FF: The Foreign Self.Part IX A &B - Page 2

Great part!!
Can't escape Pia can we!!!
Creates havoc wherever she goes!!!

Can't wait to read the next part which I believe will be jai's entry, right?

Update soon and love thw quotes/poetry....so apt for each chapter!!!

Nina

Excellent part Armana! Do continue soon! I knew Pia would cause some sort of trouble.. but then again its for the better in the end!

Your explanation of the line from Pride and Prejudice proves the difference between 'Reading' a Book and 'Knowing' a Book!😊 Splendid correlation!👏

Was waiting eagerly for this part, since the last part was left in a very precarious moment.....Wonderful read till now, enjoying every bit of it, all the more, cause you always dedicate a good part of your story in Delhi, a place you seem to know like the back of your hand! (Hamara Pyaar Shehar!😊)

Plus your selection of Poems and Quotations are marvellous to say the least!👏

Yup, reading this part totally explains off the little confusion that I was facing! And what a superb part it was, Armana👏 Ok, so Pia and Pushkar are as big losers here as they are in KS too!😡 They deserve one another anyway!

Hey, I loved the way Bani is so bookish and inappropriately or rather simply dressed...it goes so well with her character, the one that you have portrayed in the story!😊

Now, am superbly eager to read the next part...Where she will meet with Jai in the Church...Do, Do, Do write real fast, else you know how pestering I can get😉😆

Love,

MT

PS: I had actually read the first two parts earlier, a few days back and started reading from Part 3 till 8 later, hence the confusion! Now its Crystal Clear!😊

😡 😡 stupid pia.. she never changes does she??
but im glad she did that otheriwse how would bani meet jai??

cant w8 to see how they met . 😛

😭 somehow i felt the pain of bani within me and a solitary tear escaped my eye thats the power of words the writing and the writer that makes the emotions come alive

Armana thanks for bringing us into the past........you made me cry 😭 😭 😭

Wonedrfully penned........update soooon
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Here I was thinking of an update and here we are 😛

Thanks a lot for another beautiful part.

This Pushkar and Pia are such meanies 😡 , Good in one way then JW wouldnt have come into her life.

Sorry, but I am biased towards those two.

But I really want to drag Pia by her hair and throw her off a wall. Or maybe I will let her be for a good favour.


Thanks a lot armana for this excellent part. I hope you continue soon.

Wonderful Armana.. ! Can't wait for Jai to enter..

Hi Armana:

Great ff. Read your previous ffs too and must say all them are excellent. Just amazing the way you write each part depicting each character's feelings. Pia as usual comes between Bani and her guy. Curious to know how she first meets Jai.

Grrreat part Armana 👏 The mystery meeting is now clear...what still puzzles me is why Jai can't recognise her? 😕
Will wait and see in the next part..