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Sabko sirf PuNir hi dikh raha hai! Aur kuch nehi dikhta?

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Chapter 5


Same day
4:50pm
Dehradun
Royal Palace of Raghuvanshis'
Study of the King
King Rudra and Yuvraj Udhishtir is sitting in study, discussing about their business. A staff of the Royal Palace comes running to them.
Rudra: Kya hua? Aise bhag kyun rahe ho?
Staff: Mujhe maaf kijiye maharaj. Baat hi kuch aisi hai.
Udhishtir: Kya baat hai?
Staff: 22 saal pehle jo aurat aapke bare bete aur beti ko leke bhagi thi vo pakri gayi hai.
Rudra and Udhishtir became very very happy.
Rudra: Kya?!! Tum sach keh rahe ho?
Staff: Haan maharaj. Mai bilkul sach keh raha hu.
Udhishtir: Matlab mera bhai aur meri behen ab wapas ayenge!(very happy)
Rudra: Tumne mujhe bohot bari khush khabri sunai hai. Aaj mai sabko bonus dunga.
Staff: Sukriya maharaj.
Rudra: Tum jao aur uss aurat ko bhagne matt dena!
Staff leaves.
Rudra: (calling)Sneha!! Anupriya!! Jaldi ao!!
Sneha and Anupriya comes running.
Sneha: Aapko kya hua?
Rudra: Bohot bari khush khabri hai!
Anupriya: Kaisi khush khabri, babasa?
Udhishtir: Ananya aur Jeet bhaisa ko jisne kidnap kia tha usska pata chal gaya hai!
Hearing this tears rolls from Sneha's eyes.
Anupriya: (happy)Sach!
Sneha: Ab mera Jeet aur Ananya ghar wapas ajayenge!
Rudra; Haan.

5:30pm
Jail of the Royal Palace
The lady of kidnapped Ananya and Jeet is in a cell. Rudra and Udhishtir comes with a 10 staff and stands in front of the cell. Rudra is very angry, his eyes are red in anger.
Rudra: Kaha hai Ananya aur Jeet?
Lady: Mujhe nehi pata.
Rudra: Tune churaya tha mere bete-beti ko! Tu to humare mehel mei kaam karti thi na, kyun kia tune?!!
Lady's name is Kajri.
Kajri: Maine unhe churaya zarur par mujhe nehi pata vo dono kaha hai.
Rudra: Tune unke saath kya kia?
Kajri: Mai unko leke Kolkata chali gayi thi phir ek din mai unko ek chay ke dukan ke pas chor ke gayi to wapas ake dekha to vo waha nehi the. As-pas dhoond ne ke baad maine dekha ki ek aurat aur ek aadmi unke saath khel rahe the. To maine socha mai Ananya aur Jeet ko leke kya karungi, usse achcha hai unhe uss aurat aur aadmi ke saath chor deti hu. Aur mai wahase chali gayi. Do saal baad pata chala ki uss aurat aur aadmi ka accident ho gaya hai aur vo dono mare gaye hai. Phir Ananya aur Jeet ka kya hua mujhe nehi pata!
Rudra: Tune mere bete aur beti ko churaya tha iss wajah se tujhe chora nehi jayega! Yehi pe tu saregi!
Rudra to a staff: Kajri se pata leke Kolkata mei jake puchtach karo. Waha se kuch zarur pata chalega.
Staff: Jaisa aap kahe maharaj.
Rudra and Udhishtir leaves and 5 staff follows them.

7:00pm
Amritghar
Royal Palace of Singhanias'
King Indravardhan is looking at some pictures of his family. He sees a picture of a small boy, seeing this picture tears roll from his eyes. Queen Anusha sees this and keeps her hand on his shoulder. A staff comes running to them.
Anusha: Bhag kyun rahe ho?! Bina bataye andar kyun aye ho??!
Staff: Maaf kijiyega maharani. Aapko ek khabar deni.
Indra: Kaisi khabar?
Staff: Aapke bhai aur bhabhi do saal pehle mar chuke hai.
This news comes to Indravardhan and Anusha as a shock.
Indra: Kya keh rahe ho!
Staff: Haan maharaj. Ye baat sach hai.
Indra: Agar vo dono marchuke hai to...to Prithvi kaha hai?
Staff: Usske bare mei kuch pata nehi chal paya hai.
Anusha: Jo pata chala hai vo batao.
Staff: Aapke bhai aur bhabhi Pune mei rehte the Yuvraj Prithvi ke saath. Sirf itna hi pata chal paya hai.
Indra: Jaldi Pune jao aur pata karo! Mujhe Prithvi sahi salamat wapas chahiye!
Staff: Ji maharaj.
Staff leaves.
Anusha: Abtak to Prithvi bohot bara hogaya hoga na?
Indra: Aap chinta mat kije Prithvi humere pas wapaa ayega.

