the blood stained fabric between her fingers to feel his dried up blood.

She empathize with him who is going through the similar pain on his hands.

Strenuously, she pulled her wrists under the water only to hiss in tremendous pain.

Khushi, rush up. We need to catch bus in an hour. We have to stop for medical shop to treat your wrists and grab some food on the way as well. Madhumati called from outside.

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Arnav couldnt manage to tear the roti into bits as his knuckles gave up. He let out low groan in pain. And when Nani offered to feed him, he refused and started eating with his left hand. He never like pampered, served or fed. Not once he let anyone do that for his own personal reasons.

While Aman was briefing about their tomorrow's trip to Hyderabad, Arnav silently munched on his bites while his eyes focused on the knuckles. That reminded him of her wrists locked in his kara.

She must be in pain. His mind prompted remembering how tight the metal was around her wrists. Unknowingly concern took over all other emotions in his eyes.

Then he remembered how she struggled to the last sec without giving up. A small smile appeared on his lips in her appreciation.

Then came her words ringing loud in his ears...Soon anger took over every other emotion in his face and his eyes.

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The Valiant Knight

CHAPTER 5

MahaaUpdate - Part 3

Hyderabad...HITECH City...Friday...

After Nani was sent away to Mumbai this morning, Arnav and Aman flew to Hyderabad in their private jet. Arnav remained unusually silent since yesterday and Aman didnt force him to speak either as he very well knew he just needed space for sometime.

While Aman thought that Arnav is silent remembering Khushi's words, Arnav was deeply engrossed remembering Nani's words in the morning.

Intentionally or unintentionally, Knowingly or unknowingly, it happened beta. Your blood and your fingers did what a groom will typically be doing to make a bride his wife. She became your wife that very moment. I strongly believe that whatever happened is happened for good and its pure blessing from God.

Things and customs change from time to time Nani. You very well know, nothing of that sort was intended. I dont believe in marriage and even if I did, she will definitely not be the chosen one. You should stop giving any importance to that. That day is over and I dont prefer to see her again in my life.

What an illogical conclusion? Marriage and that too with her..Damn Ms. Posy. he swore...And in the whole fiasco of fight with her, Arnav forgot about the dance teacher. As Aman steered the car towards the catering lady, Arnav called Ashu to get her teacher's phone number but the she apologized saying she needs her permission before giving out her phone number. He was impressed, thoroughly impressed with her private life, which is just like his.

Aman wondered why Arnav is enquiring a lady's details and when Aman questioned, all he got was his famous silence. So he didnt dwell in. Aman stopped the car infront of Khushi's Catering office. Arnav stepped out and took in the area but looked annoyed and gave an accusing look to Aman to see the shutter closed. Its Closed.

Aman looked around silently pleading Arnav's mercy. He thanked his stars when his fell on the board that said, Will be back on Friday...

Look, I was right. She should be here today. Aman pointed board to Arnav.

But she is not here today. Whats your plan B? Arnav demanded scrunching his eyebrows behind his brown aviators and walking towards the car.

There is no pla...Aman stopped as he saw the most unexpected person getting down the auto-rickshaw.

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Hyderabad...Friday...

Since Khushi's wrists struggled to co-operate, Madhumati stopped her from working on that day. But Khushi was worried that she already lost 3 days of income which is very needful for kids in WeCare. Finally after lot of pleading, Buaji agreed to Khushi's request to at least visit her catering site to change the board on her return and to mail coupons for her customers as an apology for her sudden absence on today. Buaji warned her not to take her van or bus which is why she reluctantly got into auto, continuously cursing herself for spending so much on the three wheels.

When she tried to get into auto, she winced in pain with the pressure she put on wrist. From there, her thoughts took off on speed jet remembering each and every bitter moment she shared with Arnav, finally landing her thoughts on Buaji's words this morning.

I saw you with him standing close to him. Observing her flushed cheeks, Buaji continued, Not that I minded just to let you know. If you are happy, I am happy,

Buaji, nothing of that sort. He was just..

He was just filling your maang with his blood. Thats it. Isnt it? Buaji asked making Khushi sit on bed.

Ji, thats it... It didnt ring to Khushi.

Good I am happy you accepted it. So when are you guys planning fulfill rest of the formalities?

Formalities? Isme kya formalities? Khushi asked puzzled.

