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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey frenz this is my on going ff m again starting it..

You all r requested to leave ur feedback thru comments.yes i know i was the one who told u not to..isliye now m saying u can..lolz

YES YOU ALL MAY COMMENT NOW!

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

" Ap mujhebatayenge meri zoya kaha hai.." asked a man banging on the table .his sweaty hand laid a mark on th surface it met.
"its on ur right.Mr..."
with out leting the white lady finish her words he ran to the door she pointed.
he stood there almost colliding legs itself.as he got to the door.he breathe heavily and closed his eyes for a minute to calm himself down.
"Zoya..will u listening to me!"
"asad please..i dont wanna talk to u..bas!"
"baby..but i just thought u would like it..u would be happy to see..-"
"see what ..asad..do u think i would be happy to see that man who ruined my life"
"he is ur abu..zoya ..dont be so harsh on him.."
"asad u were wrong asad..u were wrong..u said that easiest way toleave a life is to entangle the knots between our love ones..right?...but itsnot like that..sometimes u have to let things go..if u try to entangle the knots..it would probably beak..taking all damage thread which survived to live between the knots!"Zoya took astep back resting her back on the wooden cupboard.
"... and u just broke me!

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

"i broke her..its all my mistake..what did i do..what?" asad banged his fist on his forehead as he let this words free from his mouth.tears roll down from his eyes meeting to the cold floor below him.he took a sharp breathe before he riased his hand to unlock the door.witha shivering and sweaty hands ..nervous,he tried to grip the knob to turn to right.when a strong hand wrappedhim froom behind throwing him away from door.
asad let out a moan of frustration and anger as his hands met the floor flat.
he looked up to the man who dare him to touch.
"ap!" he looked at the man in surprise with a blurred vision as his heart beated fast due to the imense ragefilling up in his nerves on seeing tne man.
"ap yaha kyu aye..!" asad spitted venom.
"tumhari himat kaise hui...zoya ke kareeb ane ki..zoya ne pehle he tumhari badolat kafigam sahe hai..ab use chain ki saans lene do..akhri saans."
the last word imediately alerted all cells in asad and quickly pained took over him.
he got up and surpassing the man on way he manage to reach to the door.
but he felt a resist on his wrist to move.he looked beside to see the man prevent him to unlock the door.
"hath choriye..mr rashid..mujhe zoya se milna hai" his voice managed to come in command.
"nai ..nai milna chahti zoya tumse...ye uski khwaish hai.."the man pulled asad hand away and got rewarded with a hard push over shoulder.
"use mujhse bat krni hogi..zoya se milne se ap mujhe nai rok sakte.."he gave a death glare and turned towardsthe door.
"main rok sakta hu asad...kyunki wo mere bete ki widhwa hai!"

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

painand angst sparked in asad's eyes as this words rung a million times over and over again.
"NO!!" Asad banged his hand on floor rapidly injuring his palm and fingers in process.
rashid bounced a step back in fear..his eyes leaned on floor wide as aclock and legs shivering beneath him.
asad stood up suporting his injured hands for balance.he looked at rashid as if wanting to twisthis neck with one cruel stroke.
he walked to rashid and stood at a mere distance.
"zoya...widhwa nai hai...mai uska shohar hu..ainda ap yad rakhiyega..kyunki agar maine yad dilaya to apko acha nai lagega!" shouting almost on rashid face.asad walked to the door opened it in one swift moment ..pushing rashid to shoulder on its way he enteredthe room closing right on rashid face..
A Sequence of line appeared on rashid face..indicating fear.as the door got shut ..he heard himself taking a sigh of releif..
"zoya meri biwi hai..wo wiDhwa nai hai.." rashid could replay asad's word again in silence.

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Asad turned around to see a zoya almost pale and lifeless as corpse.asad could see a innocent small smile twiching her lips. Her face as dyr as sand ..her eyes as wet as the sea shore..cheeks drained tracing the dry tear mark to her chin.her eyes was closed stillhe could make out she was thinking about him.about them.zoYa sensed presence of a warm feling and also to whom it belonged to..her smile imediately disapeared letting a pain spread on her cold face.she felt an urge to drink a tons of water.her throat ached of burning sensation.she was under observance.no matter how much she needed a glas of water she could not speak it up..her tongue refuse to roll for words.Her condition was
worsening by the hour and in
an effort to distract herself
from the frightening thoughts
of her imminent death, she
allowed her mind to drift into
events of the past.

