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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tarza

Hmmm. Akangsha was supposed to be Shikha in HNLHS but she looks older than Gautam(Hasan) so she wasn't in the show.
Hope you enjoy my FF.



I do. A lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 4


Next day
9:17am
Khans' Tower
Ovi is coming to Kirloskar House to take her stuff. Shonali is also with her. Shonali and Ovi became good friends in these days. They are in the elevator. Elevator stops at 15th floor, door opens. Shonali is getting out, Rohit is entering. Both collides and Shonali falls in Rohit's arms.
Rohit: Hey sambhalke!
Shonali: Sorry.
Shonali stands. Ovi and Shonali gets out of the elevator. Rohit gets in. Ovi and Shonali while walking...
Shonali: Ah!
Ovi: What?
Shonali: Pata nehi mere saath kya ho raha hai.
Ovi: Ye abhi jo hua woh?
Shonali: Kal se mere saath ye ho raha hai. Kal tumhare bhai ke saath aur ab inke saath. Don't know what's happening!
Ovi: Kuch din baad tumhe sab pata chal gayega.
Shonali: Hope so!
Ovi: Waise larka handsome tha.
Shonali: Tumhe handsome laga? Shaadi karlo...(!realises what she said)
Ovi feels a little bad.
Shonali: Sorry Ovi. Galti se nikal gaya. I didn't mean to hurt you.
Ovi: Its...its perfectly fine. Tumne jo kaha sach kaha. Galti se hi sahi tumne sach kaha...
Shonali: Are you okay?
Ovi: Hmmm.(gives a self-satisfied smile)
Shonali: Ab chalo nehito office jane mei late hojaogi.
Ovi: Haan. Chalo.
Both continues to walk.

12:47pm
Office of Kirloskar Industries
DK's cabin
DK is very tensed. Manv enters.
Manav: Sir aapne mujhe bulaya?
DK: Haan. Vo...Manav subha...
Manav: Kya baat hai sir? Receptionist bhi keh rahi thi aapko subhe se kuch calls arahe hai, jisske wajah se aap pareshaan hai.
DK: Vo...koi aadmi hai jo keh raha hai ki agar humne use paise nehi dia to vo Pari ki asliyat newspapers mei chap dega.
Manav: Kya?! Aisa kaun kar sakta hai? Koi aisa kyun karega?
DK: Pata nehi. Mujhe bhi kuch samajh mei nehi araha.
Manav: Aap chinta mat kijiye. Mai police ko inform karta hu.
DK: Manav maine police ko inform kar dia hai. Bas ate hi honge.
Receptionist phones DK. DK picks up the call.
Receptionist: Sir Officers aye hai.
DK: Thik hai.
DK hangs up.
Manav: Sir, kya Ovi ko pata hai ki police kyun ayi hai?
DK: Nehi. Maine use koi aur reason bataya hai.
Manav: Thanks sir.
DK: Iss mei thanks ki kya baat hai? I understand.

Outside DK's cabin
One senior-inspector with two constables is standing in front of receptionist's desk. Ovi comes.
Ovi: Excuse me officers.
The senior-inspector turns to Ovi. He is Rohit.
Ovi: Aap?
Rohit: Tum to aaj subhe mili thi na?
Ovi: Haan. Hi! I am Ovi. Ovi Arjun Kirloskar. Nice to meet you again.
Rohit: Hi. I am Rohit. Senior-Inspector Rohit Khurrana. Nice to meet you again too.
Both shakes hand.
Ovi: Come. I'll take you to dad's cabin.
Rohit: Dad?
Ovi: Oh, i mean DivyaSagar Kirloskar, DK. I'll take you to him.
Rohit: Is he your father?
Ovi: No. He's my father-in-law.
Rohit: Oh!
Ovi: Let's go.
Rohit: Ya.
Both goes to DK's cabin.

