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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi_s

Athira,,,,,wow so they will meet at the wedding...rite??? thats grt...waiting to read abt that moment when they will meet...😊😊😊



Ya that was my plan... I am also waiting to write that moment... I am not satisfied myself with that 😭 😭 😭 but for sure I finish it today and update on tomorrow...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ameres

Nice update Athira.

Good to see AP feeling each others presence and them again feeling happiness after long. Abhay and Arjun have become good friends, nice to read that. :)

Aw, they still didnt meet. Why are you making them wait so long Athira? 😆

But you are right, jahan itna long wait kiya wahan few days more sahi. Hope this time they meet, never to part again. And I know you'll be making this meeting special. Looking forward to it. 😉

Urgh. Thakur! Why is he still there? But I know you will handle well so no problem.

Good work. Waiting for next. :))



They will feel for them thay are the real soul mates... Takur should be there they have to take their revenge😡

Ya wanted to look it spl but failing miserably.

Thank dear for liking...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_akshi

i m running out of my patience yaar 😆..but i m convinced because i really hope that the next day they will surely meet..loved this update also..so big day for phulwa and abhay ha..?



Akshi... Ya I know dear but dhoda aur... not my problem... I am not getting a proper wordings, the exact feelings... how it feels when someone we lost long before came back to our life I am not sure abt that...
😭 😭 😭 No no not a big day for them but for me... 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fa-ameer

SEEM S STORY GOING ON NICELY. HOPE ABHAY AND PHULWA WILL MEET EACH OTHER IN THE NEXT PART. 👍🏼



Thank you so much for liking it... Ya they will meet soon...😊...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: beebutterfly

Athira- Only flowers for you😉


Loved it.! Short but sweet. :D

I think like any good writer, you are keeping us on edge then will surprise us with something amazing, so im ready to wait for next time😉

Arjun and Aarti also have part in Abhay's life now. Good to read that!😊

So thakur punished and Abhay and Phulwa meeting soon? So best part coming up!! looking forward to it! :)



Good writer... Pls Ami I know I am not... How much I wanted to pop up with your expectations but feels like I will fail this time...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mula6484




I wanted to add a pic also but ur luck 😉 that was not working 😃 But I have to do that with the post itself but forgot... sorry for that... thank you so much for, in fact to all, reading my boring stuff and commending a encouraging me alot.



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Posted: 13 years ago

11. Life Start to Shine Again

Phulwa was ready with her usual cotton kurtha, while Roshniji and Gouri entered her room with a pink coloured sari having matching jewellery. They asked her to change into that one since they are planning to attend a marriage. But she denied their offer politely, telling she is comfortable with this one now. They were sure for some reason that she won't wear this still some hope was there for them.


While watching them going out Phulwa thought of her past days, her craziness for dresses and jewellery. How hard for her to fix on a particular dress even for college. Now she doesn't have any interest on this, also the one whom she wanted to show was also not there. She pushed aside all the thoughts, today is not meant to be sad.

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Abhay was also rushed to the station early that morning in his casual dress. He shared about the happenings of the village to his subordinates and ask them to face with any of the circumstances, also he said them to change into their casuals so that they won't get noticed in the crowed. He placed his hands on his gun Takur Daroga singh get ready to face with your fate.


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All the villagers were gathered there for the marriage. Their village never allowed the remarriage of a widow but now they have a heart which can accept the coming of rays of happiness into the life of a poor girl.


Kullubhution was walking among the villagers to find about the condition prevailing there, suddenly his gaze fall on a man. He cannot forget that face ever in his life, Abhay. He ran towards his mamaji to inform the news to him.


Bhavani was scrutinising the crowed. Then he saw kullubhution running away from there. He suddenly moved to Phulwa to ask whether he had seen her. But she had no idea about that.


Kullubhution ran into the courtyard of Rudra's havely seeing his mamaji about to start for the marriage. He told him about what he saw there. But Takur was too much particular about the going for marriage. Then kullu told him that they were not sure about his plans and also he wont spare them for what they did to him, so the wisdom is now a step back and then with full weapons two steps forward. Takur felt that his bhanje is correct this time, so he commanted his men to go there and stop the marriage also ordered them to kill Abhay, Kullu accompanied them to show Abhay.

