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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#851

bookmarking - will read this before going to the sequel

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nmaharaj

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I just finished reading the entire story within a few days. Couldn't stop. Your story was so heart wrenching. You were able to bring alive all the feelings both Arnav and Khushi experienced. And I am so looking to Phase 2 as honestly I really was sad to the ending of the last Chapter. As you said it's time both experience happiness. I do hope your Phase 2 is soon, and I would liked to be PM on your story when you do update.

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Srilatha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: nmaharaj
I just finished reading the entire story within a few days. Couldn't stop. Your story was so heart wrenching. You were able to bring alive all the feelings both Arnav and Khushi experienced. And I am so looking to Phase 2 as honestly I really was sad to the ending of the last Chapter. As you said it's time both experience happiness. I do hope your Phase 2 is soon, and I would liked to be PM on your story when you do update.

Phase 2 is also completed and the name is Fighting Fate

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4073026

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286pearl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#854

i wanna start a journey with dis ff...

d prologue seems very much interesting...

their r so many question buzz in my mind...

but i know i have patience for move on further

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sarithac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#855

Wow toxic love your wrote stories u wrotr very well I love stranger hearts but some you didn't update said in pm I love to read full pm me all your stories and write more stories the one thing every writer wants is comments and likes I know that your story views tells how good you are in writing thank you very late I found you and love you

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Aakanksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#856

Read the entire FF at one go and loved the way you have written it.

The plot, the characters and the emotions portrayed in the story are bang on perfect. I love the Khushi you have shown in this FF. She is head strong and at the same time vulnerable. But one thing that is constant in both her forms is that she can take decisions for herself and sticks to them no matter what.

Yes, the ending was not a happy one but I find it justified under the circumstances it happened.

The pain that Khushi might have gone through while taking that decision I cannot fathom. Coz' no matter what she loves Arnav a lot..and by "a lot" means a lot. So taking a decision where in she had to leave Arnav for the child whom she is not able to accept wholeheartedly must have been painful for sure. But she did take it.. As she can't leave the child somewhere and that is understandable, as the background she comes from, she will never let a child suffer.. even if she doesn't accept him. And she can't see Arnav in pain..coz' she thinks that for Arnav that child would be a burden. And she can't see that happening. She had promised to him that she is his...and circumstantially she failed to keep that promise.
But what she fails to understand is that it was never her fault. Whatever happened was a result of incorrect situations, and she can't keep on blaming herself for that. That's what Arnav tried to explain but I guess she was too much bent down in guilt to understand it.

But I don't blame Khushi either. We can't understand what goes on in someone's mind being a rape victim.

But anyways that you have ended.

Now next I am going to read the sequel to it and see what have you planned for our favourite couple..

Keep up the good work

Lots Of Love..😊😊