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Julie

@JulieD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Great job Vinnie. The last two chapters were really nice.

Normally in your FFs I can picture in my head the scenes between Vikram and Sugni. But in this last chapter I just could not visualise it until I realised that Vikram and Sugni had exchanged roles.😆

Its usually Vikram that is expressing his love, apologising etc. Great job. This is what I wanted to see happen at the end of the show- an apologetic Sugni letting Vikram know how much she loves him.

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Ron

@ronshaan

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: payal7
You know that was one of the thing in PHS that I always found a little strange. Sugni never said or did anything that showed that she cared about him except for the one time when she defended him to Jiji. But I think that was Sugni - very practical not emotional.
Thats probably why she came up with that crazy idea that you can love one person but happily marry and live with someone else.😕

very true

and she never said i love u to vikram

not even once

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Ron

@ronshaan

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Vinnie79
This week i am going to make my thank you short and sweet. To Ron, Payal, Julie , Sara, Rose and Simi , Mansi Sandy. thank you all for your reviews and appreciation
This next chapter was a bit of a struggle because I was in a delima if to strech it out more or not..but the EMO was killing me !!! LOL I hope it did not feel rushed...
don't worry it is not the end and there is lots more to come... I hope you enjoy it and as usual waitng for your reviews!!!
Love you guys.
***MANSI SARA..lol this one's for you😉***

Vinnie the chapter was perfect !!! very well written, not rushed or forced or what ever u felt.. it was very well written, just the way it had to be..!!

vikram brought food for sugni **how sweet 👏

sugni to say sorry **wow.. the egoistic sugni is not here, thanks for that.. !! awesome !!

sugni to say I love u **when did I hear her saying it ?? well done again !!!

sugni to admit she did wrong **👏

their kiss **😉

his caring and then not believe her words **even i would have thought that she did it under some pressure or force or what ever !!!!

her making him believe by vowing on shanti **no mother will lie on her daughter's name !!!

in short !!!

excellent chapter !!! 👏

i was wondering how ull do that.. but u have done it !!!

great job !!! i loved it !

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payal7

@payal7

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Hey Vinnie

That was a very sweet chapter.

In my head I always imagined Sugni's confession would be a situation based ie. something would happen and she would tell him. She was never good at expressing her feelings in a romantic manner. So it would have been unnatural for her to do something romantic.

To be fair TVS did not express how he felt in so many words. The man was romantic as hell and he knew when he needed to demonstrate what she meant to him and to reassure her but for the most part it was expressed through their eyes/expressions. I mean the love confession at the bus stop was wrenched out of him. The way he said Pyar karne lage hai ... his expression was that of annoyance/shock rather than romantic. And he never felt even when G was causing problems that he constantly needed to grab her or dream about being inappropriate with her.

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croziaxx

@croziaxx

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

it is very nice ... i loved it .. but sugani aur ye sab, itna pyar ? .. really.. 😲

aur aage kya huaa ? jab vikram ne uska hath pakdha jaldi btao. 😉😛

love u...❤️

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Sandy

@Sandy66

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

😊 Beautifully written Chapter 11 VINNIE dear. Enjoyed reading it.
You certainly capture the friendly bond between Vickram and Shanti in a special way.
Since birth to present Vickram's the only male presence in Shanti"s life, and she open up to him without reservation,cause Vickram present himself as friend, not as a foe.
He makes her feel special and loved.
Vickram's truly a gentleman, he know about Sugni's vulnerable position and taking advantage of her is further from his mind. He reassured her that she don't own him nothing.
Thank you VINNIE.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Sorry about the late review. Time is limited for me at the present.

Edited by Sandy66 - 11 years ago

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: JulieD
Great job Vinnie. The last two chapters were really nice.
Normally in your FFs I can picture in my head the scenes between Vikram and Sugni. But in this last chapter I just could not visualise it until I realised that Vikram and Sugni had exchanged roles.😆
Its usually Vikram that is expressing his love, apologising etc. Great job. This is what I wanted to see happen at the end of the show- an apologetic Sugni letting Vikram know how much she loves him.

Thank you dear Julie,
Yes they did reverse roles. Sugni for once let him know actually how she was feeling,
I am glad you liked it... keep reaing next chapter soon

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: ronshaan

Vinnie the chapter was perfect !!! very well written, not rushed or forced or what ever u felt.. it was very well written, just the way it had to be..!!

vikram brought food for sugni **how sweet 👏
sugni to say sorry **wow.. the egoistic sugni is not here, thanks for that.. !! awesome !!
sugni to say I love u **when did I hear her saying it ?? well done again !!!
sugni to admit she did wrong **👏
their kiss **😉
his caring and then not believe her words **even i would have thought that she did it under some pressure or force or what ever !!!!
her making him believe by vowing on shanti **no mother will lie on her daughter's name !!!

in short !!!

excellent chapter !!! 👏
i was wondering how ull do that.. but u have done it !!!

great job !!! i loved it !

Aww thank you so much for your appreciation and support Ron,
Well I am striving for an equal relationship here ...where they both love each other equally, so Sugni would at least try to be fair to him is all i am saying.!

Up next new chapter enjoy!!!

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: payal7
Hey Vinnie
That was a very sweet chapter.

In my head I always imagined Sugni's confession would be a situation based ie. something would happen and she would tell him. She was never good at expressing her feelings in a romantic manner. So it would have been unnatural for her to do something romantic.

To be fair TVS did not express how he felt in so many words. The man was romantic as hell and he knew when he needed to demonstrate what she meant to him and to reassure her but for the most part it was expressed through their eyes/expressions. I mean the love confession at the bus stop was wrenched out of him. The way he said Pyar karne lage hai ... his expression was that of annoyance/shock rather than romantic. And he never felt even when G was causing problems that he constantly needed to grab her or dream about being inappropriate with her.

Thank you Payal... I am glad you liked it. I know it would have been weired for her to come up with a romantic senario.
Well given the Romantic moments they gave Vickram and Sugni were so smooth I know...ohh I wish we had more 😡. And even though he would never be inappropriate with her...it did not stop him from showing his affection in private... lol..but I agree he never felt he had to hold on to her possesively to do it.
Up next chapter 14 hope you enjoy!

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: croziaxx
it is very nice ... i loved it .. but sugani aur ye sab, itna pyar ? .. really.. 😲
aur aage kya huaa ? jab vikram ne uska hath pakdha jaldi btao. 😉😛
love u...❤️

Hello Maansi ...
don't be surprised my Sugni is diffrent from TV vala Sugni lol
Ok read the next chapter to find out hehehe