9:40pm
Mumbai
Deshmukh House
Purvi-Onir's room
Purvi is standing beside the window, folding her hands and looking at the twinkling stars. Onir comes in the room and turns on the TV. He sees Purvi and walks to her.
Onir: Mishti.
Purvi didn't give any reply. Onir stands beside Purvi. One drop of tear is about fall on the floor from Purvi's eye but Onir takes it on his hand.
Onir: Mishti you're crying!
Now Purvi comes out of her thinking and looks at Onir.
Onir: Tum roo rahi ho?
Purvi: (wiping her tears)Vo...aai ki yaad arahi thi.
Onir: Bohot miss karti ho unhe?
Purvi: Haan. Onir aapko aapki aai ki yaad nehi ati?
Onir: Yaad ata to hai par kuch yaad nehi hai.
Purvi: Unka chehra to yaad hoga?
Onir: Na!
Purvi: Ye kaise possible hai?
Onir: Actually, ma-baba ke death ke waqt mai aur Shonali bohot chote the. Mai shayad sare panch-chey saal ka tha aur Shonali sare tin-char saal ki thi. Iss liye kuch yaad nehi.
Purvi: Aap unhe yaad nehi karte?
Onir: Karta to hu. Jab bhi kuch yaad karne ki koshish karta hu to ek bara sa mehel jaisa ghar yaad ata hai.
Purvi: Mehel? Par Kolkata mei to koi mehel nehi hai.
Onir: Wahi to samajh mei nehi ata ki mujhe kyun mehel dikhta hai.
News is being shown in the TV. Onir and Purvi looks at the TV to watch the news.
Reporter on TV: Aaj pata chala hai Dehradun aur Amritghar ke Maharaja aur Maharani ko unke bachcho ko chori karne walo ke bare mei! Dehradun ke Maharaja aur Maharani ko aaj pata chala hai ki kisne bais saal pehle unke bare bete Yuvraaj Jeet aur Yuvrani Ananya ko choraya tha. Aur aaj Amritghar ke Maharaja ko pata chala hai unke bhai aur bhabhi ke bare mei jisne unke ek lauute varish Yuvraaj Prithvi Singhania ko leke bhage the. Par afsos jinlogoke pas Dehradun aur Amritghar ke Yuvraaj aur Yuvraani the vo logo mar chuke hai. Akhir kaun hai Dehradun aur Amritghar k Yuvraaj aur Yuvrani? Kaise chalega unke bare mei?...
Before the news could finish Onir turns the TV off.
Purvi: Onir aapne TV kyun band kia?
Onir: Maharaja aur Maharani ke news hum kyun dekhe? Hume unse kya?
Purvi; Haan par mujhe dekhna tha. Asli ke Maharaja aur Maharani ke bare mei mai dekhna chahti thi.
Onir: Ye sab dekhk koi fayda nehi hai. Soo jao.
Purvi: Par Onir...
Onir: Mishti soo jao.
Purvi: Aap bohot bure ho!
Onir: Thik hai ab soo jao.
Purvi sleeps on the bed and Onir sleeps on a mat on the floor.

Edited by Tarza - 12 years ago
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So onir will b Yuvraaj n Shonali yuvraani?..interesting contd soon..
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nice wonderful job 👍🏼 👏
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Wow new twist..lovely..keep it up..
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Is update ke baad toh mujhe punir ke alawa aur bohat kuch dikh raha hai aur jo bhi dikh raha hah wo bara hi interesting hai... New characters add hone ke baad toh tumhara ff aur bhi bariya ho gaya hai... Kahi jeet aur ananya, onir aur shonali toh nahi..? Agar ha toh fir bohat hi maja ayega.. Thanks for the pm, update soon..
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Originally posted by: Tarza

Chapter 5


Same day
4:50pm
Dehradun
Royal Palace of Raghuvanshis'
Study of the King
King Rudra and Yuvraj Udhishtir is sitting in study, discussing about their business. A staff of the Royal Palace comes running to them.
Rudra: Kya hua? Aise bhag kyun rahe ho?
Staff: Mujhe maaf kijiye maharaj. Baat hi kuch aisi hai.
Udhishtir: Kya baat hai?
Staff: 25 saal pehle jo aurat aapke bare bete aur beti ko leke bhagi thi vo pakri gayi hai.
Rudra and Udhishtir became very very happy.
Rudra: Kya?!! Tum sach keh rahe ho?
Staff: Haan maharaj. Mai bilkul sach keh raha hu.
Udhishtir: Matlab mera bhai aur meri behen ab wapas ayenge!(very happy)
Rudra: Tumne mujhe bohot bari khush khabri sunai hai. Aaj mai sabko bonus dunga.
Staff: Sukriya maharaj.
Rudra: Tum jao aur uss aurat ko bhagne matt dena!
Staff leaves.
Rudra: (calling)Sneha!! Anupriya!! Jaldi ao!!
Sneha and Anupriya comes running.
Sneha: Aapko kya hua?
Rudra: Bohot bari khush khabri hai!
Anupriya: Kaisi khush khabri, babasa?
Udhishtir: Ananya aur Jeet bhaisa ko jisne kidnap kia tha usska pata chal gaya hai!
Hearing this tears rolls from Sneha's eyes.
Anupriya: (happy)Sach!
Sneha: Ab mera Jeet aur Ananya ghar wapas ajayenge!
Rudra; Haan.