What kind of stupid question is that? Roka [engagement], Haldi, Mehendi, Jaimala..

Wait..stop stop stop...What are you saying?

Thats when Madhumati realized that Khushi had no idea what happened with her. And when she explained, she jerked off the bed.

He was just trying to stop the blood so I didnt stop him. Plus it serves him right for accusing me. And here you are taking it in whole different route.

Khushi, whether you admit it or not, thats how the marriage is written in our culture. I believe he is your husband and you guys are married atleast half way there.

What rubbish Bua? I dont believe in this. You know very well I dont believe in marriage and certainly he will not the one if I chose to marry someday. Please trash these thoughts from your head. It was nothing and meant nothing. She smarted.

Buaji approached her and cupped her cheek. Are you sure there is nothing? She asked her once again for the last tme.

Ofcourse, I will be called insane if I marry him. And please dont bring this topic again. She spoke irritated.

Chalo then. If thats what you want, I am with you. Lets forget about it. Madhumati smiled though she worried inside being conservative in such matters.

Khushi leaned towards the edge of her seat to check herself in the side view mirror of the auto and focused her eyes on her forehead. She remembered how she looked with his blood all over her forehead. She quickly averted her eyes unsure of what she should feel and trust at that point when auto halted infront of her shop. She looked at her swollen wrists and cursed him under his breath...Marriage with Sadist!...As if I got nothing better to do in my life..She muttered referring to whole marriage theory with the Black & White.

She got down of the vehicle to pay the auto-driver and turned to see a car waiting infront of her shop and felt someone's glance on her back.

Khushi? Aman called her name aloud spotting her getting off the auto-rickshaw.

Yeah... Khushi said turning towards the source of voice and was surprised to see Aman standing few feet away.

What are you doing here? was his immediate question.

She scrunched her eyebrows and asked the same question, That applies to you as well. What are YOU doing here?

Ofcourse! I am here to meet the owner of..wait a min..Do you own this? He asked pointing to her shop.

Yeah, any problem? She spoke irritated remembering the whole fight with his friend. She needed a break from his thoughts and here everyone is hell bent to remind her the most pathetic day of her life, She walked away uninterested ignoring Aman's presence.

I am so f*cked up between two. Was his immediate remark looking at Arnav who stood shocked at a distance.

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Arnav opened the passenger side door asking Aman about Plan B when he heard Aman calling Khushi.

He stopped in his tracks and turned around in a jiff to assess the owner before putting his plan into action. Whom he saw stopped his world for a second as she was least expected at that min and moreover he was sure that he would never meet her again. But he realized things are not exactly going by his terms especially when its related to her. Posy is Khushi!!! And then came the huge shock that she is the lady behind the successful business. Soon the shock turned into sly smile as its pay back time and he leaned against his door assessing his enemy thoroughly taking his own sweet time.

She walked to her shop oblivious of Arnav's presence, dressed in simple plain pearl white cotton chudidhar, complemented with brown dupatta loosely draped from her neck to the end of her wrists, pretty much covering her entire frontal frame. Her thick black brown hair neatly plaited with few loose strands cupping her cheek on one side. Her feet covered in flats which seemed to have bought from platform shop. She didnt look like a owner of business in any way to his surprise. She looked more like an employee. His thoughts were shaken when the lock fell from her hand making her shake her wrist in the air. The way she blew air on her wrists taught him that she is in pain. And there she sat for several mins in several poses, trying to get the metal shutter roll up. He watched hoping that she will turn back and ask for help and when she didnt, it clearly portrayed how egoistic, stubborn, and independent lady she is.

The moment Aman learnt Khushi is the owner, he let out naughty smile remembering Nani's words...She is my daughter-in-law. He married her and soon he will realize and thats your job to make him realize. Time to play cupid was his silent words but soon realization dawned how they both tried to kill each other yesterday and he rushed to Arnav and whispered, Arnie, you go. I will handle this deal.

She got way too personal to let her go Aman. I want this business by hook or crook, even if I have to destroy someone's life, I need her business on my name. Get the papers. Arnav instructed Aman to get the paperwork from Car and he moved towards her to make use of the situation to mock at her.

