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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ameres

Interesting twist. The accident was really unexpected. And ouch! Abhay and his whole family...gone.

Poor Phulwa!

Roshni jee in a new role like this seems good and Bhavani her husband, again a new thing. Nicely done!

Phulwa is now helping them is cool. But I'm still hoping for a happy ending with PhAb. 😳

Great work, waiting for the next! :)




Thank you... Not just his her also... Takur 😡 😡. Ya poor Phulwa she was alone now... Ya babu is with her... Thanks I was not sure should I have to do it like that then thought it will be ok... but the next updates I am not sure am I giving much importance to characters and all... Its only God can help me now...
Ya I wanted to make Phulwa a strong lady for that I have done it so... Ya it will be only a happy ending...😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Athira! WOW, great job there.

First of all sorry about the like thing. I thought i pressed the like button😕 but did it now😉

Abhay's death such an unexpected twist! And painful too Felt so bad for Phulwa! Four years? She must have been so strong.

But I can see that this track will allow her to build up her strong character more and i loved the fact that she's fighting to increase the literacy level in the village. I know you will bring Abhay in due time so just waiting for that and for the moment Phulwa takes her revenge.

Once again, your imagination is awesome. Loved reading it!👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: beebutterfly

Athira! WOW, great job there.


First of all sorry about the like thing. I thought i pressed the like button😕 but did it now😉

Abhay's death such an unexpected twist! And painful too Felt so bad for Phulwa! Four years? She must have been so strong.

But I can see that this track will allow her to build up her strong character more and i loved the fact that she's fighting to increase the literacy level in the village. I know you will bring Abhay in due time so just waiting for that and for the moment Phulwa takes her revenge.

Once again, your imagination is awesome. Loved reading it!👏👏



Ami 🤗 You said it with confidence that I will bring him soon... wow 👏 👏 thank you for believing me...Hmm I was upset 😡 ha ha kidding...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
AAATTTHHHIIIRRRAAA...I am nt angry with u ...but I want my AJAY back...wait will he come back as shatru??????? BUT he better b the same guy...nt a look alike...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ya I know that this was the typical Mimi... dear I was sure that you will react like this ... But there was something else I thought u comment... Khair u comment in the same way i thought u will...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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"Abhay can you kiss me?" Phulwa asked abhay looking deep in his eyes. He also has an intense longing for that but'. Not now any ways'..

He leaned to her to place a small kiss on her forehead and said " Just this much now Phulwa"

" I just asked this much only Abhay what did you thought?" Phulwa asked in her innocent face.

" She just asked for this much? Oops what I have been thought of??" Abhay felt a shame on him.

Athira...did u think that I would comment on these lines...😊😊...honestly after reading the end...I couldnt think of commenting on anything ekse bt,,,my Abhay...PLS do bring him back jaldi se... @ bold...was Phulwa really asking Abhay innocently ...or was she teasing him...and athira...u r nt even allowing Abhay to kiss her cheecks...why always on the forehead...promise me athira ,,,next time...atleast cheecks...😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh mimi you the best... Exactly I felt you comment on it... You spot it correctly... I am laughing hardly how could u get it exactly that i mention this line...

Ya she was innocent but your Abhay was not... bhigada huya ladka humari bechari phulwa...She just asked for a comforting kiss and that stupid guy 😡 😆 I was kidding dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏WOW IT,S FANTASTIC👏 still hope kisi director ne yeh script deka hotha, kithna achcha lagegaga😍. good turn.i think u must be having a reason behind keeping Abhay so calm an cool in thakur's entry.any way now ABHAY is dead. hope we can see our damdar sadu Abhay in the new entry. oops... sorry for the early imagination. ones again Athira it,s beautiful writing dear.👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jasmin84

👏WOW IT,S FANTASTIC👏 still hope kisi director ne yeh script deka hotha, kithna achcha lagegaga😍. good turn.i think u must be having a reason behind keeping Abhay so calm an cool in thakur's entry.any way now ABHAY is dead. hope we can see our damdar sadu Abhay in the new entry. oops... sorry for the early imagination. ones again Athira it,s beautiful writing dear.👍🏼



Thank you so much yar... Yes should expect him like that dear... in fact we all need him like that only... The calm, cool, patient ABHAY is now dead...😉 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
GOOD WORK. 👏 shock with the new twist... im sure soon or later we will get our abhay back in the story in different style... keep on writing, ur words bring joy and happiness to our hearts..😃

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