12:50pm
Deshmukh House
Only Savita, Sachin, Shonali, Purvi and Arjun are in the house. Arjun came to meet Pari. Now, Savita is sitting in the dining table, reading a newspaper. Shonali and Purvi are working in the kitchen. Shonali is cuttinv tomatoes and Purvi is kneading dough. Onir comes back after buying vegetables. Onir goes to the kitchen and keeps the bag of vegetables on the kitchen cabinet.
Purvi: Sab kuch le aye?
Onir: Haan.
Onir holds Purvi's hands and stops her from kneading dough.
Purvi: Onir aap kya kar rahe hai?
Onir: Mai karta hu.(hearing this Shonali starts laughing)
Onir to Shonali: Tu hans kyun rahi hai?
Shonali: Aap atta gundenge ye sunke meri hansi ruk nehi rahi thi.
Onir: Chup kar nehito marr khayegi.
Purvi: Onir aapko jo kaam nehi ata vo aap kyun karna chahte hai?
Onir: Nehi ata? Tumse kisne kaha ki mujhe nehi ata. Mujhe sab ata hai.
Shonali laughs.
Shonali: Bhabhi, aap sabse keh dijiye ki aaj khana nehi banne wala.
Onir: Shonali!
Shonali: Sorry bhai.(laughs again)
Onir to Purvi: Let me do it.
Purvi: hik hai. Dekhte hai aap kya karte hai.
Purvi moves aside. Onir pours lots of water onto the unfinished dough. The dough becomes soup of flour. Shonali and Purvi gets shocked and controls their laugh. Both stays quiet and says nothing. Onir tries to knead but can't because of too much water. Now Shonali and Purvi bursts into laughter.
Purvi: (continuing laughing)Hogaya aapka?
Onir: I'm trying. Par samajh nehi araha ki ye ho kyun nehi raha?z
Shonali: (continuing laughing)Kuch aur bane na bane ate ka soup zarur banega.
Shonali and Purvi laughs more.
Onir: Tum dono bohor hans rahi ho!
Purvi: (controlling her laugh)Aap hatiye. Mai karti hu. Aapse nehi hoga.
Onir moves aside. Purvi fixes the watery dough mixture and starts kneading. Onir is sweating, he wipes sweat with his hands without noticing the stiky flour in his hands. Thw flour of his hands are now in his face. Purvi and Shonali bursts into laughter seeing this.
Onir: Aaj tum dono bohot hans rahi ho. Ek din mai bhi tum dono pe aise hi hansunga.
Purvi: Aap aisa kaam karte kyun ho jisse hume hansi aye?!
Onir tries to wipe the flour of his hands on Purvi's face but can't as Purvi starts running.
Purvi: (running)Onir kya kar rahe hai aap?
Onir: (running behind Purvi)Bohot hansi araha tha tumhe ab mai tum pe hansunga.
Purvi and Onir runs in the whole house, they are having a great time. Savita, Shonali and Sachin are happy that Purvi and Onir are happy. Arjun is gettinv irritated seeing Onir having fun with Purvi. Shonali cuts her finger as her eyes were on Purvi and Onir.
Shonali: Ahh!
Sachin goes to her.
Sachin: What happened?
Shonali: Maine dyaan nehi dia iss liye haath kat gaya.
Sachin: Chalo mere saath.
Sachin takes Shonali to the living area and bandages her finger.
Sachin: Hogaya.
Shonali: Thanks.
Sachin: You're most welcome!
Onir is still running behind Purvi. Finally he catches her and wipes the flour on her face. Others except Arjun laughs.
Savita: Tum dono aaj ate se holo khel rahe ho...
Purvi: Aaji dekhiye Onir ne kya kia. Mera pura chehra bigaar dia.
Onir: Achcha? Tab to bohot "hehe haha" kar rahi thi. Ab mai hansu?
Purvi: Onir!
Onir: What! I know my name is Onir.
Purvi and Onir bursts into laughter. Sachin, Savita and Shonali also laughs. Arjun is burning on fire of anger.

