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pooja1_76

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

Hi,

I haven't get a chance to comment on but will do definatly soon.

Please continue soon.

pooja

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preet

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

Armana
another wonderful part.very interesting.loved this Puskhar and Pia twist.Hope they rot happily after in hell together. 😡

the way you described bani's pain and her broken heart,just fabalous.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊

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lonely14

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

Armana,

How are you? Haven't talked to you in a while. where did you disappear.

You know everytime i want to read this ff you post another part and i end up being lazy. This time my goal is to catch up on your ff during spring break.😃 I can't believe i am missing out on your writing. But one day i WILL catch up.😆 and then trouble you, no doubt about that.😉

Well just wanted to drop by and grace my presence in your ff, you know the good luck charm😉

Shina

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armana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

All you lovely people, there is another update- part ix-b is now on the first page.

Happy reading.

Love,
Armana

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Urooj

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

Great Part Armana!!!
i really love it!!!
So bechara Jai...i can't believe that the whole family hid the truth from him....the GFN Walia clan 😡 😡
but so sweet and kind hearted Jai...at least he cared for Nachi enough to not blame him...
i assume that next part is Bani's and Jai's first meeting...
please continue soon
Rooj

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Sujata

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Posted: 18 years ago

#26

Hi Armana,

Great parts and I particularly like the way you are putting back all the missed pieces of the jigsaw puzzle... 👏 👏 👏

Garf

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simz99

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Posted: 18 years ago

#27

Wow, Armana....two parts in one day..you're on a roll!!! 😆
So its all coming together now....the meeting of two hurt and lost kindred spirits. Both betrayed so brutally by their families...I hope that you'll bring them together so they fill the empty spaces in each other's hearts.

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btkr

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Posted: 18 years ago

#28

Love the way u pen Jai's reactions to the whole ugly mess, at the same time, responsibility wins and he stays for Nachiket, cremates Barnali's body too...his craving for peace and the desire to go back to a place where he can be soothed to some extent...

Part of the reason for Jai being a tortured soul, I guess...

but if he shied away from calling Barnali a "wh***", why didn't he bite his tongue before calling Bani the same?? 😡 😡 😡

Love the update, as usual

👏 👏 👏

bt

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priyanka

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Posted: 18 years ago

#29

Finally breaking the silence I must say a good part though action missing 😆 😉 but worth it. Somehow I find the JW of your FF a little difficult to decipher cause he has so many layers to him that makes him a little complicated but yet so predictable character. Beneath that tough facade lies a man who is just as vulnerable as everyone else around him. Interestingly the JW of KS is the one who discovered true love(read not affection or infatuation), something , he never thought existed in him. But your JW knows what he is made of and thus prevents himself from being hurt by making assumptions. He prefers to lethis bains rule over his heart even in matter of love. Correct me if I am wrong in understanding this character.

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india06

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Posted: 18 years ago

#30

One has been presented with a shattering truth (he endured it pretty stoically) and one has got acquainted with an abominable face of relationships (poor kid, she)......both shell-shocked!!

Eager to read about their progression into the "bright foreigner" & "guardian angel". This convergence of the two, am willing to bet, would be formidably overwhelming!!

Thanks 😊

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