5:30pm
Jail of the Royal Palace
The lady of kidnapped Ananya and Jeet is in a cell. Rudra and Udhishtir comes with a 10 staff and stands in front of the cell. Rudra is very angry, his eyes are red in anger.
Rudra: Kaha hai Ananya aur Jeet?
Lady: Mujhe nehi pata.
Rudra: Tune churaya tha mere bete-beti ko! Tu to humare mehel mei kaam karti thi na, kyun kia tune?!!
Lady's name is Kajri.
Kajri: Maine unhe churaya zarur par mujhe nehi pata vo dono kaha hai.
Rudra: Tune unke saath kya kia?
Kajri: Mai unko leke Kolkata chali gayi thi phir ek din mai unko ek chay ke dukan ke pas chor ke gayi to wapas ake dekha to vo waha nehi the. As-pas dhoond ne ke baad maine dekha ki ek aurat aur ek aadmi unke saath khel rahe the. To maine socha mai Ananya aur Jeet ko leke kya karungi, usse achcha hai unhe uss aurat aur aadmi ke saath chor deti hu. Aur mai wahase chali gayi. Do saal baad pata chala ki uss aurat aur aadmi ka accident ho gaya hai aur vo dono mare gaye hai. Phir Ananya aur Jeet ka kya hua mujhe nehi pata!
Rudra: Tune mere bete aur beti ko churaya tha iss wajah se tujhe chora nehi jayega! Yehi pe tu saregi!
Rudra to a staff: Kajri se pata leke Kolkata mei jake puchtach karo. Waha se kuch zarur pata chalega.
Staff: Jaisa aap kahe maharaj.
Rudra and Udhishtir leaves and 5 staff follows them.





Awesome new characters.
Already love Udhishtir...ahem you know who.
Also thanks for adding Narendra Jha. Missed him after HNLHS.
I personally hope Onir turns out to be Jeet. "Prince charming" Onir a real prince. What fun. That would be a "royal" treat.
Am I dreaming. If yes, God/Mom please don't wake me up.

Edited by determination - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tarza

Chapter 4


Next day
9:17am
Khans' Tower
Ovi is coming to Kirloskar House to take her stuff. Shonali is also with her. Shonali and Ovi became good friends in these days. They are in the elevator. Elevator stops at 15th floor, door opens. Shonali is getting out, Rohit is entering. Both collides and Shonali falls in Rohit's arms.
Rohit: Hey sambhalke!
Shonali: Sorry.
Shonali stands. Ovi and Shonali gets out of the elevator. Rohit gets in. Ovi and Shonali while walking...
Shonali: Ah!
Ovi: What?
Shonali: Pata nehi mere saath kya ho raha hai.
Ovi: Ye abhi jo hua woh?
Shonali: Kal se mere saath ye ho raha hai. Kal tumhare bhai ke saath aur ab inke saath. Don't know what's happening!
Ovi: Kuch din baad tumhe sab pata chal gayega.
Shonali: Hope so!
Ovi: Waise larka handsome tha.
Shonali: Tumhe handsome laga? Shaadi karlo...(!realises what she said)
Ovi feels a little bad.
Shonali: Sorry Ovi. Galti se nikal gaya. I didn't mean to hurt you.
Ovi: Its...its perfectly fine. Tumne jo kaha sach kaha. Galti se hi sahi tumne sach kaha...
Shonali: Are you okay?
Ovi: Hmmm.(gives a self-satisfied smile)
Shonali: Ab chalo nehito office jane mei late hojaogi.
Ovi: Haan. Chalo.
Both continues to walk.

12:47pm
Office of Kirloskar Industries
DK's cabin
DK is very tensed. Manv enters.
Manav: Sir aapne mujhe bulaya?
DK: Haan. Vo...Manav subha...
Manav: Kya baat hai sir? Receptionist bhi keh rahi thi aapko subhe se kuch calls arahe hai, jisske wajah se aap pareshaan hai.
DK: Vo...koi aadmi hai jo keh raha hai ki agar humne use paise nehi dia to vo Pari ki asliyat newspapers mei chap dega.
Manav: Kya?! Aisa kaun kar sakta hai? Koi aisa kyun karega?
DK: Pata nehi. Mujhe bhi kuch samajh mei nehi araha.
Manav: Aap chinta mat kijiye. Mai police ko inform karta hu.
DK: Manav maine police ko inform kar dia hai. Bas ate hi honge.
Receptionist phones DK. DK picks up the call.
Receptionist: Sir Officers aye hai.
DK: Thik hai.
DK hangs up.
Manav: Sir, kya Ovi ko pata hai ki police kyun ayi hai?
DK: Nehi. Maine use koi aur reason bataya hai.
Manav: Thanks sir.
DK: Iss mei thanks ki kya baat hai? I understand.