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Phulwa was inside the home with bride. Chaya seems to be very happy, when Phulwa first met her she was completely a lost soul who surrendered in front of her fate without fighting against it. She was married to an old man at her small ages and he was died two years after their marriage. From then she was living in the darkness of her home as well as in life. Now today some rays of happiness will enter into her life.


Then Bhavani entered there telling Phulwa he has just seen Kullu running out.


"I think he has seen you Phulwa"


"But how Bhaya, I was here and no way he could see me."


"Then may be babu?"


"Even though he met with him, I don't think he could figure out him as Babu since he was familiar with me and Abhay only in our family."


"Then what Phulwa, did he ran out since he saw Abhay?" contempt and irritation vivid in his voice.


"How much I want to be so" Phulwa said in a low sad tone.


Bhavani suddenly realises his fault and apologized Phulwa.


"Its ok bhaya, but then what you feels wont he be here?"

"I think the possibility is minimum now Phulwa, the way the guy ran out...? really suspicious."


"But I have to drag him here bhaya. I know the one person who can do that is me."

Phulwa said with determined eyes.


The moment they planned to step outside, they heard some noises outside.


"Nobody will conduct any marriage here without my permission". Thakur Rudra entered .


Abhay's eyes were searching for only one person, Takur Daroga Singh. But Daroga was nowhere to found. Abhay felt a sudden pain of depression. So he escaped this time also. But he cannot do that for any more.


Kullu shown Abhay to one of their man and went away from there.


The entire scene of calm and peaceful marriage ceremony was turned to a chaos. The Takur and his people were standing there with their guns above. Abhay was looked around to indicate his people to be in action they were started moving front with care so that they can catch them without any harm to the common man. Abhay was unaware that he was already under the eyes...


Phulwa and Bhavani came out of the house.


"Takur we also have guns in our hands. Dont think we could not answer in the same way as you people are". Bhavani announced.


Phulwa's eyes fall on a man standing in front of her, his back facing her. He was aiming his gun to somebody she looked at the other person. But cannot see him properly. But Phulwa felt a sudden rush of blood in her body to rescue that man... her heart was beating fast like she just saw someone too close to her in the edge of death. She ran towards that man and reached at him on time making him escape from the bullet.


She fallen on his hands her eyes were closed. He was unsure about what happened just now. He just know the lady in his hands rescue him from death. He looked down at her, he felt like the entire beauty and happiness of the world is now in his hands. She was still not opening her eyes. He is still in a trance unable to believe the one in his hands is his Phulwa... She looks like his Phulwa more over the heart beats also tells the same. He wanted to give her a hug... never letting her to go away from him anymore. Before he wanted to dip in those bron pool... "Phulwa"


She was not willing to open her eyes, since she was not sure enough whether she rescues the person or not. But now he is calling her, in her familiar voice... She wanted to open the eyes now... but she was sure that the moment she open eyes the beautiful dream in her eyes now will be vanished.. since it is not possible for him to stand in front of her like this.

"Phulwa?"

Now he feels a bit tensed... is she is fine or that bullet missed him to hit her? His hands ran unconsciously through her back and his eyes ran all over her. No she seems to be ok, then why she is not responding to me?


Phulwa feels his touch, the dream her eyes force her to see now was not going to shatter in few seconds that is going to be with her for ever... once God snatch it from her and now He is offering it for her once more, will accept it or not?...She recovered from the shock of losing it with huge difficulty, may be the fear of being away from it for one more time shielding her from accepting it. Phulwa slowly opend her eyes to face her world... His eyes were filled with tears, the two black deep pools in them longing to miscible with hers.