1:50pm
Kirloskar Industries
Ovi and Rohit comes out of DK's cabin.
Rohit: Agar phirse calls aya to mujhe batana.
Ovi: Thik hai.
Rohit gets a call from Soham.
Rohit: Hey...Soham.
Ovi: Did you say Soham?
Rohit: (to Ovi)Yup!
Soham hears Ovi's voice.
Soham: Rohit kya tu Ovi ke saath hai?
Rohit: (to Soham)Haan. Tu use janta hai?
Soham: Vo meri behen hai.
Rohit: (to Soham)Oh.
Soham: Tune lunch kia?
Rohit: (to Soham)No.
Soham: Ovi se puchto ussne lunch kia ki nehi.
Rohit: (to Ovi)Tumne lunch kia?
Ovi: Kabse aapke saath hi to hu. Lunch nehi kia.
Rohit: (to Soham)Nehi ussne bhi nehi kia.
Soham: Great! Ek kaam kar tu Ovi ko leke Cafe Inn aja.
Rohit: (to Soham)Waha kyun?
Soham: Ek saath lunch karenge.
Rohit: (to Soham)Thik hai. Chal milte hai. Bye.
Rohit cuts the call.
Ovi: Aap Soham dada ke dost hai?
Rohit: Hmmm. Chalo, Soham ne tumhe saath leke Cafe Inn pohochne ke liye bola hai.
Ovi gets a big smile hearing Cafe Inn's name.
Ovi: Cafe Inn?! That's my fav restaurant! I love that place!
Rohit: That's my fav too!
Ovi: Really?
Rohit: Hmmm. Ab chale nehito Soham dantega.
Ovi: Let's go!
Rohit and Ovi leaves for Cafe Inn.

2:15pm
Cafe Inn
Rohit and Ovi reaches the place and sits on a table. Rohit gets a message from Soham.
Message from Soham: Sorry Ro! Can't come! Last minute pe Boss ne kaam de dia... Phir kabhi ek saath lunch karenge... I can't come but tum dono zarur lunch karna! Sorry again.
Rohit: Ah...Soham is not coming.
Ovi: But why?
Rohit: Kuch kaam ke wajah se nehi asakta.
Ovi: Oh... To hum bhi chalte hai.
Ovi is getting up but Rohit holds her hand and stops her. Ovi feels a bit uncomfortable, Rohit realizes and leaves her hand.
Rohit: Vo...ye tumhara fav jagah hai aur mera bhi ye fav jagah hai to luncg karne hi jate hai na...
Ovi: O...Okay.
Ovi sits again. A waiter comes.
Waiter: Can i have the order please?
Rohit: Hmmm. Ovi you order first.
Ovi: Okay. Ummm...one Bruschetta Alla Rucola, Crostini and Spring Salad. Now you order Rohit.
Rohit: For me...Bruschetta and Casear Salad.
Waiter: Any Beverages?
Ovi: Cold Tea Coffee with Chocolate.
Rohit: Ice Cappuccino.
Waiter: Thank you.
Waiter leaves.
Ovi: Tell something about you.
Rohit: Like what?
Ovi: Okay i'll you about you.
Rohit: Hmmm.
Ovi: Aap kaha ke ho?
Rohit: Pune.
Ovi: Family mei kaun kaun hai?
Rohit: Noone. Mom-Dad do saal pehle ek accident mei...
Ovi: I am so sorry.
Rohit: It's okay.
Ovi: Married?
Rohit: Not yet.
Ovi: Girlfriend?
Rohit: No.
Ovi: What! You don't have any girlfriend! Unbelievable...
Rohit: Wh...why?
Ovi: Aap ko dekhke lagta nehi aapki koi girlfriend nehi hai.
Rohit: Kya kare nehi hai koi bhi...Mujhe to kaam se phursat hi nehi milta.
Ovi: Hmmm. Friends?
Rohit: Sure.
Both shakes hands.
Ovi: Aap Soham dada ke bohot achche dost hai na?
Rohit: Wait. We are friends right? Then why 'aap'?
Ovi: Okay okay. Aaj se no 'aap'! Aap...
Rohit: Again 'aap'?!
Ovi: Oh! Sorry!
Both laughs...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
wow its so lovely update indeed <3

very nicely written 👍🏼

keep it up... thanks for the PM 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-

wow its so lovely update indeed <3

very nicely written 👍🏼

keep it up... thanks for the PM 🤗

Thank you😊
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Welcome🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Wow onir purvi scene was soo damn cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: afreenaamna

Wow onir purvi scene was soo damn cute

Oh thanks!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
loved it. good to see a happy punir. well done and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
thnx zara...
Wow onir purvi scene was soo damn cute ha
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Superb duper happy with this update.. Atlast mil hi gaya punir ka pyaara sa romance,Thank u.. Everything was perfect specialy the kitchen scene. Thanks for the pm , update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pinkjali

Superb duper happy with this update.. Atlast mil hi gaya punir ka pyaara sa romance,Thank u.. Everything was perfect specialy the kitchen scene. Thanks for the pm , update soon..


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