Outside DK's cabin
One senior-inspector with two constables is standing in front of receptionist's desk. Ovi comes.
Ovi: Excuse me officers.
The senior-inspector turns to Ovi. He is Rohit.
Ovi: Aap?
Rohit: Tum to aaj subhe mili thi na?
Ovi: Haan. Hi! I am Ovi. Ovi Arjun Kirloskar. Nice to meet you again.
Rohit: Hi. I am Rohit. Senior-Inspector Rohit Khurrana. Nice to meet you again too.
Both shakes hand.
Ovi: Come. I'll take you to dad's cabin.
Rohit: Dad?
Ovi: Oh, i mean DivyaSagar Kirloskar, DK. I'll take you to him.
Rohit: Is he your father?
Ovi: No. He's my father-in-law.
Rohit: Oh!
Ovi: Let's go.
Rohit: Ya.
Both goes to DK's cabin.

12:50pm
Deshmukh House
Only Savita, Sachin, Shonali, Purvi and Arjun are in the house. Arjun came to meet Pari. Now, Savita is sitting in the dining table, reading a newspaper. Shonali and Purvi are working in the kitchen. Shonali is cuttinv tomatoes and Purvi is kneading dough. Onir comes back after buying vegetables. Onir goes to the kitchen and keeps the bag of vegetables on the kitchen cabinet.
Purvi: Sab kuch le aye?
Onir: Haan.
Onir holds Purvi's hands and stops her from kneading dough.
Purvi: Onir aap kya kar rahe hai?
Onir: Mai karta hu.(hearing this Shonali starts laughing)
Onir to Shonali: Tu hans kyun rahi hai?
Shonali: Aap atta gundenge ye sunke meri hansi ruk nehi rahi thi.
Onir: Chup kar nehito marr khayegi.
Purvi: Onir aapko jo kaam nehi ata vo aap kyun karna chahte hai?
Onir: Nehi ata? Tumse kisne kaha ki mujhe nehi ata. Mujhe sab ata hai.
Shonali laughs.
Shonali: Bhabhi, aap sabse keh dijiye ki aaj khana nehi banne wala.
Onir: Shonali!
Shonali: Sorry bhai.(laughs again)
Onir to Purvi: Let me do it.
Purvi: hik hai. Dekhte hai aap kya karte hai.
Purvi moves aside. Onir pours lots of water onto the unfinished dough. The dough becomes soup of flour. Shonali and Purvi gets shocked and controls their laugh. Both stays quiet and says nothing. Onir tries to knead but can't because of too much water. Now Shonali and Purvi bursts into laughter.
Purvi: (continuing laughing)Hogaya aapka?
Onir: I'm trying. Par samajh nehi araha ki ye ho kyun nehi raha?z
Shonali: (continuing laughing)Kuch aur bane na bane ate ka soup zarur banega.
Shonali and Purvi laughs more.
Onir: Tum dono bohor hans rahi ho!
Purvi: (controlling her laugh)Aap hatiye. Mai karti hu. Aapse nehi hoga.
Onir moves aside. Purvi fixes the watery dough mixture and starts kneading. Onir is sweating, he wipes sweat with his hands without noticing the stiky flour in his hands. Thw flour of his hands are now in his face. Purvi and Shonali bursts into laughter seeing this.
Onir: Aaj tum dono bohot hans rahi ho. Ek din mai bhi tum dono pe aise hi hansunga.
Purvi: Aap aisa kaam karte kyun ho jisse hume hansi aye?!
Onir tries to wipe the flour of his hands on Purvi's face but can't as Purvi starts running.
Purvi: (running)Onir kya kar rahe hai aap?
Onir: (running behind Purvi)Bohot hansi araha tha tumhe ab mai tum pe hansunga.
Purvi and Onir runs in the whole house, they are having a great time. Savita, Shonali and Sachin are happy that Purvi and Onir are happy. Arjun is gettinv irritated seeing Onir having fun with Purvi. Shonali cuts her finger as her eyes were on Purvi and Onir.
Shonali: Ahh!
Sachin goes to her.
Sachin: What happened?
Shonali: Maine dyaan nehi dia iss liye haath kat gaya.
Sachin: Chalo mere saath.
Sachin takes Shonali to the living area and bandages her finger.
Sachin: Hogaya.
Shonali: Thanks.
Sachin: You're most welcome!
Onir is still running behind Purvi. Finally he catches her and wipes the flour on her face. Others except Arjun laughs.
Savita: Tum dono aaj ate se holo khel rahe ho...
Purvi: Aaji dekhiye Onir ne kya kia. Mera pura chehra bigaar dia.
Onir: Achcha? Tab to bohot "hehe haha" kar rahi thi. Ab mai hansu?
Purvi: Onir!
Onir: What! I know my name is Onir.
Purvi and Onir bursts into laughter. Sachin, Savita and Shonali also laughs. Arjun is burning on fire of anger.