They were convincing her all, the sorrow and pain he was suffering for the last four years with out her... The loneliness in his life with out her... how hard the four years for him... they were telling her that may he never be able to spoke to her all those but they were never fail to convince her all his emotions, because they are the good friends of him and they know for sure the only medicine for his wounds is Phulwa. They show how much he loves her... In fact even he may not figure it out exactly but with the help of those black pools Phulwa can do that now with much easiness... They were looking at her with passion, concern and pleading...



Hers were just lost in his. They are also telling him the pain she was gone through for the last few years... He says to them that he can understand... her eyes were filled with joy and some sort of sorrow at the same time...But still the love for his evident in her eyes...



They feels the entire world melted besides them, they two just lost in the eyes of each other. They never said a single word... But communicated the sorrow, the depression, the loneliness both experienced for the past four years. Sometimes words cannot fulfil all the requirements of human, where only silence can help them to tell the feelings they felt for each other. Both wanted to hug each other but don't wanted to also since it can take their eyes off from them, even for a few seconds they are not willing for that. They are seeing after four years, more than that they are seeing someone whom they believed to be no more.


Phulwa slowly raised her hands to reach up to the cheeks of Abhay, She could sense it, she could feel the roughness of small hairs left behind on it, a pleasant roughness. Her other hand slowly moved to the back of his right hand which is circled her now, for a support to herself for place her head on his shoulders...She closed her eyes inhaling the fragrance of Abhay which she missed for the last four years.


She is now hugging him. He could feel her heart beats now. They were abnormally high...He was unable to distinguish it as due to his nearness or due to something else. The only thing he could sense now is Phulwa and the one thing he could understand is she is now in his hands. The only thing he wanted is to hold her tightly so that nothing can separate her from him any more...He slowly took Phulwa up from his shoulder to look deep in to the teary eyes...He felt a sudden sorrow he never wanted to see her in tears... Her eyes were only meant to smile.. He knows for the last four years she must have been cried for many times but in his absence in his presence she is not allowed to do so.

"Phulwa, what is this?"

"What Abhay? You asked me about why I am crying?"

"Oh no Phulwa", He said in a calm, cool, serious tone,


"I was asking about your dress do you get it for free from somewhere? You look like some 35-40 year old woman in this. What a bad choice... If I know you were like this..."

"I were like this what Abhay?, Phulwa sit erect leaving all her support from Abhay asked to him with a fuming face.


"You already marry somebody else? Oh come on Mr. ACP I know you wont, in fact you even don't know that I am alive, if you wanted you can done one even before. "


Phulwa stopped and then have a good look on Abhay and comment,


"Waise bhi, you are not looking like a 23-28 handsome guy in this outfit, Mr. Abhay Ray singh."


Then astonished in herself with her sudden change in talking pattern, this man can make me do anything. She for a few moments watched Abhay with her big brown eyes before both fall into a large laugh...After how many years they were smiling like that so much open and from the depth of their heart...

"Won't go anywhere without me Abhay..."

"I promise...

When you search the term “true love” in google images, this is the second picture that comes up. The rest of the results are weird quotes and the occasional anime couple. This confirms that we have totally lost sight of what real, lasting love is even about. 


They were the true lovers... so distance or even mouth was failed in b/w them... they were together are together and will be together for ever... even the nature or death will support the true love...

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Finally finished with... Also fed up... I wanted to update it morning itself but today was my brother's son's birthday so was busy in that... then also busy with the arrangements of my sis birthday.. making a VM for her... just me and her... Feel free to critizise me I know I was not so good with this part... 😭

Spl thanks to MistiofMistz for the pics I used in the post...



Edited by thiku - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏WAAW, AMAZING ATHIRA, WORD ARE NOT ENOUGH TO SAY HOW BEAUTIFULY❤️❤️ U HAVE WRITTEN THIS PART JUST SUPERB👍🏼 DEAR.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
👍🏼This is the best update for my choice. every single words u written made us 2 feel the emotions between Phulwa and Abhay. it 's shows u ar a great writer. well done, mind blowing stuff. if u ar near me i will hug u 4 sure.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏LOVELY...WONDERFUL ONCE AGAIN U DID IT. VERY WELL WRITTEN👍🏼.👏

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