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Khushi walked to the shop unaware that a pair of eyes were fixed on her. She settled on her knees and struggled hard for few secs to twist the key into lock and unlock it. And when she did, she wriggled her wrist in the air, blowing air from her mouth to soothe the pain. She stood on her feet and bent down to lift the shutter. She used one hand, didnt work. She used both hands, didnt succeed that way either. Her eyes welled up in physical pain as she put tremendous pressure on her wrists. She gritted her teeth and closed her eyes to gather all her strength to lift the shutter and to her surprise the next second she felt a hand slipped into the shutter handle enveloping her hand.

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While Aman was busy gathering paperwork from car, Arnav removed his shades and walked towards her with intention to mock the life out of her, basically insult her for no reason. He was mad, how dare she say such words yesterday when she is not sure how that would have affected him.

But as he leaned down next to her, he keenly watched how she shut her eyes in pain still struggling to get the shutter up. He forgot what he came for and involuntarily slipped his right palm into the handle encasing her hand, which is when he noticed the severity of bruises on her wrists and at that same moment she happened to look at him feeling his touch.

Black & White? She murmured under her breath in shock seeing him sitting next to her in his navy blue shirt neatly tucked under grey suit complimented with white and grey striped tie. Her jaw literally dropped to the ground wondering what he is doing there.

She muttered in shock audible enough to his ears but he showed no acknowledgement. He caught her wrists with his left hand and tried to free the handle off her grip but she adamantly held onto them, silently conveying she doesnt need his help. Then her eyes fell on his knuckles tightly wrapped in white plaster. Soon her anger turned to empathy and she spoke in much calmer tone than yesterday, I dont need your help..I can manage.

Ignoring her words, he tried once again without looking at her. And this time, she tightened her hold on the handle with no intention to back off, losing her temper. I said leave me alone. She spoke angrily.

Taking deep breath, with clenched jaw, he spoke in menacing tone, I dont have all day to stand and wait for you to open this damn thing. He tried to free her hand again but she didnt relent instead she added nastily, How many times should I say not to touch me? I dont like you touching me. Its its...DISGUSTING...

OUCH, that wounded his ego...Here he is trying to help and she is showing attitude. He swore under his breath when he heard her say disgusting. He lost his cool that very moment and muttered to her ears..I will show you how disgusting I can get... and he encircled his fingers tightly on her swollen wrists emphasizing his words. Instantly she moaned in pain, shutting her eyes tightly, she pressed her face sideways against her shoulder in his direction. Her face was barely an inch away from his. Her forehead contracted, eyes squinched tightly, nose scrunched, and lips twitched in discomfort. Every facial feature of hers expressed her pain. He couldnt see so much discomfort in her face and slowly eased his grip barely brushing her skin as he read her face, looking at her closed eyes.

The moment her wrists were freed, slowly relaxing her contracted brows, she looked up to see his eyes that are now softened with care and no traces of anger. She felt his eyes shifting from her eyes to her forehead that severed a rupture and finally halting & lingering on her partition. She wondered if he was talked about the so-called accidental marriage between them. The moment he looked into her eyes again and shifted his gaze to the partition confirmed her doubts that he indeed is thinking about the same she was thinking. Instantly, she turned away, prohibiting him from looking at her, each remembering what their respective elders told about them being already married.

Why are you here? She asked with her eyes focused on his bruised knuckles.

You will know soon. Was his curt reply.

I will not allow any strangers into my place unless I am aware of their appropriate intentions.

I dont need a reason to enter my property. You are just a tenant renting this place which belongs to AR Ventures, which is owned by Arnav Singh Raizada and THAT UNFORTUNATELY HAPPENED TO BE ME! With that he grabbed her wrists and removed them from the handle and swiftly rolled the shutter up startling her with what he just said.

Arnav Singh Raizada? He is Mr. Raizada? Owner of AR Ventures? Payal's boss? Is he here to chuck me out because I offended him yesterday? Was her first thought as she stepped in. She turned around to question him again about the sudden show-up but noticed him already seated in a chair, with his knees crossed, a dark blue file in his left hand, a red pen in his right hand, giving occasional nods to whatever Aman was explaining to him. He looked nothing short of a shrewd businessman.

What are you doing here? Is there anythere else you need to tie around me? She said in mocking tone referring to her wrists, totally irritated at their audacity to sit infront of her and totally ignoring her as if she didnt exist.

Arnav shifted his eyes to her wrists to take one more look but she immediately dropped her dupatta covering them, silently conveying he has no right to look at her. And he got the message to the T.