1:50pm
Kirloskar Industries
Ovi and Rohit comes out of DK's cabin.
Rohit: Agar phirse calls aya to mujhe batana.
Ovi: Thik hai.
Rohit gets a call from Soham.
Rohit: Hey...Soham.
Ovi: Did you say Soham?
Rohit: (to Ovi)Yup!
Soham hears Ovi's voice.
Soham: Rohit kya tu Ovi ke saath hai?
Rohit: (to Soham)Haan. Tu use janta hai?
Soham: Vo meri behen hai.
Rohit: (to Soham)Oh.
Soham: Tune lunch kia?
Rohit: (to Soham)No.
Soham: Ovi se puchto ussne lunch kia ki nehi.
Rohit: (to Ovi)Tumne lunch kia?
Ovi: Kabse aapke saath hi to hu. Lunch nehi kia.
Rohit: (to Soham)Nehi ussne bhi nehi kia.
Soham: Great! Ek kaam kar tu Ovi ko leke Cafe Inn aja.
Rohit: (to Soham)Waha kyun?
Soham: Ek saath lunch karenge.
Rohit: (to Soham)Thik hai. Chal milte hai. Bye.
Rohit cuts the call.
Ovi: Aap Soham dada ke dost hai?
Rohit: Hmmm. Chalo, Soham ne tumhe saath leke Cafe Inn pohochne ke liye bola hai.
Ovi gets a big smile hearing Cafe Inn's name.
Ovi: Cafe Inn?! That's my fav restaurant! I love that place!
Rohit: That's my fav too!
Ovi: Really?
Rohit: Hmmm. Ab chale nehito Soham dantega.
Ovi: Let's go!
Rohit and Ovi leaves for Cafe Inn.

2:15pm
Cafe Inn
Rohit and Ovi reaches the place and sits on a table. Rohit gets a message from Soham.
Message from Soham: Sorry Ro! Can't come! Last minute pe Boss ne kaam de dia... Phir kabhi ek saath lunch karenge... I can't come but tum dono zarur lunch karna! Sorry again.
Rohit: Ah...Soham is not coming.
Ovi: But why?
Rohit: Kuch kaam ke wajah se nehi asakta.
Ovi: Oh... To hum bhi chalte hai.
Ovi is getting up but Rohit holds her hand and stops her. Ovi feels a bit uncomfortable, Rohit realizes and leaves her hand.
Rohit: Vo...ye tumhara fav jagah hai aur mera bhi ye fav jagah hai to luncg karne hi jate hai na...
Ovi: O...Okay.
Ovi sits again. A waiter comes.
Waiter: Can i have the order please?
Rohit: Hmmm. Ovi you order first.
Ovi: Okay. Ummm...one Bruschetta Alla Rucola, Crostini and Spring Salad. Now you order Rohit.
Rohit: For me...Bruschetta and Casear Salad.
Waiter: Any Beverages?
Ovi: Cold Tea Coffee with Chocolate.
Rohit: Ice Cappuccino.
Waiter: Thank you.
Waiter leaves.
Ovi: Tell something about you.
Rohit: Like what?
Ovi: Okay i'll you about you.
Rohit: Hmmm.
Ovi: Aap kaha ke ho?
Rohit: Pune.
Ovi: Family mei kaun kaun hai?
Rohit: Noone. Mom-Dad do saal pehle ek accident mei...
Ovi: I am so sorry.
Rohit: It's okay.
Ovi: Married?
Rohit: Not yet.
Ovi: Girlfriend?
Rohit: No.
Ovi: What! You don't have any girlfriend! Unbelievable...
Rohit: Wh...why?
Ovi: Aap ko dekhke lagta nehi aapki koi girlfriend nehi hai.
Rohit: Kya kare nehi hai koi bhi...Mujhe to kaam se phursat hi nehi milta.
Ovi: Hmmm. Friends?
Rohit: Sure.
Both shakes hands.
Ovi: Aap Soham dada ke bohot achche dost hai na?
Rohit: Wait. We are friends right? Then why 'aap'?
Ovi: Okay okay. Aaj se no 'aap'! Aap...
Rohit: Again 'aap'?!
Ovi: Oh! Sorry!
Both laughs...






Hope Ovi bags a nice guy like Rohit. Especially since Arjun is the antagonist. Won't want Ovi to end up alone. Oh well! she can't as she's one of the parallel leads.
Besides, I think Shruti would look amazing with Piyush. They'll make a dazzling on-screen couple.
Piyush is an extremely handsome gentleman and I personally find Shruti very easy on the eyes.

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Originally posted by: Tarza

Chapter 4


Next day
9:17am
Khans' Tower
Ovi is coming to Kirloskar House to take her stuff. Shonali is also with her. Shonali and Ovi became good friends in these days. They are in the elevator. Elevator stops at 15th floor, door opens. Shonali is getting out, Rohit is entering. Both collides and Shonali falls in Rohit's arms.
Rohit: Hey sambhalke!
Shonali: Sorry.
Shonali stands. Ovi and Shonali gets out of the elevator. Rohit gets in. Ovi and Shonali while walking...
Shonali: Ah!
Ovi: What?
Shonali: Pata nehi mere saath kya ho raha hai.
Ovi: Ye abhi jo hua woh?
Shonali: Kal se mere saath ye ho raha hai. Kal tumhare bhai ke saath aur ab inke saath. Don't know what's happening!
Ovi: Kuch din baad tumhe sab pata chal gayega.
Shonali: Hope so!
Ovi: Waise larka handsome tha.
Shonali: Tumhe handsome laga? Shaadi karlo...(!realises what she said)
Ovi feels a little bad.
Shonali: Sorry Ovi. Galti se nikal gaya. I didn't mean to hurt you.
Ovi: Its...its perfectly fine. Tumne jo kaha sach kaha. Galti se hi sahi tumne sach kaha...
Shonali: Are you okay?
Ovi: Hmmm.(gives a self-satisfied smile)
Shonali: Ab chalo nehito office jane mei late hojaogi.
Ovi: Haan. Chalo.
Both continues to walk.

