FF: The Foreign Self.Part IX A &B - Page 5

Originally posted by: swathi

Armana,

I have been following all ur ffs till date. But this one comes across as something different. For the simple reason being that am just not able to guess where the story is next headed to.
well, that's good to know...that i've managed to keep the readers on their toes!😛

Each of the character seems to have lots of hidden facets and the layer seems to be peeling away with every episode. But rather than making things simpler you just seem to get caught into them more.
And the story is becoming longer than i planned

One thing which I would like to mention is the way you are switching between past and present....no confusions but still actively switching...I was somehow reminded of the novel Guide sometimes !
I'm very relieved to know that the shifts in timelines are manageable. I romise no more confusing shifts.
R.K.Narayan is too great a writer to be talked of in teh same breath as me, but thank you.

Do i need to say that am eagerly looking forward to the next dose....

Swathi

Originally posted by: armana

All you lovely people, there is another update- part ix-b is now on the first page.

Happy reading.

Love,
Armana

Hi there hooked on your ff, but I cannot get the link after Jai is in the college. 1999, please help.

thanks

Originally posted by: lenmed

Hi there hooked on your ff, but I cannot get the link after Jai is in the college. 1999, please help.

thanks

yea i can't find it either someone help me plz