Aman hearing her question, answered impulsively as Nani's words kept lingering in his mind, Yeah Mangalsutra!!! Two heads snapped back at him, one glowering and the other raising brows threatening him to watch his words.

Sorry I was just thinking about someone else. I meant business ties. He tried to cover it up.

Khushi narrowed her eyes and looked at Arnav for explanation. Would you both care to explain what business ties you are talking about? She asked angrily crossing her arms at her midriff.

Delectable Morsel...Arnav started getting down straight to business without looking at her, as if he is talking to wall. Started 3 years go...revenue at large exceeding the expenses, costs, and taxes. First business I have heard gaining profits in less than 3 months. Impressive!!! He stressed on P for emphasis. What started off as 5lakh business is now worth 30lakhs. My offer 60lakhs, the operational costs, expenses, taxes will be handled by me including the profits and losses. And you will work as AR Ventures employee-cum-manager. Basically, you will be doing the same thing you are doing now but the business will be under my name and you should act per my instructions. He slammed the file close as he gave her a stern stare.

Ge..Before she could say Get Out, she was interrupted...

Uhuh..Dont say Get Out..Before the word Out comes off your mouth, you will be chucked out of my property breaking the lease. And I know how to come around for breaking the contracts. So there is really not an option for you here unless you wanna discuss counter offers which I am absolutely fine with. Arnav said shifting himself to more relaxed position.

She silently walked towards the corner and lighted the gas to prepare coffee, while they observed her in surprise. Khushi needed that time to mentally plan her strategy to show his ground. This business had always been her dream and life which she cannot afford to lose it any cost. This is the main bread winner to feed the kids in WeCare and to save money for Payal's marriage. She couldnt afford to lose it. She needs to come up with something that strikes him hard. He is good with words and extremely well versed in his business tactics. She understood by then and she must take her next step calculatively.

What is she doing? Why didnt she react? I dont remember asking coffee, did you? Aman poured his set of questions confused at what Khushi is doing.

She is buying time to plan her next move. Coffee is just an excuse. Arnav muttered audible enough to just Aman.

With great difficulty, supporting her one wrist under the other, she poured coffee into three cups and carried the tray with strenuous effort. Her hands shaking all the way she walked to them. Did he hurt her that bad? was his first question that popped looking at the way she struggled to carry the tray. Another question immediately followed, If so, why dont she voice her pain? He got up from his seat and took the tray from her hands forcibly even though she resisted. She swore under her breath as she didnt like him taking control over her at every step.

Arnav gestured his hand to stop her when She was about to pick up the cup to give it to Arnav, while Aman on the other hand volunteered himself to grab a cup. He took the first sip and complimented, Out of the world, best coffee I ever tasted, to which Khushi gave a nod of acknowledgment.

While Khushi was busy with lifting her own cup, Arnav gave him warning glare, to which Aman leaned and whispered, I bet on my life You will regret it later. Its phenomenal. Try it. He goaded Arnav.

When Khushi offered the cup again, Arnav said in his deep voice, I dont drink coffee.

Aman instantly pitched in, Correction, he doesnt drink sugared coffee.

Khushi looked at Arnav and spoke slyly, So I was right...only people who are compassionate will understand the meaning of sugar, sweet, kind, tender, and sympathy in life. I am not surprised that your uncompassionate friend doesnt take sugar. Totally justifies him...This anyway doesnt have sugar in it. She pointed to the third cup as she finished her little observation looking at him from the rim of her cup.

Arnav shook his head and let out a sly laugh...I think you were too engrossed in strategizing your counter offer that you forgot, you were about to hand me the cup you are drinking now. Which means, he snatched the cup from her hands and took a sip out of her coffee cup casually, shocking Aman, there is no sugar in your coffee as well. That makes you as uncompassionate as I am.

These 2 idiots get engrossed in fight so much that they dont realize the romantic stuff happening between them. Aman shook his head in dismay and smirked when he found Arnav closing his eyes relishing the coffee on his taste buds. Thats Arnav's way of complimenting anything thats just too exceptional and phenomenal. And as Aman expected, the cup didnt leave Raizada's hands until the last drop warmed his throat.

She looked bewildered wondering how thats even possible, when Aman spoke, You forgot to add sugar Ms. Khushi.