12:47pm
Office of Kirloskar Industries
DK's cabin
DK is very tensed. Manv enters.
Manav: Sir aapne mujhe bulaya?
DK: Haan. Vo...Manav subha...
Manav: Kya baat hai sir? Receptionist bhi keh rahi thi aapko subhe se kuch calls arahe hai, jisske wajah se aap pareshaan hai.
DK: Vo...koi aadmi hai jo keh raha hai ki agar humne use paise nehi dia to vo Pari ki asliyat newspapers mei chap dega.
Manav: Kya?! Aisa kaun kar sakta hai? Koi aisa kyun karega?
DK: Pata nehi. Mujhe bhi kuch samajh mei nehi araha.
Manav: Aap chinta mat kijiye. Mai police ko inform karta hu.
DK: Manav maine police ko inform kar dia hai. Bas ate hi honge.
Receptionist phones DK. DK picks up the call.
Receptionist: Sir Officers aye hai.
DK: Thik hai.
DK hangs up.
Manav: Sir, kya Ovi ko pata hai ki police kyun ayi hai?
DK: Nehi. Maine use koi aur reason bataya hai.
Manav: Thanks sir.
DK: Iss mei thanks ki kya baat hai? I understand.

Outside DK's cabin
One senior-inspector with two constables is standing in front of receptionist's desk. Ovi comes.
Ovi: Excuse me officers.
The senior-inspector turns to Ovi. He is Rohit.
Ovi: Aap?
Rohit: Tum to aaj subhe mili thi na?
Ovi: Haan. Hi! I am Ovi. Ovi Arjun Kirloskar. Nice to meet you again.
Rohit: Hi. I am Rohit. Senior-Inspector Rohit Khurrana. Nice to meet you again too.
Both shakes hand.
Ovi: Come. I'll take you to dad's cabin.
Rohit: Dad?
Ovi: Oh, i mean DivyaSagar Kirloskar, DK. I'll take you to him.
Rohit: Is he your father?
Ovi: No. He's my father-in-law.
Rohit: Oh!
Ovi: Let's go.
Rohit: Ya.
Both goes to DK's cabin.

12:50pm
Deshmukh House
Only Savita, Sachin, Shonali, Purvi and Arjun are in the house. Arjun came to meet Pari. Now, Savita is sitting in the dining table, reading a newspaper. Shonali and Purvi are working in the kitchen. Shonali is cuttinv tomatoes and Purvi is kneading dough. Onir comes back after buying vegetables. Onir goes to the kitchen and keeps the bag of vegetables on the kitchen cabinet.
Purvi: Sab kuch le aye?
Onir: Haan.
Onir holds Purvi's hands and stops her from kneading dough.
Purvi: Onir aap kya kar rahe hai?
Onir: Mai karta hu.(hearing this Shonali starts laughing)
Onir to Shonali: Tu hans kyun rahi hai?
Shonali: Aap atta gundenge ye sunke meri hansi ruk nehi rahi thi.
Onir: Chup kar nehito marr khayegi.
Purvi: Onir aapko jo kaam nehi ata vo aap kyun karna chahte hai?
Onir: Nehi ata? Tumse kisne kaha ki mujhe nehi ata. Mujhe sab ata hai.
Shonali laughs.
Shonali: Bhabhi, aap sabse keh dijiye ki aaj khana nehi banne wala.
Onir: Shonali!
Shonali: Sorry bhai.(laughs again)
Onir to Purvi: Let me do it.
Purvi: hik hai. Dekhte hai aap kya karte hai.
Purvi moves aside. Onir pours lots of water onto the unfinished dough. The dough becomes soup of flour. Shonali and Purvi gets shocked and controls their laugh. Both stays quiet and says nothing. Onir tries to knead but can't because of too much water. Now Shonali and Purvi bursts into laughter.
Purvi: (continuing laughing)Hogaya aapka?
Onir: I'm trying. Par samajh nehi araha ki ye ho kyun nehi raha?z
Shonali: (continuing laughing)Kuch aur bane na bane ate ka soup zarur banega.
Shonali and Purvi laughs more.
Onir: Tum dono bohor hans rahi ho!
Purvi: (controlling her laugh)Aap hatiye. Mai karti hu. Aapse nehi hoga.
Onir moves aside. Purvi fixes the watery dough mixture and starts kneading. Onir is sweating, he wipes sweat with his hands without noticing the stiky flour in his hands. Thw flour of his hands are now in his face. Purvi and Shonali bursts into laughter seeing this.
Onir: Aaj tum dono bohot hans rahi ho. Ek din mai bhi tum dono pe aise hi hansunga.
Purvi: Aap aisa kaam karte kyun ho jisse hume hansi aye?!
Onir tries to wipe the flour of his hands on Purvi's face but can't as Purvi starts running.
Purvi: (running)Onir kya kar rahe hai aap?
Onir: (running behind Purvi)Bohot hansi araha tha tumhe ab mai tum pe hansunga.
Purvi and Onir runs in the whole house, they are having a great time. Savita, Shonali and Sachin are happy that Purvi and Onir are happy. Arjun is gettinv irritated seeing Onir having fun with Purvi. Shonali cuts her finger as her eyes were on Purvi and Onir.
Shonali: Ahh!
Sachin goes to her.
Sachin: What happened?
Shonali: Maine dyaan nehi dia iss liye haath kat gaya.
Sachin: Chalo mere saath.
Sachin takes Shonali to the living area and bandages her finger.
Sachin: Hogaya.
Shonali: Thanks.
Sachin: You're most welcome!
Onir is still running behind Purvi. Finally he catches her and wipes the flour on her face. Others except Arjun laughs.
Savita: Tum dono aaj ate se holo khel rahe ho...
Purvi: Aaji dekhiye Onir ne kya kia. Mera pura chehra bigaar dia.
Onir: Achcha? Tab to bohot "hehe haha" kar rahi thi. Ab mai hansu?
Purvi: Onir!
Onir: What! I know my name is Onir.
Purvi and Onir bursts into laughter. Sachin, Savita and Shonali also laughs. Arjun is burning on fire of anger.