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

date 29 aug 2012
"zoya..dont run so fast..bache u will fall"shouted zeenat from behind to the seventeen year old young lady.as she too Tried to meet its pace..
"zoya..listn baby.."zeenat tried once more but the girl in lehenga and beautiful ornaments gave a gigle and ran more faster than before..
"nai api...aj nai..aj mujhe jaldi jana hai..use intezar ki adat nai hai api..mujhe jaldi jana hoga..wrna ap to janti ho asad ko kaise kadu ki tarah muh fulah ke baith ja ta hai.."
zoya halted for a while taking a deep breathe she turned behind to see appi and jiju still trying to meet her pace.she gigled more looking at her api run..
"zoya ...we r close for god sake..easy girl..he can wait for a minuter right!" anwar managed to pul words out of his mouth inspite of panting hard.
"jiju..he can ..but i cant..mujhe abhi usse milna hai..ap aram se aaiye..."
"oye ruk meri mohatarma milka singh..or mat bhag.anwar kahiye na ise kuch.."
"main kya bolu kabhi sunti hai kya meri..tumhari ladli" anwar chided.
zoya looked behind still runing on foot.when a car surpas close to her.
"Zoya!!" both anwar and zeenat screamed in horror.
for a second no one understood what happened until the dust got clear and a click sound with ascreech sound rotate the air.
anwar and zeenat ran real hard to reach her.
zoya felt her heart would pop out of her chest.she was that scared.she felt a huge arm pulling her close and then a laughter tear her ear ..
her little heart did a summersault as she recognize the feel of the warmth.
"asad!" she whispered low softly..in fear..in pain..inlove..in anger and then.."ASAD!" She screamed into his ears.making him jolt and rub his ear.."ouch zoya..."
"ouch ke bache..kameene..aisa koi krta hai kya?"..she chided.
"kyu..gusa aya..?" asad teased her.."dar gai kya?"he raised eyebrow.
"ASAD!".
.."loves u"

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

"asad...!" zoya bamed on his torso.ouch! He yelped in pain
"okay kids..lets gohome..!"

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

will again start writing this story

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Zoya looked at asad with open mouth while asad kept smiling cockily.
"oho akhir tum aa he gaye"
anwar asked poking elbow lightlyto asad in teasing way.
"ji ana he tha mujhe" asad said still loking at zoya intensly while smiling at his own double meaning statement.
anwar notice the deep eye contact between the two and imediately shook asad shoulder to get his atention.asad and zoya both looked at anwar and than on floor,their cheeks were true color of red "salam jeeju" asad quickly said trying to distract himself from the embaras feeling.
"walekum asalam" anwar answered him smiling.
" *ahem* " all three turned their heads to the direction where voice came.
"asad beta kaise ho tum" zeenat asked with a smile.
" jee acha hu apa" asad said with a smile.
"salam apa" he imediately aded as he forgot to say it in first place.
"walekumasalam beta."zeenat said looking at the trio but stoped as her eyes landed on zoya who was still blushing hard .zeenat could feel zoya nervousness and so she sugested all to continue their talk at home.
"chalo asad ghar chalo..baki sari bate waha karenge"
asad smiled noding his head in yes .zeenat too replied him with a smile and then gestured him to come with her.
anwar quickly took her hand inb his and cooed something in her ear making her giglle.and she walked ahead of anwar .they both left the two inocent soul alone there behind.
asad was amused on seeing his effect on zoya.she was still blushing hard on previous thing.
asad stare was boring hole in her body.she felt heated under his intent glare.
he moved closure and ofer her hand to hold.zoya blushed more hard if it was even posible.amused with her asad quickly sliped his hand in her palm holding her gently yet firmly.
he leaned a bit.
"ghr chale ms zoya asad khan"
zoya ms face brightened up on listening her name.

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