And you shouldnt be drinking if you are not capable enough to hold a cup evenly! Arnav retorted to her earlier comment of I-can-manage lecture she gave while opening the shutter.

What are these people? Are they businessmen or detectives? Nervous lines clearly showed up on her forehead.

So what have you decided Ms. Khushi? Arnav provoked her, not giving her easy time.

But she was clear what she wanted and she spoke confidently.

I feed atleast 300 people every afternoon, that includes my customers, my employees, my family and few special people in my life. So how much can you offer me for the amount of satisfaction I get earning my own money and spending that on these people..what do you have to offer me in compensation? She asked now it was her turn to sit back and enjoy.

What do you have in mind? Came his direct question.

If I sell this to you, I will be left with 60laks, and monthly income and I have to slog under you. She leaned forward making her point, I grew this business to 600% in 3 years and I am sure at this rate I would soon hit crores club and might even start franchisees.

Come to the point. He goaded her irritated.

I will sell this to you if you make me partner of AR Ventures, with equal rights and equal share. She said bravely.

Aman coughed up heavily at ridiculous counter offer, while Arnav laughed out loud mockingly. Its good to be greedy in business but not to the extent that it will eat you alive. You sound more like fool than a businesswoman.

When a greedy billionaire fool like you could come to my door step for 30 lak business, I dont see anything wrong in getting greedy for billions. She said angrily for being referred as fool.

This girl is teaching me the spelling of patience. He thought taking deep breath to control his riled up anger. I dont accept your offer neither I will any other of yours in the future. You just lost your chance. I am giving you 3 days time to accept. Otherwise, be prepared to get kicked out. Saying that he stood up to leave to be stopped by her.

I am not fool to let this go. Its my life and I wont let anyone touch my life without my permission. I will fight till my last breath. She spoke firmly.

Then be prepared to take last breath as I am not backing down even if that means to destroy your everything. He started to walk but stopped again hearing her question,

Why are you doing this?

He turned around and came closer but she didnt take a step backward nor flinched, instead she stood rooted to her spot with her chin up, You rubbed me wrong way Ms. Posy. This has become way too personal now. I wont rest till you fail...Good Luck! You need it alot... Saying that he walked away without turning back, ignoring her words on his back, I wont let you win Mr. Black & White!

Khushi stomped her feet and walked inside her shop. It irked her that he remained cool, calm and composed even when she tried to break and provoke him. She was expecting him to lose control with rage and leave like yesterday but he totally surprised her with his cold demeanor. Little did she know that he never loses his temper or cool when he deals business. Thats the only time one who could witness most calm, and rooted Arnav Singh Raizada.

Aman had no option but to leave along with Arnav. He is worried and he needs to speak to Nani ASAP.

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Phewww.. Finally read it..

You knw wat i m bcmng a lazy ass for reading long updates nw ... :-\

Sorry haan phr v...

Dey r married nw :O :O


Omgggh .. Dis was d best nd new way of marriage jahan dulha dulhan ko pata v nai chala nd dey married..

Awsmm


Back to update

Dey fights cat nd mouse.. Or more worse den dem

Dey didnt leave a single chnce to hurt each other..

How badly dey were fighting didnt dey even bother to think wat damage dey r creating to each other

Nd wat image dey r leaving in d society

Both r arrogant nd asshole.. Yuppp wat dey r .. Neither of dem wil back out nd wil fight cntinously

Both r fault bt wnt accept

Egoistic ppl

Bt i loved d care wich arnav showed aftr his nani said him to treat d wound he came to khushi

I loved d way he treated her wounds


As if Her wounds were paining him he cared dem wid so much tender

Aag dono taraf barabar hai.. Bus dhua dena ki jarurat hai

D fire in both eyes wasnt miss by nani either

Nw nani nd aman wil play as a cupid..Madhumati is innocent soul kuch nai samjhti

Bt later both regretted ... In some sense

Both didnt agree to dis marriage

Both wnt backout for d property

Both r clever enough to play dere moves

Hayeee dat was so romantic coffee part was cute


Nw one thng is left

I knw i hvnt mntnd many thing .. Bt i m waiting for tym to say dose thing ..