1:50pm
Kirloskar Industries
Ovi and Rohit comes out of DK's cabin.
Rohit: Agar phirse calls aya to mujhe batana.
Ovi: Thik hai.
Rohit gets a call from Soham.
Rohit: Hey...Soham.
Ovi: Did you say Soham?
Rohit: (to Ovi)Yup!
Soham hears Ovi's voice.
Soham: Rohit kya tu Ovi ke saath hai?
Rohit: (to Soham)Haan. Tu use janta hai?
Soham: Vo meri behen hai.
Rohit: (to Soham)Oh.
Soham: Tune lunch kia?
Rohit: (to Soham)No.
Soham: Ovi se puchto ussne lunch kia ki nehi.
Rohit: (to Ovi)Tumne lunch kia?
Ovi: Kabse aapke saath hi to hu. Lunch nehi kia.
Rohit: (to Soham)Nehi ussne bhi nehi kia.
Soham: Great! Ek kaam kar tu Ovi ko leke Cafe Inn aja.
Rohit: (to Soham)Waha kyun?
Soham: Ek saath lunch karenge.
Rohit: (to Soham)Thik hai. Chal milte hai. Bye.
Rohit cuts the call.
Ovi: Aap Soham dada ke dost hai?
Rohit: Hmmm. Chalo, Soham ne tumhe saath leke Cafe Inn pohochne ke liye bola hai.
Ovi gets a big smile hearing Cafe Inn's name.
Ovi: Cafe Inn?! That's my fav restaurant! I love that place!
Rohit: That's my fav too!
Ovi: Really?
Rohit: Hmmm. Ab chale nehito Soham dantega.
Ovi: Let's go!
Rohit and Ovi leaves for Cafe Inn.

2:15pm
Cafe Inn
Rohit and Ovi reaches the place and sits on a table. Rohit gets a message from Soham.
Message from Soham: Sorry Ro! Can't come! Last minute pe Boss ne kaam de dia... Phir kabhi ek saath lunch karenge... I can't come but tum dono zarur lunch karna! Sorry again.
Rohit: Ah...Soham is not coming.
Ovi: But why?
Rohit: Kuch kaam ke wajah se nehi asakta.
Ovi: Oh... To hum bhi chalte hai.
Ovi is getting up but Rohit holds her hand and stops her. Ovi feels a bit uncomfortable, Rohit realizes and leaves her hand.
Rohit: Vo...ye tumhara fav jagah hai aur mera bhi ye fav jagah hai to luncg karne hi jate hai na...
Ovi: O...Okay.
Ovi sits again. A waiter comes.
Waiter: Can i have the order please?
Rohit: Hmmm. Ovi you order first.
Ovi: Okay. Ummm...one Bruschetta Alla Rucola, Crostini and Spring Salad. Now you order Rohit.
Rohit: For me...Bruschetta and Casear Salad.
Waiter: Any Beverages?
Ovi: Cold Tea Coffee with Chocolate.
Rohit: Ice Cappuccino.
Waiter: Thank you.
Waiter leaves.
Ovi: Tell something about you.
Rohit: Like what?
Ovi: Okay i'll you about you.
Rohit: Hmmm.
Ovi: Aap kaha ke ho?
Rohit: Pune.
Ovi: Family mei kaun kaun hai?
Rohit: Noone. Mom-Dad do saal pehle ek accident mei...
Ovi: I am so sorry.
Rohit: It's okay.
Ovi: Married?
Rohit: Not yet.
Ovi: Girlfriend?
Rohit: No.
Ovi: What! You don't have any girlfriend! Unbelievable...
Rohit: Wh...why?
Ovi: Aap ko dekhke lagta nehi aapki koi girlfriend nehi hai.
Rohit: Kya kare nehi hai koi bhi...Mujhe to kaam se phursat hi nehi milta.
Ovi: Hmmm. Friends?
Rohit: Sure.
Both shakes hands.
Ovi: Aap Soham dada ke bohot achche dost hai na?
Rohit: Wait. We are friends right? Then why 'aap'?
Ovi: Okay okay. Aaj se no 'aap'! Aap...
Rohit: Again 'aap'?!
Ovi: Oh! Sorry!
Both laughs...





Double dhamal. What a bonus for me!
PuNir moments were really enjoyable.
Oh! and Ovi- Rohit. They're so cute together. And for the first time in a really long time Ovi seems genuinely happy. Hope the same happens in the soap and Ovi finds a caring partner there.

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Chapter 5


Same day
4:50pm
Dehradun
Royal Palace of Raghuvanshis'
Study of the King
King Rudra and Yuvraj Udhishtir is sitting in study, discussing about their business. A staff of the Royal Palace comes running to them.
Rudra: Kya hua? Aise bhag kyun rahe ho?
Staff: Mujhe maaf kijiye maharaj. Baat hi kuch aisi hai.
Udhishtir: Kya baat hai?
Staff: 25 saal pehle jo aurat aapke bare bete aur beti ko leke bhagi thi vo pakri gayi hai.
Rudra and Udhishtir became very very happy.
Rudra: Kya?!! Tum sach keh rahe ho?
Staff: Haan maharaj. Mai bilkul sach keh raha hu.
Udhishtir: Matlab mera bhai aur meri behen ab wapas ayenge!(very happy)
Rudra: Tumne mujhe bohot bari khush khabri sunai hai. Aaj mai sabko bonus dunga.
Staff: Sukriya maharaj.
Rudra: Tum jao aur uss aurat ko bhagne matt dena!
Staff leaves.
Rudra: (calling)Sneha!! Anupriya!! Jaldi ao!!
Sneha and Anupriya comes running.
Sneha: Aapko kya hua?
Rudra: Bohot bari khush khabri hai!
Anupriya: Kaisi khush khabri, babasa?
Udhishtir: Ananya aur Jeet bhaisa ko jisne kidnap kia tha usska pata chal gaya hai!
Hearing this tears rolls from Sneha's eyes.
Anupriya: (happy)Sach!
Sneha: Ab mera Jeet aur Ananya ghar wapas ajayenge!
Rudra; Haan.

5:30pm
Jail of the Royal Palace
The lady of kidnapped Ananya and Jeet is in a cell. Rudra and Udhishtir comes with a 10 staff and stands in front of the cell. Rudra is very angry, his eyes are red in anger.
Rudra: Kaha hai Ananya aur Jeet?
Lady: Mujhe nehi pata.
Rudra: Tune churaya tha mere bete-beti ko! Tu to humare mehel mei kaam karti thi na, kyun kia tune?!!
Lady's name is Kajri.
Kajri: Maine unhe churaya zarur par mujhe nehi pata vo dono kaha hai.
Rudra: Tune unke saath kya kia?
Kajri: Mai unko leke Kolkata chali gayi thi phir ek din mai unko ek chay ke dukan ke pas chor ke gayi to wapas ake dekha to vo waha nehi the. As-pas dhoond ne ke baad maine dekha ki ek aurat aur ek aadmi unke saath khel rahe the. To maine socha mai Ananya aur Jeet ko leke kya karungi, usse achcha hai unhe uss aurat aur aadmi ke saath chor deti hu. Aur mai wahase chali gayi. Do saal baad pata chala ki uss aurat aur aadmi ka accident ho gaya hai aur vo dono mare gaye hai. Phir Ananya aur Jeet ka kya hua mujhe nehi pata!
Rudra: Tune mere bete aur beti ko churaya tha iss wajah se tujhe chora nehi jayega! Yehi pe tu saregi!
Rudra to a staff: Kajri se pata leke Kolkata mei jake puchtach karo. Waha se kuch zarur pata chalega.
Staff: Jaisa aap kahe maharaj.
Rudra and Udhishtir leaves and 5 staff follows them.





You astound me.
Each and every time you manage to surpass my expectations. And believe me, I do have sky-high expectations from you.
Seems like Onir and Shonali are the missing Jeet- Ananya..
But I personally wouldn't mind if Purvi turns out to be the long lost princess and Rohit the prince. They'll be siblings too.
Am I giving you ideas?
Nay! Perhaps just want Rohit to be in the midst of every small subplot. Oh! am I a teeny-weeny bit biased in love (with Piyush)? Okay, no maybe, a lot more than a teeny weeny bit.

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