Till den i m waiting

Loved d update dii

cmnt is nt upto d mark i knw



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yeh Khushi bhi naa, sometimes too much...paisa maangne tak toh thik tha, leking trying to hold his coller and bit him...what the...bilkul pagal hain woh... No wonder Arnav got so angry...and reacted like that...gusse wala toh woh hain bhi, also Khushi pressed the wrong button here...

God...itna saara blood...both her and his...here they dont even care...crazy people...also Mr. Black & White and Ms. Posy...oye hoye...good start...at least calling names se toh achha hain...

and the fight they had...mujhe nahi pata main kya bolun...I will not say either of them is wrong, still none of them is right in their behavior too...normal people like us situations ko aise nahi handle karte...then again we cant forget these two havent got a complete-happy-wala-childhood, and saw the bad side of the world more than any normal people...so their thinking and seeing things and behaving will be different naa...thats what they did...their behavior were so true to themselves...hum samajhte hain Di...dono ko...

what I love is how Arnav doesnt disrespect nani, and tended her wound, despite nani's already gone...how Khushi noticed the contrast between his two hands...COMPLICATED...so apt...

and how he noticed her tiny little things...why Arnav Bitwa...aapka dil kya kam karne laga...dimaag ki baat nahi maan raha hain...:P and the TENDING SESSION Di... and her forehead stained in his blood...OMG...if only they realized what has just happened...and thats hell of a start of their journey, which is beyond these fighting and all...

thank God Aman was there atleast, warna pata nahi yeh dono aur kya scene karte...and what Khushi said, isnt her fault naa, how she's not suppoed to know its effect on him naa...I feel sorry for both Di, but I am more sympathetic to Arnav, I guess...at least Khushi expressed...but he doesnt...

"She is expressive and he is unfathomable everything else about them is so much similar that one could mirror the other's actions and reactions."...wow...this one line said it all...

Do I need to say again that I love this Aman...I watch a show, there's a boy, the lead's friend, he is the most sensible, caring, intelligent and witty person of the whole gang...Aman reminds me of him...not by anything to do with the story or character...but only by his behavior...(by the way, I love that boy too)

Arnav's convo with nani...Di...he is still a child at heart...dont know why, but I get so emotional reading that part...i really felt like hugging him like a kid and told him none of this is his fault, he shouldnt be the one suffering...never...

ArShi remembering each other, conveniently forgetting the bitter part and only thinking about the pain of the respective other...even appreciating the other unknowingly...again their hearts trying to overpower their minds...one day, they will...ONE DAY...

both Nani and Buaji believed that its MARRIAGE for them...and their words did left the effect on both Arnav and Khushi...i would b a fool to think they would agree but at least they are thinking of each other...about the situation...even considering the possiblity...I am satisfied with this much for now...

then their meeting again...loved how u portrayed Khushi as a real strong girl...how Arnav despite wanting to mock her, helped her when she needed...despite wanting to hurt her, felt her pain...

and the rest...what should I say...i'm still in awe...the perfect businessman he is...but Khushi is not any less...we always say him the shrewd businessman...here I wanna use this word for Khushi...SHREWD...that she is...the whole talk was AWESOME Di...reaaly loved it...

by the way, Khushi thought Arnav is Payal's boss...hope there wont be any misunderstanding due to this...which reminds me of Saturday is tomorrow...am waiting to see what's gonna happen in Mumbai...
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Till now what ever FF's or SS I read I always had an inclination to either Arnav or Khushi but in this FF I am struggling whom to support. As a women my heart wants to support Khushi but again my brain says that before being a women I am a human so I need to support Arnav too , see their comes the conflict between mind and heart and I think that is going to happen a lot in this FF too.

Because if my observation is correct the conflict between heart and mind has already started in both Arnav and Khushi. They can see the pain in each others eyes they can read each other but their minds are over shadowing them.


As khoon bhari maang 😆 . They got married to each other unknowingly in front of Lord Balaji who is also know as Kaliyuga Dayivam . Have to wait and see what destiny has planned. I have observed one more thing Khushi thinks that Arnav is Payals boss so there is one more misunderstanding 😕 to be added on TOP of all this mess.


As I said earlier in my comment that opposite poles attract but I want to correct myself they are the mirror images which they too might have noticed but not in a position to accept. Aman wants to play a cupid lol Aman zara bachke rehna kuyn ki you have to deal with 2 ASR's 😆 .

Nice update
Edited by Srilathalolla - 11 years ago

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